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 Post subject: Arctax's essence
PostPosted: February 26th, 2010, 9:11 pm 
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After posting Azura's essence, I made this one for another one of my snow leopards. I ventured further into describing Arctax's spirit, which isn't to say he's got a deeper personality then Azura does ;) . Any thoughts?

Arctax:
~ Body . . . {Eyes . . . . . [color . . . . . . . (Conifer)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Dark emeralds)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A green flame)]
. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . [Expression . . . (Mystery)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Tornado’s prelude)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Glowing embers)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A hidden door to the spirit)]}
. . . . . . {Movement . . . [Strength . . . . . (A cyclone)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Waterfall)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Draft horse)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A new passion)]
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . [Agility . . . . . . (Border collie)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Liquid)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (An Arabian stallion)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A flying dragon)]}

~ Spirit
. . . . . . . . {Faith . . . . . [Trust . . . . . . . (A soldier following orders)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A child)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (The patient with the healer)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (The beta wolf)]
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . [Belief . . . . . . . (Castle built on rock)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Forged by fire and ice)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Always renewed)]}
. . . . . . . . . . . {Love . . . . .. . . . . . . . . (A vivid wildfire)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A scarlet ruby)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Melting ice)}
. . . . . . . . . {Anger . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (An erupting volcano)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A blizzard)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (An earthquake)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A frozen flame)}
. . . . . {Leadership . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (A newfound skill)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Solid grounded rock)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Protective father)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Guide in the wilderness)}

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PostPosted: February 26th, 2010, 11:18 pm 
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That was great! :)


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PostPosted: February 27th, 2010, 11:35 am 
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Nice job! I really like the detail you used describing his spirit!

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2010, 2:48 pm 
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Sweeeeet. :D I like him a lot.

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PostPosted: February 27th, 2010, 3:58 pm 
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Thanks guys!

I had fun with Arctax, he's an interesting character. I notice that my essences always seem kind of short, does anyone else think that?

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Short but rich in beautiful pictures. Not a problem. :)

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PostPosted: March 3rd, 2010, 8:39 am 
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Inesdar wrote:
So he would be a wolf right? He sounds like a rather emmotional, volitale person (canine?).


Arctax is a snow leopard. Outwardly, he's calm and steady, but inwardly, he's very passionate and emotional (especially in the love and anger areas). He tries to keep it hidden and personal. As you can probably see, I'm still getting the hang of this whole essence thing :) . Now that I examine the map a bit more, he does sound like a canine.

Come to think of it, it'd be interesting to do a essence map of my wolf character, Silvergold.

Lady Eruwaedhiel wrote:
Short but rich in beautiful pictures. Not a problem.


Thanks, Eruwaedhiel!

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It depends on which way you look at it. My primary main character is Azura (her essence is posted as well), but a lot of the story is told from Arctax's point of view, and he's my main male character. I just don't write with him as much as I do Azura because he's more difficult to portray.

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