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 Post subject: Should I Explain the Doppelgangers or Not?...
PostPosted: March 25th, 2010, 9:48 pm 
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I'm currently editing my first novel, "A Day in the Live(s) of Whitaker Riley" and I have a question: In the story, Whitaker (the main character) discovers that there are two other versions of him in the world. My dilemma is whether or not I should try to make up a less-than-cheesy explanation for this bizarre phenomenon or leave it a mystery? An explanation would not be vital to the story, but do you think readers will want to know?

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 Post subject: Re: Should I Explain the Doppelgangers or Not?...
PostPosted: March 26th, 2010, 7:00 pm 
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I think you should leave it a mystery. :D In my experience, readers are more interested in reading a book if there are things about it that they can't understand.

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 Post subject: Re: Should I Explain the Doppelgangers or Not?...
PostPosted: March 30th, 2010, 8:57 pm 
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Or you might take a rather Tolkien-like track: Only have a suspicion yourself.

The Palantri, for example, are never fully explained, and Tolkien himself never appears to posses an explanation but instead "suspects" that certain factors may operate in such-and-such manner.

You could just have a suspicions of how the Doppelgangers may operate but not know for sure, or not know the entirety.

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For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

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 Post subject: Re: Should I Explain the Doppelgangers or Not?...
PostPosted: April 2nd, 2010, 12:28 pm 
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As long as you know generally how it works, then you probably don't need it in the story!

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 Post subject: Re: Should I Explain the Doppelgangers or Not?...
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Oh, I had forgotten that I posted this! Turns out I decided to make the "doppelgangers" not really other versions of Whitaker. Now they're the result of a... unique family situation, which is a big part of the background to his story. :D

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