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 Post subject: Kuldrak - DUELS
PostPosted: April 5th, 2011, 11:21 pm 
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I need to think through how my werewolf fights and I thought the best way to do that would be to have a fight on HW, but Character Introductions is just too confusing. This is my first fight so an explanation of the rules (if there are any) would be helpful. (Also don't expect me to write back automatically, I don't usually get on till after 11 at night.)

Kuldrak: *looks around* It has been too long since I have enjoyed the taste of blood.

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PostPosted: April 6th, 2011, 8:43 am 
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Kaida: It isn't long since I've had the pleasure of spilling it.

This is Kaida, she likes to fight and uses a blade about the length of her arm if you needed to know. She can't die but can be very badly wounded so it seemed like a good match to me. I don't know about rules, let's just go for it.

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PostPosted: April 8th, 2011, 11:55 pm 
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Kuldrak: *starts to circle Kaida still in human form * The pleasure is all my mine.

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PostPosted: April 9th, 2011, 12:03 pm 
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Ooh! *grabs popcorn*

Yay, Mark! See, Character Development isn't such a scary forum after all :D

*watches duel*

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PostPosted: April 9th, 2011, 9:05 pm 
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Me: Popcorn!! *grabs some popcorn* :D
:roll: You were the one who told me to stay away from Character Introductions.

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PostPosted: April 9th, 2011, 10:11 pm 
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Kaida: Not if you stick with that ugly mug of yours. *circles in return twisting her sword in her right hand* I'm just itching to rid the world of that crime against humanity.

Me: She likes insults by the way...

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PostPosted: April 9th, 2011, 10:57 pm 
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Kuldrak: *suddenly stops circling and flashes a toothy grin* This 'ugly mug' has tasted the blood of far worse and far better than you.

Me: he loves the trading of insults

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PostPosted: April 11th, 2011, 11:13 am 
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PostPosted: April 11th, 2011, 11:24 pm 
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Seer wrote:
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PostPosted: April 16th, 2011, 8:04 pm 
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I'm waiting for Riniel.
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PostPosted: April 18th, 2011, 4:39 pm 
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PostPosted: April 18th, 2011, 4:50 pm 
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Me: *comes int wearing sunglasses and eating a doughnut* Sorry I'm late, where were we? Oh yeah.

Kaida: I don't doubt that. Did it take you as long to work up the guts to attack them as it's taking you to attack me?

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PostPosted: April 18th, 2011, 6:46 pm 
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Riniel Jasmina wrote:
Me: *comes int wearing sunglasses and eating a doughnut* Sorry I'm late, where were we? Oh yeah.

Kaida: I don't doubt that. Did it take you as long to work up the guts to attack them as it's taking you to attack me?

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PostPosted: April 18th, 2011, 7:14 pm 
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Ren Sivler, Prince Guardian of the Silv Scepter, crouches behind a tree thirty paces from the stalemate, while his counter part Delis Drakkenhof raises his hands from the shore on the other side of the pond. As a towering wave curls towards the two obtuse figures circling in the brush, Ren readies his blade. I could slice them both in half from here, but this will be much more fun.

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Kuldrak tenses almost imperceptibly as a fresh breeze blows from the direction of the pond. After a moment of thought he grins even wider and starts circling again, finally coming to a stop in a position that puts him in-between a tall tree and Kaida in-between the pond and himself.

Kuldrak: I see you won't be baited as easy as they were. Shall we begin? *morphs into a werewolf in front of the tree*

Me: @everyone For clarification the 'they' Kuldrak is refering to are the people that are 'far better' and 'far worse' than Kaida.

@Elanhil :roll: You could have at least asked for some popcorn. *hands Elanhil a bag of popcorn so that he will stop stealing mine *

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Kaida: So were you talking virtue when you said far better or did making you do the work for a change earn me some extra credit? *positions her right leg behind her left for stability*

Me: Yeah, you shoulda seen her grades in school... *sets up fried dough stand to make some cash on the side* What? I may be here for a while!

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PostPosted: April 19th, 2011, 10:15 pm 
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Kuldrak: *ignores insult* I congratulate you. You are the first in awhile that promises to give me an exercise. *approaches Kaida while keeping body tense*

Me: Maybe I should start selling popcorn...

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Kaida: I'm not one for making promises. Ya never know, I might get struck by lightning and then you'd win by default. Stranger things have happened, like you apparently winning fights when all you do is stand there. *Her sword hand remains extended but she keeps a generally limp stance*

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PostPosted: April 20th, 2011, 11:52 pm 
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Kuldrak: Then the lightning would be doing you a favor: it would spare you the long, agonizing pain I will give you. *starts running at Kaida, decreasing the distance between them quickly, and then pounces at Kaida torso*

Me: Get your hot, buttery fresh popcorn! Buy five buckets of popcorn and get one free cupcake with extra frosting and sprinkles!

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PostPosted: April 21st, 2011, 11:10 am 
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Kaida: Yeah, then I wouldn't have to hear you yappin' like a chihuahua anymore-*holds her blade at the height of her sternum and leans hard into the blow*

Me: Fried dough! Get your fried dough!

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PostPosted: April 22nd, 2011, 12:44 am 
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Me: How is Kaida holding her blade? I mean is she holding it with the flat side facing Kuldrak or not?

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Me: Oh, sorry. She's holding it like that --- horizontal like. Pointing right where Kuldrak is lunging.

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Me: So like BushMaid's signature sword? (Just want to make sure I'm understanding this.)

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Kuldrak: *twists body in mid-air right and down and snaps at Kaida's left leg*

Me: Is that descriptive enough?

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Kuldrak: *twists body in mid-air right and down and snaps at Kaida's left leg*

Me: Is that descriptive enough?


"right and down" could be cut without losing anything. Plus, is this a sword he's snapping? What does it do to her leg?

(Sorry I haven't been involved in this since I barged in.)

The tide cast a shadow over Kaida's face. Kuldrak jumped to take advantage, twisting in mid air... With the two distracted, Ren jumped over the bush to catch his floating prize.

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I mean that Kuldrak twists his body in a way that sends his body towards Kaida's left leg. (which would be twisting in the general direction of down and right)

How does the tide send a shadow across Kaida's face when the tide is coming from behind her?

And what is floating?

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I had the tide on the side of them, but they aren't close enough to the water to notice, or are just engrossed in each other.

As for twisting down and right, you could say he twisted to strike her leg and we would get it.

His prize is still unknown. You'll see. ;)

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Kaida: *follows Kuldrak's jaws with a twist of her sword, just catching his snout with a slice before he has a chance to bite*

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Me: How severe is the slice? A bare nick? or deep slice?

Maybe the prize is fried dough...

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 Post subject: Re: Werewolf fight
PostPosted: April 24th, 2011, 8:15 pm 
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Me: Enough to knock him away from her and give a moment for recovery... I left that one open a little.

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 Post subject: Re: Werewolf fight
PostPosted: April 24th, 2011, 10:26 pm 
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Kuldrak: *is pushed aside by the slice so that he can't bite Kaida but manages to scratch Kaida's leg*
*considers pushing his advantage against Kaida but quickly decides against doing so because of incoming tide*
*instead running for the pair of trees mentioned earlier*
*climbs trees by launching himself at one tree and pushing off and up to the next tree etc...
*gets to top of tree and morphs into human so he can grab onto tree and weather the tide*

Me: I think Kuldrak has splatitis! *tosses Kuldrak cupcake*

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PostPosted: April 25th, 2011, 8:30 am 
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Kaida: *sheaths her blade and leans into the oncoming tide*

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PostPosted: April 29th, 2011, 5:39 pm 
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Me: *covers the fried dough stand to save the business*

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