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 Post subject: History (To be archived and developed in other threads)
PostPosted: October 8th, 2011, 10:33 am 
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The history of Amerouk, from creation to present day. :D

Note: I don't have a name for the evil prince yet, so in this history he is going by Prince Evil. ;)

The History:

Long ago, Azéan, the God of all things, created Amerouk and everything in it, including the magic. He made it into two kingdoms, the North and the South. Zalor is a evil god, a trickster and thief. Azéan and Zalor have been fighting over control of the people since the beginning of time. Zalor tricks people into using their gifts for evil in order to assist him. When Azéan gifted the magic, he gave the power to choose which it was used for. Azéan is the god of freedom and justice, while if a gifted one gives into Zalor, he remains a slave to evil unless saved.
Azéoran is the appointed city where the king lives to keep peace over the world, and he is powerfully gifted with magic in order to keep peace in the northern and southern territories and keep the balance off the magic. A gifted magician also feels special ties with nature, as it is his duty to keep Azéan’s creation protected. With this balance in place, Amerouk remained peaceful for several hundred years. Until one king, King Dakai Aramal of Azèoran, chose to turn his magic dark. He then became the most powerful dark magician ever to live, ignoring the call of nature to rule as a tyrant. He burned villages who would not submit to him, causing forest fires, destroying the creation. Certain animals became scarce and some died out for lack of habitat.
In the sixth year of his rein, a rebellion sparked in the people. People of the North and South worked together to overthrow their king. An entire year later, they were successful. The rebellion was made of mostly commoners and good magicians. One of the King’s previous advisers led the rebellion. However, when the king died, a Curse of Zalor was cast upon the land. But before King Dakai died, he had two sons. Prince Evil and Prince Tavilon. Tav’s Mother took a fancy to him and started teaching him in the ways of the good magic before Dakai could corrupt him. Dakai did corrupt Prince Evil in order to take his place on the throne when he died. After the curse, Prince Evil arose to the throne and started a civil war, taking over his own land to gain control of the people and wipe out the good magic. He ruthlessly took his father’s place, and the magicians of Amerouk, weakened by the curse, are slowly losing. Prince Evil has been ruling for 3 years now, wiping out villages who will not submit.

Thoughts? Suggestions? Critique? Name ideas for Prince Evil? Any help is welcome! :D

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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: November 7th, 2011, 12:22 pm 
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Wow!!! Love it Azlyn :twisted:
Can't for you to start/finish the book. :D
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Name ideas for Prince Evil?

I'm trying to think of a name for "Prince Evil"

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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: November 13th, 2011, 8:18 pm 
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Thanks, Danko. Though you'll have to wait awhile for me to finish, considering I have tons more developing to do. :)

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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: March 18th, 2012, 7:25 pm 
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Sounds cool! The way you've got it set up, the action has already started and it sounds like things are getting quite desperate...so suspenseful and I've not even met a character or anything, good job!
Maybe "Prince Evil" could have a name that rhymes with or is similar to Tavilon? Talivon? :dieshappy: :rofl: Hmm....
Tavion? Tavian? ...maybe those will at least inspire another, better name for your evil prince if you haven't named him yet...


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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: March 18th, 2012, 11:42 pm 
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Thanks, Wolf! :D I'm glad it sounds cool, though sorely in need of an update.. (So in need that Tavilon has become the name of a different character :P ) Poke me about the update, 'kay? I need it, and my history does too.

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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: March 19th, 2012, 12:35 am 
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Aw, oh well, you'll think of one!

I'd love to poke you! (I sort of just did...sort of) When and how often should I do so?


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Lycanis Mimetes wrote:
I'd love to poke you! (I sort of just did...sort of) When and how often should I do so?

*Laughs* Whenever and however often you like. *Opens world building doc and begins frowning at history*

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 Post subject: Re: History
PostPosted: March 19th, 2012, 10:58 am 
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Ok, cool! I will try to visit your world often! (I'm working on making it a point to explore here, both to see how one should be run, and to help fellow maniacal world-builders!)

Poke me if I forget to poke you... :) :D :dieshappy: :rofl: :rofl: :cool: :rofl: (had to use up the smilie limit)


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*Laughs* You can also poke me here. :D

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 Post subject: Re: History (To be updated)
PostPosted: March 19th, 2012, 11:12 am 
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Cool! Um, by 'poking' you there, do you mean posting on that thread, or poking you about that particular goal? I think I will post a similar goal, too...


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