Okay, I whipped this out pretty quickly (essence-mapping wise, for me at least), and have never done essence on a place before--I'm sure it's incomplete (there's no way I could ever finish it), but what are your thoughts on it? What's something I could have better represented, is there something I left out? Any kind of feedback would be appreciated. 

Water:
- Appearance
   - Beautiful
      - a piece of an otherworld
      - endless
      - a mirror with some deformities
      - green/blue glass
- Cleanliness
   - a country virgin in a plain dress
   - a solid, unflawed, diamond
- Depth
   - cruel--awaiting a victim
   - majestic--indiscernible
   - friendly--enticing
- Size:
   - majestical--confidence
   - unbreachable
Viewed from a distance:
- Dimensions
   - sprawling--a blanket nestling between boulders
- When the sun comes out after a rain
   - a paradise shrouded in mist
Lake -- God’s ink puddled in a forest of mountains and trees