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 Post subject: Frederick: Son of Guy of Gisbourne Earl of Huntingdon
PostPosted: January 12th, 2011, 1:35 am 
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...........{Hair [Colour (Brown-toned blonde
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 Post subject: Re: Frederick: Son of Guy of Gisbourne Earl of Huntingdon
PostPosted: January 13th, 2011, 12:22 pm 
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That's a name! I like it. :D

Your color imagery is very vivid. "An untouched beach" is my favorite.

Under Mind > Clarity, though, it says "To herself" when it should probably say "To himself," unless I'm misunderstanding.

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PostPosted: January 14th, 2011, 1:23 am 
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thanks for the little tip on the 'herself' thing...

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Lady Dusk, your Essence maps just blow me away. :)

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Thank you everyone! These comments are really a vote of confidence for me!!!

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