These are some of my characters for my new novel, Alterez: The Alliance.
Hope you like them!

Name: Vardair
Age: 18
Species: Elvish
Clothing: Elvish Royal Scout Armor
Hair: Blonde, long (to the upper back)
Eyes: Piercing blue
Personality: Fast-paced thinking and always ready to laugh, but serious and calm when he wants to be
Weapons: Elvish Long Bow, 2 Elvish Dual Bladed Swords
Other: An A-rua Scout assigned to the A-rua Ambassador's convoy

Name: Will Hurst
Age: 17
Species: Human
Clothing: Drasil Wizard's and Dragonkeeper's Garb
Hair: Red with Black Streaks
Eyes: Brown
Personality: Curious and a watch-out attitude, but more often calm and watchful
Weapons: Forge's Staff, Twohanded Dragon Sword
Other: A Drasil Wizard and Dragonkeeper that was commanded to meet the Elvish Ambassador and to strengthen the convoy

Name: Cladel
Age: 17
Species: Dwarf
Clothing: Coreda Sorceress Robe
Hair: Red
Eyes: Blue
Personality: Secretive and Surprising
Weapons: Sorceress Staff, Throwing Axes
Other: A Coreda Sorceress who is commanded to meet the Elvish Ambassador and to strengthen the convoy

Name: Sarin
Age: 21
Species: Elvish
Clothing: Royal Ambassador's Dress
Hair: Brown, Long, Flowing
Eyes: Leaf-green
Personality: Get-to-the-point personality
Weapons: Elvish Shot-Sword
Other: The Royal A-rua Ambassador headed to Drasil and then to Coreda

Name: Har'gan
Age: 25
Species: Feran
Clothing: Brown Britches
Hair: Gray with a Red Stripe
Eyes: Red
Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky
Weapons: Giant Broadsword
Other: Har'gan is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides.

Name: Graear
Age: 25
Species: Feran
Clothing: Blue Britches
Hair: Black With Red Stripe
Eyes: Green
Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky
Weapons: Giant Broadsword
Other: Graear is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides.

Name: Furhi
Age: 25
Species: Feran
Clothing: Red Britches
Hair: Brown with Red Stripe
Eyes: Blue
Personality: Mischievous and Sneaky
Weapons: Giant Broadsword
Other: Furhi is a Feran who, like his two twins, are bad at the beginning, but later switch sides.

A-rua, Drasil, and Coreda are countries that unite together to fight against the three other contries, the Empire of Sheol, the Empire of Lucifer, and the Empire of Abbadon.
In the novel, Vardair, Will Hurst, and Cladel join together as a team to fight the three Empires and to help join the three countries... despite their differences.

Here is some more characters that I have created(...hope somone posts ...)

Name:Naltur
Age:18
Species:Centuar
Clothing:Mail Shirt with leather underneath
Hair:Brown Fur; Black Hair,long
Eyes:Blue
Personality:Serious and sure of himself, always ready to do what ever it takes to get the job done
Weapons:2 Heavy Longswords
Other:A Guardian level centuar who was captured by Sheol

Name:Erayle
Age:18
Species:Centuar
Clothing:Leather Shirt
Hair:Brown Fur: Brown Hair, long
Eyes:Blue
Personality:Optimistic and ready to do what it takes to do a good job on something she has set her heart on doing
Weapons:Centuar's Bow
Other:The twin of Naltur who aquires help from Will Hurst to free Naltur

Name:Athdyn
Age:7
Species:Dragon
Clothing:NaN
Hair:NaN Scales: White with Blue Stripe
Eyes:Green Flame
Personality:has an I'm the biggest and toughest guy around attitude
Weapons:Flamebreath, Icebreath, Poisonbreath, Spit, etc.
Other:A miniurature dragon; Will Hurst is Athdyn's keeper

Name:Ild'ir
Age:7
Species:Dragon
Clothing:NaN
Hair:NaN Scales: Purple with Green Stripe
Eyes:Blue Flame
Personality:Optimistic, logical, and hilarious
Weapons:Same as Athdyn
Other:A miniature dragon; Twin of Athdyn; Will Hurst is Ild'ir's keeper

Name:Rad'ril
Age:5
Species:Dragon
Clothing:NaN
Hair:NaN Scales:Gold with Black Stripe
Eyes:Flaming Red
Personality:Confident and Powerful
Weapons:Same as Athdyn, except more powerful
Other:A Full size Dragon;Will Hurst is Rad'ril's keeper

That took me a little while to read; you have a lot of characters! But they all seemed to be pretty well developed. Now you should try fractalling them with Sir Emeth's system! (I'll warn you ahead of time: it takes a LONG time to fractal even one character!)

I was wondering... which ones are your main characters?

Will Hurst, Cladel, and Vardair are the main characters, but I'm using them all a lot in the novel.

Fractal means...?

I'm not sure that I can explain fratalling well... I think Sir Emeth has something about it on his blog. And there's a post on character fractalling in the character development forum!

As she said, there are several places on the forum where we talk about fractalling. There is a thread in this room here called Our Deep Character Fractalling System. Check that out.

Fractalling is, in essence, taking a simple idea and iteratively making it more complex by small, repeated actions. It makes thinking through large and complex things much easier.

Wow, it must have taken you a while to come up with all these characters! Good job! It took me quite a while to read them all