Crafting this story. Little by little


Thanks for all the continued help

Quite unique. The trying to save the 'fallen' fallen is fitting, it seems. The sword part is rather neat too. Words or metal.


Question: As Mason and the others try to 'bat off the double-fallen, trying to return them to their original beliefs, would the count of the 'enemy' grow? Or would it stay contained within that one town? Also, how was the physical appearance of the 'converted' people changed? And my last question, does the sword follow the written words describing the Bible itself?

1. Does the count of the enemy grow?
Well bennet left the village and started his own following which means some of the original member's have left to spread there vision or message so yes their numbers are consistently going up but as Mason and the other convert some or destroy other it slows down the membership of Bennets' following. That something i was recently thinking about..

2. That much i don't have yet..but i was thinking they grow pale or maybe there skin changes...something like that ...there eyes grow a certain color ..still trying to come up with this part..

3. Hmmm not sure what you mean ..but i would think it has to i was going to do something like the words of the bible are inscribed on the sword itself...maybe the gospel..or something. The bible itself is metal but its very lightweight metal..still working out alot of details. I also considered the possibility of the bible being wood...instead..

i hope i answered your question...

You have, mostly. I like it.

Thank you sir...! I should have more updates soon