In my story one of the ways that witnessed to my main character Jazmin is through dreams and visions that she has. She sees some stories from the Bible play out before her.

I used the name Jesu for Jesus in my story.

That's one way to do it. If you have her come to faith, take into account how many other believers there are in Mohali for her spiritual growth.

Well, her maid was a believer. But she did not tell anything to Jazmin about it, even though she knew that she should. The maid eventually dies because she is found reading a Bible.
There is a death somewhere that will witness to one of the other main characters, the person who died was very dear to him.

Is there such a thing as the Bible in Mohali? I think we need to be careful how much we rely on visions and dreams to convey God's will.

There is the Bible in Mohali, but it is not accepted there. Whoever is found with it is either banished or killed. Killed mainly if the person becomes a follower of Jesu.

Yikes! Well...I'm just saying that the Bible is one of the biggest witnessing tools, since dreams can be pretty subjective. You might want to have your princess get a hold of one somehow. That would add more danger, too.

I do not have any princesses in my story.
There was a man that was going around and passing out Bibles. He gave one to her phoenix so that it could give it to her when she was old enough to understand it. When she is older she has a fighting exam and her opponent drops a Bible to make it look like she had one. The Elder's then learned that Jazmin was innocent.

Ah! you mentioned her maid and I assumed she was a princess. My bad!

Her maid is the person who raised her. Jazmin's parents died when she was around one year old. So her maid was there to take care of her.

What is Jazmin's status? It sounds like her maid is more of a nurse, or even an adopted mother at this point. So she has authority over Jazmin?

Well, kind of. She takes care of Jazmin like a mother would.

Well...why is she afraid to witness to Jazmin? Shouldn't she have been bringing her up to love the Lord from the start? Or was there something to keep her from doing that?

The maid had a son who had became a Christian several years ago. He was killed by the Elders because of that. The maid wants to keep her safe. She is seen crying alot because she knows that she should tell Jazmin.

AW.

Now I want to read your story! It sounds really interesting, Arwen!

Thanks.