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PostPosted: June 19th, 2013, 5:15 pm 
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Here it is, finally! Tell me what you think?

Justice is—the punishment of the guilty, deserved rewards, a righteous God; the absence of mercy.

Honor is—kneeling in prayer, never quitting, doing what must be done; making the right decision.

Hope is—a quiet faith in things unseen, a chance to turn your life around; the will to continue.

Courage is what happens when you put these three things together.

From the authors of “The Sword and the Pen” comes another anthology, this time branching out to include short stories as well as poetry, drabbles, and prose that defies definition. Authors were challenged to write on one of three different topics and the result is 36 breathtaking depictions of virtue, judgment, failure, and perseverance. Let yourself be drawn into a world of battles and spaceships, werewolves and courtrooms, and the courage to stand up to it all.

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Floyd was frozen where he stood. He struggled to breathe, but the air smelled of blood and death and guilt. He tried to formulate a name, to ask, but language was meaningless, and words would not come. He tried to scream but the sound got stuck in his heart, shattered into a million pieces, and scattered to the wind.

In a world without superheroes, who will stand against the forces of evil?


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PostPosted: June 19th, 2013, 7:31 pm 
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Perfect!

I must tell you, I am so excited about the anthology. I really think we have made a step up from The Sword and Pen (though I still love that one). This one just feels like... I don't know. Maybe it's because the themes are so close to my heart. I can't wait to get a copy. :D

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

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PostPosted: June 19th, 2013, 7:45 pm 
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Absolutely beautiful. :)


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PostPosted: June 19th, 2013, 9:58 pm 
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I like it! Great job, Katie!

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PostPosted: June 20th, 2013, 5:57 am 
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Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Justice is—the punishment of the guilty, deserved rewards, a righteous God; the absence of mercy.
I do realize that it is alright technically speaking.... But one of the things I most love about God's ways is his ability to exercise mercy and justice at once. The statement 'Justice is the absence of mercy' I think could be replaced with something better.

Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Hope is—a quiet faith in things unseen, a chance to turn your life around; the will to continue.
Maybe 'quiet' could be changed for something more general? 'Steadfast' perhaps...'

Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Courage is what happens when you put these three things together.
I think this sentence could be phrased more epicly. :D 'Courage is what happens when these three things come together' maybe?

Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
and prose that defies definition
:rofl: * is curious what particular entries Katie had in mind *

Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Authors were challenged to write on one of three different topics and the result is 36 breathtaking depictions of virtue, judgment, failure, and perseverance.
I believe the flow would be better with a comma after 'topics'.

Constable Jaynin Mimetes wrote:
Let yourself be drawn into a world of battles and spaceships, werewolves and courtrooms, and the courage to stand up to it all.
It seems to make sense on first read, but something niggled me, and it actually is a bit odd under closer perusal. 'Let yourself be drawn into...the courage to stand up to it all'? Or 'Let yourself be drawn into a world of...the courage to stand up to it all'? I can't tell which is meant, and neither sense has the sentence as good as it could be. I think it needs some tweaking.

Awesome work, Katie.


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PostPosted: June 24th, 2013, 6:09 pm 
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As a note to all, I need this text finalized by tomorrow or Wednesday. That means I need it to be posted here with all of the edits completed so I can just copy and paste it into the layout.

*starts timer*

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I am Lady Vilisse Mimetes. Humble servant of the Lord our God and warrior in His name. Though my actions are feeble and prone to failure, I shall never falter in my call. I am pledged to combat those ideas that are rooted in mindsets that are contrary to my Master.
My name is outward proof of my promise to follow, closer and closer, the words and will of my Lord and Father.


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Vilisse is Quenya for a person's spirit or general personality.
Mimetes is Greek for an imitator or follower.

and so my spirit is one of a follower



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