Here are my thoughts:
The only part that has two paragraphs is part one, "Meter", so I think that it would be better if the two paragraphs were combined to keep the article uniform throughout.
BushMaid wrote:
Whatever meter you choose to begin with, stick to it. Try not to deviate from the meter you set for yourself, otherwise the poem will not flow as easily or as correctly when it’s read.
I think the second sentence here could be shortened and combined with the previous sentence, perhaps like this:
BushMaid wrote:
Whatever meter you choose to begin with, stick to it, or else the poem may not flow correctly when read.
BushMaid wrote:
Often it only takes the sight of one rhyming word to help you reconstruct a whole line.
I think you should take the "you" out of this sentence, like this:
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Often it only takes the sight of one rhyming word to help reconstruct a whole line.
There may have been one or two other instances like this, where a "you" in present tense felt awkward.
BushMaid wrote:
If I must suggest two tools for you as a poet: it would be these ones!
This line seems unnecessary. Perhaps remove it and replace it with the first line of the paragraph, like this:
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4. Use a thesaurus and rhyming dictionary. Do you have a word that is perfect, yet it won’t rhyme? A thesaurus may come up with a word of similar meaning that will fit your purpose. Need a rhyme for a second, third, or fourth line that doesn’t gel with the first? Internet rhyming dictionaries are priceless. Often it only takes the sight of one rhyming word to help reconstruct a whole line. These two tools are invaluable to a poet.
Overall, it's a concise and effective article about the basics of writing poetry.
