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PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 1:45 pm 
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Hello all you writers of stories…

I'm Darshaun Delaney….and I used to be a lot more creative than I am now. ;D Hahaha…actually, writing's never been a really easy thing for me. But I have started about 6 or so stories, though they were all awhile back.

There IS one I really want to pick up again (after reading Ted Dekker and reading about Lawhead and Perreti). It's a fantasy world with a medieval Japanese culture…not terribly original, but I thought it'd be fun to write. As soon as we finish moving, I'll dig up the manuscript-what I've written of it so far, that is-and then I'll have more things to post.

I'm 18, have 5 younger brothers, no sisters, and a music guy…I play and compose lots of music.

I hope to enjoy this forum. :)

Darshaun


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 Post subject: Re: Greetings
PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 1:48 pm 
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Hello! Welcome to HW! Your story sounds interesting. :D

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Welcome, Darshaun!

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Your story sounds very intriguing! :D

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PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 2:31 pm 
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Welcome to the forum! you are going to love it here! :dieshappy:
Sounds like a cool story. I've used some elements of medieval Japan in my stories as well. Good to have more music men, I've been playing keyboards for eight or so years now and I love music. I'm also trying to pick up guitar and bass, haven't had any lessons though. Do people say you have a big family? I have five brothers and sisters as well and they are a blessing (although sometimes a difficult blessing if you know what I mean). So welcome, It will be great getting to know you better and have some welcome cake *Presents huge welcome cake with a big yellow edible star on it* :D Right from the virtual bakery. :dieshappy:

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Welcome to Holy Worlds! :D

I like composing music, too.

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 Post subject: Re: Greetings
PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 2:47 pm 
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Hello, Delaney! :) Welcome to Holy Worlds. I look forward to hearing more about your story!

We have met before on Eli's forum. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Greetings
PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 3:06 pm 
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Welcome Delaney, welcome!
There is cake, come have some!
Get your imagination ready,
You reader of the Dekkie
Unsheathe your sword,
And prepare to fight,
For here; a great lord.
Is coming into sight,
He is nice and Godly and true,
He reigns this kingdom,
With Jesus; that's who.
Now this is the end of this song.
Because it is getting too long...

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5 younger brothers, no sisters,


Haha! I have the exact number of siblings!

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and a music guy…I play and compose lots of music

A musician! What do you play?

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PostPosted: July 15th, 2011, 3:42 pm 
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*blows boatswain whistle announcing the arrival of Delaney* *Salutes* Welcome aboard Holy Worlds, mate!

:shock: Woah! I am one in six, too! :shock: I'm the fourth, and we have exactly three boys and three girls... I had no idea so many on this forum had five siblings!

Well, welcome once again! If you need any help, feel free to visit our "newbies" thread in the forum Q&A and ask questions. :D

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Hello and welcome! :D

I actually don't think I've read many fantasy stories that have a Japanese-influenced culture. Sounds neat!

Oh, and I'm another member with five siblings. :D

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Welcome to Holy Worlds, Darshaun Delaney! :D

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Welcome, Darshaun! I concur, your story premise sounds intriguing. :D

You compose music? Neat! We'd love for you to join us over on the "composers unite!" thread. :) What instruments do you play?


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Welcome, sir. Sounds like you are very blessed with brothers. I hope we will be able to help you rekindle a passion for writing, and maybe make it a little easier for you. :D

So what got you started?

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:shock: Woah! I am one in six, too! :shock: I'm the fourth, and we have exactly three boys and three girls... I had no idea so many on this forum had five siblings!

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My goodness, look at all of us! There are so many of us with 6? Hehe! I am the second, of three boys and three girls!

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Hi! Welcome - we're thrilled to have you! Take a cupcake, post around, and holler if you have any questions. :D

Medieval Japanese culture sounds fascinating! I have an interest in Asian cultures. Have you researched historical Japanese culture much?

There are a lot of music men on the forum. You're in good company. :D

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Welcome to the land where creativity is fostered, may your pen never fall again.
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(sorry, I'm stuck talking like I just escaped from a fantasy novel... but I like it!)

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Ooh, ooh, Japanese culture!! *raises hand and jumps up and down*

-- slight interruption --
Let me officially welcome you to Holy Worlds, Dar! *sprinkles glitter around*
--end of interruption--

Back to Japanese culture! Let me offer you some cuisine. *serves platter covered with ramen and soba and udon and onigiri and sashimi and tempura and a whole bunch more*

I was born and grew up in Japan, so I heartily share in your love of the culture there. It's a magnificent place - although still full of darkness, too. But we can get into a deeper discussion on Japan later, if you'd like.

For now, let me just say, well met, Dar! I am Dawn or Star or Estar or Even or Evenstar or sushi {sushi?!}. *vanishes in a puff of onigiri*

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Welcome to HolyWorlds! I'm one of the resident Aussies, pleased to meetcha. :D *sticks out hand to shake*

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Welcome to Holy Worlds, Darshaun! I hope you're enjoying the forum thus far. :D Sometimes writing is come and go for me depending on inspiration. :roll:

(Wow! I've really gotten behind in posting since I've been gone and busy!)

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