This is my first shot at this so please help...
I am thinking of doing Frodo from Lord of The Rings...
Eyes: Piercing, like a knights dagger...

Hair: Black like a raven's breast...

Mouth:Tight, like a pulled bow string...

Stature: Bent like an old man yet proud like a king...

Spirit: Adventurous like a raging river...

Soul: Strong and unyielding like a mighty oak...

Help please...! I am in desperate need of your services!

This is a great start, Alina!

You get the idea of using metaphors, which is really good. The next step is to work on sub-categories. I have a post about writing a firstX map in the main Essence area if you want to take a look at it. Also, looking at others' maps will help a lot too.

Thanks a lot! I looked at yours right after I posted this, and saw I needed some sub-categories...