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Aragorn
 Post subject: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 2nd, 2011, 9:41 pm 
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On a stage, right behind a black curtain
Stood dolls of light incarnate
The puppet master smiled and was certain
That the crowd’s fears would abate
Once they saw each tiny innocent smile
On faces so young and pale
Once the puppets spoke, negating all guile
The story they were to tell
Up went the curtain, there the stage of white
Where angelic voices soared
The crowd enthralled by the children of light
Let past warnings be ignored
The puppet master smiled, whispering words
Watching his child puppets play
In the shadows crept the ones who had heard
And got their task underway
The crowd was smiling, laughing, and crying
The beauty leaving them awed
They did not see, their perception dying
That around them dark things crawled
The shadows kissed their new prey with delight
Fleeing as the curtain fell
The crowd left, a darkness over their sight
Believing that all was well
But in the night, as their hearts beat faster
They woke to a dreadful sound
Caught in the web of the puppet master
Laughter echoed all around

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 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 12:11 am 
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*slackjaw* :o That is an awesome poem.

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 12:43 am 
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Thank you, BushMaid. :D

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Bethany Faith
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 6:41 am 
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Wow... :shock: That is amazingly creepy... Me likes! :rofl:
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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 2:14 pm 
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Thank you, Bethany. :D

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 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 2:31 pm 
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That is amazing, Jonathan! Wow, it's very sobering. I love it! It's always awesome when you post your work. :D

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 3:18 pm 
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Thank you, Aniese. :D

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Airianna Valenshia
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 8:38 pm 
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*Grins * I have always really liked this one, I am glad everyone now gets to see it. :D

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 9:30 pm 
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I'm glad you like it, Airianna. Thank you. :D

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Suiauthon Mimetes
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 10:15 pm 
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:shock: Wow... that is amazing. I love this poem. :D

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 3rd, 2011, 10:17 pm 
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Thank you, Suiauthon. :D

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 7th, 2011, 12:20 am 
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So... is this ready?

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Airianna Valenshia
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 8th, 2011, 5:23 pm 
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Power outages. :P Gotta love them. Especially when they last multiple days.

Yes, this is. I was gonna call Philli and tell her to have you post this, but my phone battery was dead, and I couldn't get her number to come up. :P
What a mess!

I am so sorry for the delay. Please post this epic masterpiece, Jonathan!!!

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The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 8th, 2011, 11:57 pm 
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It's mostly my fault for not being more proactive on getting it up. :roll:

It's posted now. :D

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Lady Elanor
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PostPosted: October 9th, 2011, 5:42 am 
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Wow, this is an amazing poem, Jon. :shock: I love it.

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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 9th, 2011, 2:34 pm 
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Thank you, Lady Elanor. :D

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Airianna Valenshia
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 11th, 2011, 7:48 pm 
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Not your fault at all.


Okay, archive worthy now!

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The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)

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Aragorn
 Post subject: Re: The Puppet Master
PostPosted: October 11th, 2011, 7:51 pm 
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Okay. To the archive it goes. :D

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