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 Post subject: Gresh (or Greish)
PostPosted: October 28th, 2009, 8:39 pm 
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Gresh, Greish-- The physical power behind the Shadow Maker these hulking animals appear stupid, but soon prove their opponents wrong.

Despite their less than bright looks, Gresh have a culture, and style of fighting all their own, developed over years of guerilla warfare. Their favorite weapons are death flowers, throwing stars with tiny retractible barbs, that can be poisoned at will.

Gresh also have their own language, mostly a series of grunts, and sounds that are impossible to be uttered by anyone without their unique voice boxes.

Unknown to most, the Gresh are the offspring of demons and Shadow Dwarves mingling together to create their own unique race.

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Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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 Post subject: Re: Gresh (or Greish)
PostPosted: October 28th, 2009, 8:45 pm 
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Interesting. What do they look like? Who/what is the Shadow Maker?

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The Shadow Maker is yet another villain of mine. He is one of the fallen (grimace) Ffloyds, and yes, that name will TOTALLY be changed, I made it up when I was ten, and it's NOT going into the finished copy.

He has the ability to enter someone's mind without permission, and to shape shift into anything he pleases.

The Gresh are large in body, facial feature, and claws. They generally have very thick hide, and are extremely intelligent.

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Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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PostPosted: October 28th, 2009, 8:53 pm 
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The Shadow Maker sounds fascinating!

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I feel the pain. I feel the sorrow.
I feel the love. I feel the joy.
I feel the darkness. I feel the night.
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I feel hunger. I feel thirst.
I feel the dawn. I feel the dusk.
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 Post subject: Re: Gresh (or Greish)
PostPosted: October 29th, 2009, 2:43 pm 
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Well, thank you.:) I think I also forgot to mention that the Gresh completely have their own civilization, music, art, economy, etc...

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Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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PostPosted: October 29th, 2009, 3:13 pm 
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That's really interesting, Mindy!

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I feel the pain. I feel the sorrow.
I feel the love. I feel the joy.
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I feel hunger. I feel thirst.
I feel the dawn. I feel the dusk.
I feel blood. I feel death. I feel life.


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PostPosted: October 29th, 2009, 4:24 pm 
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This is a cool idea! Do you have any other posts, say about Shadow Dwarves or the Shadow Maker? 'Cause I want to read them! Nice work!

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PostPosted: October 30th, 2009, 1:24 pm 
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Well, thanks for the interest! I'll post something about the Shadow dwarves then.:)

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Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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PostPosted: November 1st, 2009, 2:47 pm 
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I originally had him as the Shadow Weaver, but decided that was too cliche. ;) I'm not sure which I like better!:D

The Greish tend to be fairly tall, around six feet anyway. They have broad features, and very large black eyes, and really thick black hair.

Their skin...is kind of like human skin, only it's a lot drier, and has they have little tiny white scales on their elbows, knees, and their feet, and hands.

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And he said unto me, My grace is sufficient for you: for my strength is made perfect in weakness. Most gladly therefore will I rather boast in my weaknesses, that the power of Christ may rest upon me. ~ 2 Corinthians 12:9

Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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PostPosted: November 2nd, 2009, 8:36 am 
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The Greish tend to be fairly tall, around six feet anyway. They have broad features, and very large eyes that are entirely black (kind of like an insects.:D), and really thick black hair.

Their skin...is kind of like human skin, only it's a lot drier, flakier and they have little tiny white scales on their elbows, knees, and their feet, and hands.

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And he said unto me, My grace is sufficient for you: for my strength is made perfect in weakness. Most gladly therefore will I rather boast in my weaknesses, that the power of Christ may rest upon me. ~ 2 Corinthians 12:9

Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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If the Greish are very intelligent beings, do they have to follow the Shadow Maker or can they choose to disobey?

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PostPosted: November 21st, 2009, 8:35 pm 
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There have been a few Greish that disobeyed, and left their people, but they were met with execution from the other side, and alienation from their own people. So they died out soon.

Now, most Gresh just accept what they were born into, because it's too hard to leave.

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And he said unto me, My grace is sufficient for you: for my strength is made perfect in weakness. Most gladly therefore will I rather boast in my weaknesses, that the power of Christ may rest upon me. ~ 2 Corinthians 12:9

Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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PostPosted: November 22nd, 2009, 6:16 pm 
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They sound intresting!
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PostPosted: November 25th, 2009, 7:20 pm 
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Well, thank you so much Ana! That's very sweet of you.:)

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And he said unto me, My grace is sufficient for you: for my strength is made perfect in weakness. Most gladly therefore will I rather boast in my weaknesses, that the power of Christ may rest upon me. ~ 2 Corinthians 12:9

Nessa- She's given up the veil, the vows she'd sworn, abandoned every effort to conform. Without a word to anyone she's gone her way alone, a dove escaping back into the storm.

Nolan- And though I don't understand why this happened, I know that I will when I look back someday, and see how you've brought beauty from ashes, and made me as gold purified through the flames.

Azriel- And who do you think you are, running round leaving scars, collecting your jar of hearts, and tearing love apart? You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul, so don't come back to me. Don't come back at all...


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