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 Post subject: Help Needed for New Project
PostPosted: December 31st, 2011, 7:07 pm 
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I'm working on a new novel right now, and I need all the help I can get. I need people to ask questions, poke/prod me, reward me, keep me accountable, and generally help me along. :D

I shall have the full summary up shortly. But here's the basic summary:

Princess of Hearts
Lauren, Alice in Wonderland's niece, needs help. Desperately. She's stuck in Wonderland on her thirteenth birthday. Only the Princess of Hearts, Queen of Hearts' shy daughter, can help her escape the wrath of the Queen. Does the Princess dare go against her mother's wishes?

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Lauren tugged on the ropes on either side of her and her tree swing lurched forward. Her fingers curled tightly around the ropes, she was "lost somewhere between the rainbow and the clouds". Or so her mom called it when she was lost in thought. Today she was thirteen. Thirteen! Her lips twitched into a shy, serious smile. Just twenty years ago, her aunt Alice had been thirteen. Just twenty years ago, Alice had fallen down the rabbit hole.
"Lauren!"
The loud call jerked her back to reality.
"Lauren Clarke!"
She recognized the voice of her mom and hastily jumped up, brushing off her darkwash jeans. She straightened the hem of her green polo shirt and started to walk back to her cozy, one-story house. Lauren walked to the side door and twisted the doorknob.
Locked.
Sighing, she reached into her pocket for her key. She dug into her jeans pocket, but her fingertips didn't feel the familiar cool metal key. What? Hadn't she tucked it right into her pocket when she walked out the door? She must not have. She headed around to the front door.
She turned the doorknob.
It wouldn't give.
What was wrong? She had just heard her mom call her. Hadn't she? Hadn't she? Lauren's mind spun. She flipped up the doormat where they usually kept the extra key.
It wasn't there.

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 Post subject: Re: Help Needed for New Project
PostPosted: January 4th, 2012, 7:34 am 
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Poke me if I don't reply to this tonight, Elly. I have work right now. :)

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Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
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From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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 Post subject: Re: Help Needed for New Project
PostPosted: January 4th, 2012, 8:35 am 
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*pokes Ells* I love it! Now go write more. :twisted: ;)

What kind of questions do you want me to ask? Ones about characters, the plot, the theme, the world, or all of the above? :D

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Abigail is Hebrew for joy of the Father, and Mimetes is Greek for imitator or follower. I am a joyful follower of my King and Father, the Creator of all things.
I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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PostPosted: January 4th, 2012, 9:33 am 
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PrincessoftheKing wrote:
*pokes Ells* I love it! Now go write more. :twisted: ;)

What kind of questions do you want me to ask? Ones about characters, the plot, the theme, the world, or all of the above? :D

All of the above, actually. :D

Thank you both for responding. :D

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PostPosted: January 4th, 2012, 11:48 am 
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Okey dokey! :D

Let's see... *thinks*

Will you stick to the world already laid out in Alice in Wonderland, or will you add to it? Has Wonderland changed at all since Alice was there? Will Lauren meet the same people? Will she wander around a lot like Alice, or will she just stick to a couple places? What time period is the book set in (the part not in Wonderland ;) )? Is Alice involved in the story at all? Why is the Queen angry at Lauren? How old is the Princess? Why does she want to help Lauren? How will Lauren's character develop as the story goes on?

And... that's all the questions I can think of at the moment. :D

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Works in Progress:

Note:
Abigail is Hebrew for joy of the Father, and Mimetes is Greek for imitator or follower. I am a joyful follower of my King and Father, the Creator of all things.
I stand in support of Jay, for he is my brother in Christ.


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PostPosted: January 4th, 2012, 12:04 pm 
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PrincessoftheKing wrote:
Okey dokey! :D

Let's see... *thinks*

Will you stick to the world already laid out in Alice in Wonderland, or will you add to it? Has Wonderland changed at all since Alice was there? Will Lauren meet the same people? Will she wander around a lot like Alice, or will she just stick to a couple places? What time period is the book set in (the part not in Wonderland ;) )? Is Alice involved in the story at all? Why is the Queen angry at Lauren? How old is the Princess? Why does she want to help Lauren? How will Lauren's character develop as the story goes on?

And... that's all the questions I can think of at the moment. :D

It's similar, but it has changed. She'll probably meet a couple of the characters (the Cheshire cat included). She'll wander around a lot, as she's very curious. It's modern-time, maybe 2007-ish. :D Alice isn't really involved, only when Lauren returns. The Queen wants to rule over Wonderland, but Lauren doesn't want her to. The Princess is 15. She has a sense of adventure and wants to become more outgoing. Lauren becomes more aware of her surroundings, and more attentive. :D

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You may say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one... -Imagine by John Lennon
A day without laughter is a day wasted. -Charlie Chaplin
It's hard to hold a candle in the cold November rain... -November Rain, Guns'NRoses
Romans 12:18- If it is possible, as far as it depends on you, live at peace with everyone.


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