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 Post subject: Anisha
PostPosted: August 23rd, 2011, 5:26 pm 
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This was my first essence map ever - please tell me what you think. My format is somewhat wacky, but it worked for me.

Anisha - 12 years old.

Body--------------------willow / lioness / pale green grass with a summer breeze running through it / Indian Princess
Eyes----------- Ferns / Tall Grass / Chiseled Steel / Ice barely melted / Tiger’s eyes piercing through the grass at its victim /
Hair------------ Spiced butter / Fall / an oak wood chest lined with gold / bow hair / prairie grass
Skin------------ Sprinkled with cinnamon / Spiced butter (again)
Smile---------- Hostess while her rolls are being raved o’er / Crape Myrtle / Mother as friends comment on her well behaved children.

Mind----------------------
Strength--------Steel on Steel / file cabinet / typyst / Sailor / infestigator / Sherlock Holmes
Humor-----------lawyer / CEO / convicted criminal who decides to have some fun in trial / smart-aleck


Soul----------------
Pride-----------Arched neck of show horse / spatting cat / mother of football star / Owner of a show horse
Leadership-------Hen with chicks / Army General / 6th grade teacher / finger snaps /
Defensiveness---Brick Wall / Slammed door
Kindness--------- Slap on the back / a piece of cornbread passed through the bars after a long pause / A sudden wink / the good-natured scolding of a mother

There it is! I might post her hyperactive brother as well, but we'll see!

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 Post subject: Re: Anisha
PostPosted: August 25th, 2011, 5:01 pm 
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I love it, Phylis! It creates such a clear picture of Anisha! I feel like I know her already. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Anisha
PostPosted: August 26th, 2011, 10:09 am 
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Hey, thanks, Milly!
And she's also nice. Not sure if I got that across.

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"I don't agree with you," said the bachelor.
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 Post subject: Re: Anisha
PostPosted: August 27th, 2011, 11:00 am 
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Phylis Patschske wrote:
Hey, thanks, Milly!
And she's also nice. Not sure if I got that across.

Yep, I think you got it across nicely. :) Essence maps are so neat in that they can display so many aspects of someone's personality in one place! :dieshappy:

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 Post subject: Re: Anisha
PostPosted: August 28th, 2011, 2:35 pm 
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No kidding!

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