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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 7:39 am 
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Well, the large forest in my world (I will post a map on the Geography and Flora page when I finish it) is called the Betsalela forest (it is two words that mean 'shadow' mixed together. So it's the Shadow forest) Anyway, I am thinking of writing about a small 'tribe' in the forest known as the Betsalela Keepers, they would be mini dragons. (around the size of a normal stuffed bear) These dragons would be the 'Keepers' of the forest. I haven't really gotten much detail into this subject, but I wanted to see what everyone thought before I started writing about them. :D

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Would they be cute? or ugly? I think it's a good idea :D

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Well me being a person who likes 'cute' things, they would be more or less like a smaller, cuter verison then the large dragons in my book. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Betsalela Keepers
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If they are sentinent, then this is the right place, otherwise, you might want to have put it in Creatures.

That kind of asks my first question. How intelligent are they? Would they lean toward evil or good? Are they the only creatures in the forest?

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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:08 pm 
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Oh ok, then this probably should be in the Creatures page.... To answer you questions, they would probably be fairly smart, though they are not as smart as humans, and would have certain limits on their knowledge because of that. Besides birds and the normal type of woodland creatures, they would be the only animals in the forests. :D Also, they would probably lean more towards the Good side.

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 Post subject: Re: Betsalela Keepers
PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:12 pm 
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I might be able to move it, but I think you need a Marcher Lord of Sir Emeth to move it. The Marcher Lords are the ones with the yellow names.

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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:13 pm 
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Nope, you need a Marcher Lord, sorry.

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Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:16 pm 
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Alright. Well, I will see if I can find out how to do that...

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I would just send a pm (private message) to Sir Emeth. Just go up to the top where it says UCP and click on that. There should be sum tabs on the right and one should say something about private messaging. You should be able to take it from there.

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Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Wings from above: Developing Stage

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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:21 pm 
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Now I know where to go if I need help! thanks :D Good luck Serena ;)

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Wait! I can move it! Do you want me to?

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
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"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
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Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

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PostPosted: April 27th, 2010, 3:38 pm 
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Sure. I will send another PM back to Sir Emeth saying you have already done it.

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There ya go! :D

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"Many who live deserve death, and some that die deserve life. Can you give it to them? Do not be so eager to deal out death and judgment, for even the Wise cannot see all ends."
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"When you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, however improbable, must be the truth"
-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Heroes and Demons series:
Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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PostPosted: April 28th, 2010, 6:53 am 
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Can I say "YAY!".... or is that too much ;)

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Thank you very much Griffin :D

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Lady Terra wrote:
Can I say "YAY!".... or is that too much ;)


Go ahead!

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Thank you very much Griffin :D


You're welcome! :D

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-Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, (in Sherlock Holmes)
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Lost Son: 3,782 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=1844
Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Other books:

Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

Yeah, most of my books are in the development stage, but I have a lot of ideas! :P


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My main character is a Dragon Keeper who, obviously, keeps dragons. Athdyn, one of his dragons is about the size of a small cat. He can send photos/visual and thoughts, but yes, he is not as smart as humans, elves, and dwarves. So yes, I think your idea is a very good one.


...I took the mini dragon idea from a book that was lent to me by one of the youth member's mom at my church... I will get the name for you. I think she stole the same idea from some other writer too.

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So they're meant to be cute? Or are they the Reepicheeps of the dragon race? ;)

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Is the book by 'Donita K. Paul' because she has mini dragons in her book... which is probably where my mind pulled the idea from..

Well, they are supposed to look like mini dragons, and the dragons in my world aren't scary, though they aren't fluffy cute either... probably in between cute and scary. lol. :D

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So they're meant to be cute? Or are they the Reepicheeps of the dragon race? ;)


I don't think Reepicheep would take that as a complement. ;)

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Red Son: 1,726 words http://www.holyworlds.org/forum/viewtop ... 117&t=3008
Prodigal Son: Developing Stage
Grateful Son: Developing Stage
The Setting Sons: Developing Stage
All titles are tentative
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Tobias the Swift: Developing Stage

Wings from above: Developing Stage

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Yeah :) probably not

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