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 Post subject: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: September 27th, 2011, 10:09 am 
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Here's my first try at FirstX mapping! Hopefully I did it right. :)


KYRA RAE

Mind:
.........Energy: a 3-year-old boy / a Kabelevsky concerto
.....................Rash: skydiving without knowing how to use a parachute / racing down a main highway
.........Thought: Single-minded Purpose: an Olympian / a mother on cleaning days / Smaug
.........Depth: a tide pool - shallow, but with hidden treasures
.........Purpose:
......................Revenge: dwarves on a quest for stolen gold / Eragon / Hitler / Cain murdering Abel
.........Love:
.................Loyalty: Hosea
.................Patience: my swim coach (hardly any)
.................Pride: King Saul

Soul:
.......Fire: all-consuming / unwavering / a charging bull
.......Faith: confusion / a dying bonfire / an agnostic
...............Darkness: midnight / the far side of the moon

Body: self-built
........Hair:
...............Color: Anne of Green Gables / burnt red
...............Length: waist
...............Straight: parallel lines
........Eyes:
...............Color: the ocean / the darkening sky above a sunset / deep blue
...............Fire: a flickering lightbulb
........Motion:
...................Speed: chaos / a tornado / a fox
....................Reflexes: a wild cat / a seasoned warrior

Story
.........Calm: Eden / a spring / sky blue
.........Fall:
...............Loss:
.......................Loneliness: an orphan / an abandoned kitten / Peter denying Christ
................Purpose:
.............................Revenge: Eragon / Cain murdering Abel / Thorin Oakenshield
..........Redemption: "You're Not Alone" by Meredith Andrews / Uncovered fear put in the light of day / Romans 12:19

I realize this one doesn't have a lot of complicated metaphors, but that was partly on purpose; Kyra is a very cut-and-dry person. :)

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"The difference between the right word and almost the right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug."
~Mark Twain~

Works in Progress:

Note:
Abigail is Hebrew for joy of the Father, and Mimetes is Greek for imitator or follower. I am a joyful follower of my King and Father, the Creator of all things.
I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: October 31st, 2011, 10:39 am 
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I love this! I especially liked:

Quote:
Depth: a tide pool - shallow, but with hidden treasures


And

Quote:
Fire: all-consuming / unwavering / a charging bull
.......Faith: confusion / a dying bonfire / an agnostic
...............Darkness: midnight / the far side of the moon



Well done!

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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

J. R. R. Tolkien


My favourite quote: "God will give His kindness for you to use when your own runs out."

Pippin's Waggy Tales

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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: October 31st, 2011, 12:44 pm 
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Thanks, Elanor!

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Abby

"The difference between the right word and almost the right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug."
~Mark Twain~

Works in Progress:

Note:
Abigail is Hebrew for joy of the Father, and Mimetes is Greek for imitator or follower. I am a joyful follower of my King and Father, the Creator of all things.
I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: October 31st, 2011, 3:17 pm 
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:) You're welcome!

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All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

J. R. R. Tolkien


My favourite quote: "God will give His kindness for you to use when your own runs out."

Pippin's Waggy Tales

Autumn Leaves


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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: January 11th, 2012, 5:45 am 
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Good job PrincessoftheKing!

I liked:
Mind:
.....................skydiving without knowing how to use a parachute / racing down a main highway

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Servant of God, Brother of Christ, and Sealed by the Holy Ghost.

Tsahraf is Hebrew, meaning to refine, cast, melt, purge away, try.

Chahsid Mimetes means Follower of the Holy One, or saint.

Be ye followers of me, even as I also am of Christ.
I Corinthians 11:1

May Sir Emeth Mimetes find you doing this.
Thank you, in Gods name.


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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: January 11th, 2012, 9:20 am 
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Thank you! :D

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"The difference between the right word and almost the right word is the difference between lightning and the lightning bug."
~Mark Twain~

Works in Progress:

Note:
Abigail is Hebrew for joy of the Father, and Mimetes is Greek for imitator or follower. I am a joyful follower of my King and Father, the Creator of all things.
I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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 Post subject: Re: Kyra Rae
PostPosted: January 11th, 2012, 9:36 am 
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You are welcome! The connection of the two gave a good sense of movement to each.

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Servant of God, Brother of Christ, and Sealed by the Holy Ghost.

Tsahraf is Hebrew, meaning to refine, cast, melt, purge away, try.

Chahsid Mimetes means Follower of the Holy One, or saint.

Be ye followers of me, even as I also am of Christ.
I Corinthians 11:1

May Sir Emeth Mimetes find you doing this.
Thank you, in Gods name.


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