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PostPosted: February 23rd, 2011, 4:59 pm 
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Thysal - (Takes off with Jay aboard) All of a sudden I find myself a target. Fantastic. (Circles the room, then hones in on Mordir upon the rafters) You first!

Zanya - (Drops off Chayn) I'm not one to stay airborne, thank you. I think I'll just resume my invisible identity as the cat-girl down there.

Thysal - @Jay; and speaking of trouble, what did you do to get everyone angry at you?

Me - I think the dragon battle started when Merashath laid claim to the skies . . . and Chayn and Thysal didn't like that . . .

Niarah - And it's all a mess.

Me - Albeit a fun one. :)

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Derek: @Shawn-the-character: May I offer my assistance, my lady? My author noticed a few pages back you seemed to be threatened by these menacing villains. I wanted to dive in then and there but she insisted we finish catching up and I am now confused.

(Derek is riding Raedon in dragon form hunting trouble, for those who lost track.)

Lighting: *searches himself, thoroughly disconcerted to find himself completely disarmed.*

Me: Yeah. And it's going to stay that way.

Lightning: How am I supposed to do anything without weapons?

Me: You could try talking politely.

Lighting: The only manners these people seem to understand is violence.

Me: *feigned innocence* They look like they're having fun to me. Not violent at all.

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PostPosted: February 23rd, 2011, 9:31 pm 
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Jay: "I'm not sure what I did. It started with Iri..."

Me: "And then Azriel, and then someone else..."

Jay: "Pirzak is the villain from my story. Apparently his mood is contagious."

Pirzak: *evil grin and failed evil laugh*

Raczr: "I'm just a villain in general. I hold no personal grudges, understand."

Shawn: *pinks a tiny bit and smiles warmly* "Why thank you, Derek. I don't see any imminent danger at the moment, but your assistance is most welcome."

Jay: *doesn't like this too much*

Me: "Pay attention to staying alive, Jay. This is how you got into that fight with Azriel, remember?"

Shawn: *pinks again* "Thanks, authoress."

Me: "Just a refresher."

Jay: *glare*

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Kaida: About time, how much do you have to insult someone's insecurity before they start a duel? *keeps knife to the ready and watches Nameless with an eager smile*

Erronys: *flies around the dueling dragons, rather confused about what is going on*

Malcolm: Yeah, this is why I wasn't battling much before...

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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 7:27 am 
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Gavin: Wait...the dragons are still dueling?!

Brian: It would appear so..... *points to fighting dragons*

Emuna: If I was a dragon I'd join in. :D

Gavin: Why don't you join in now?...so we can get read of you before we're halfway through the book.

Emuna: *scowls*

Me: Gavin that wasn't nice!

Brian: He isn't known for his manners...

Emuna:No, he's known for his manners, just lack there of.

Gavin: I have manners! I just only have them for people I respect.

Emuna: So you don't respect me?

Gavin: No, I don't like you, which in turn keeps me from respecting you...duh.

Emuna: *tackles Gavin*

Gavin: Get...off me!

Me: I should've have thought it through before bringing all three of you in here...you're going to kill each other before the dragons are through dueling.

Brian: It's wrong of me to be enjoying this... :rofl:


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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 7:31 am 
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Merashath @Thysal: Mordir isn't in the rafters. He's on my back.

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Kimun reciprocates, the blades sliding against each other.
Elanhil: *turns his blade sideways and then pushes suddenly upwards. He loops the sword around and deals a blow to the hilt sharply downward.*

Merashath: We have three dragons to take care of, Mordir. This will be tough. *dive bombs Chayn, with a burst of hot fire aimed at the neck.*

Trina: Why am I here?

Me: Oh, you. Forgot about you. You can go now if you want.

Trina: *looks up at the battle high up, and proceeds to walk out the door.*

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Elanhil: *turns his blade sideways and then pushes suddenly upwards. He loops the sword around and deals a blow to the hilt sharply downward.*


Kimun's grip doesn't slacken in the slightest, and he merely reengages the guard.

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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 8:50 am 
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Sir Emeth Mimetes wrote:
Elanhil wrote:
Elanhil: *turns his blade sideways and then pushes suddenly upwards. He loops the sword around and deals a blow to the hilt sharply downward.*


Kimun's grip doesn't slacken in the slightest, and he merely reengages the guard.

You aren't going to get him either by surprise or by strength.
Me: Rats. Looks like you have to go by pure skill, Elanhil.

Elanhil: *laughs quietly* Good, my favorite way. *Elanhil slashes horizontally towards Kimun's waist.*

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Me: Rats. Looks like you have to go by pure skill, Elanhil.

Elanhil: *laughs quietly* Good, my favorite way. *Elanhil slashes horizontally towards Kimun's waist.*


Kimun leaps backwards, the tip of the blade passing by his belt, barely missing it.

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Thysal - (freezes) Oops . . . Right. (Flies above Merashath, then swoops down and catches Mordir in her claws)

Niarah - Of your limited options, that was probably the worst . . .

Sylvia - Hi Emuna, Gavin, and Brian! I'm glad you could join us in here! :wave:

Ember - (squeaks in dismay as Sylvia walks away, then runs after her and climbs up her shoulder)

Me - I need to develop him as an adult . . .

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Brian: Hello, Sylvia. It's a pleasure to meet you. *bows slightly*

Me: Gavin, Emuna! Say hi! It's rude to ignore people.

Emuna: Hello! *still on top of Gavin*

Gavin: Hello! Ow! Get her off me! She's pulling my hair!

Brian: *chuckles* Really, Gavin, I would've have suspected you to punch her by now...

Me: :P My characters are possibly too colorful....

Gavin: *pushes Emuna off and stands up*

Emuna: *punches Gavin*

Gavin: Ow! Will you?!...ugh!

Emuna: What? :roll:

Brian: This might not go so well...

Gavin: I'm gonna-

Me: You're not doing anything.... *makes Brian stand between them* Can you act mature for one post?

Brian: Why do I have to go between them?!

Me: Because you're the peace maker...and its not like I didn't equip you with epicly awesome fighting skills.

Brian: *grumbles* That I don't like to use....


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PostPosted: February 24th, 2011, 2:29 pm 
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Kimun leaps backwards, the tip of the blade passing by his belt, barely missing it.

You have the distance.
Elanhil: *moves his second hand to grip the sword. He slices at Kimun, this time at about neck height.*

Me: Just to clarify, I'm envisioning the swords we are using to be similar shape and weight to the ones that the lords have in Dawn Treader...Are we in agreement?

Merashath: *Turns sharply upward and lets out a burst of flame, being careful not to hit Mordir. He then also places his claws on Mordir's shoulders, and gives a good yank.* MINE! This is my victi...erm, rider.

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Elanhil: *moves his second hand to grip the sword. He slices at Kimun, this time at about neck height.*

Me: Just to clarify, I'm envisioning the swords we are using to be similar shape and weight to the ones that the lords have in Dawn Treader...Are we in agreement?


Similar to that, but more light and closer to rapiers. More flexible and wieldy. More efficient. ;)

Kimun fends it off to the side and maintains a center guard.

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Seymour: You've made him rather mad, Aris.

Me: I know, that worries me...

Chayn: Back off! [Flies right up to meet the flames, but breathes poison straight ahead, making a sort of shield as she bursts through and heads for Merashath] If anyone's going down, the assassin goes first! He's the ringleader. I won't let him touch anyone's rider!!! [Tackles Merashath, claws outstretched and teeth bared]

Rowen: [Pacing with nervous alarm] She's lost it completely.

Mordir: [Winces as Thysal grabs him, and winces again when Merashath pulls him back] I'm not going down so easy! [Drives his sword up, around Thysal's shoulder]

Seymour: That's it. I can't stand watching down here. Tynx!

Tynx: [Stops flying in confused circles and looks down] What?

Seymour: Get down here so I can get up.

Tynx: I wouldn't do that, dude. Chayn's really mad. So's Mordir. You should stay down there if they start coming after all the characters who aren't flying.

Nameless: [Narrows his eyes to slits] As long as it takes to make them tremble and doubt themselves. Ladies first.

Me: I think I'm completely failing at making him sound scary. Oh yeah, I remember now, it did start with Thysal taking Jay up, then Chayn brought Shawn, then Merashath came up..... wow, that's come a long way.

Seymour: [Watching Brian, Emuna, and Gavin] Would I be of any help anywhere?

Mordir: [Looks at Chayn] She's so angry her better judgment may get tossed aside. If we can keep her angry, we might be able to put her down. Capturing Shawn would ensure a quick win over her. [Looks at Shawn] Oh, I will get you, little girl. Just you wait.

Me: I'm going to have a lot of talking to do with my characters when they've all recovered, aren't I?

Seymour: Probably.

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Gavin & Emuna: *complaining to Seymour*

Brian: Can anybody understand what they're saying?

Me: No, but I'm glad I'm not in the middle of it. :rofl:

Brian: *glares at me*

Me: ehem...I mean. Gavin and Emuna! Stop talking at the same time it's incoherent!

Emuna: *stops talking*. Gavin's the one that keeps interrupting me when I try to say-

Gavin: I am not interrupting you!

Emuna: You just did again! Why do you keep-

Gavin: Did not!

Emuna: :evil: Stop it!

Brian: *sigh* Why did you bring all three of us?

Me: Why would you have rather stayed in the cave were I'm about to have Terminus beat you up?

Brian: You seriously need to finish that chapter.

Me: Why does everyone keep saying that?!

Gavin & Emuna: *screaming at each other....again.*


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Cara: *Wanders in* You know, you've been looking at this thread sitting in the "view new posts" link for ages.

Me: Yeah, well... it was so far along I thought I'd be throwing a spanner in the works if I posted.

Derek: Well what do you think you're doing now?

Me: Probably throwing a spanner in the works.

Cara: What's a spanner?

Derek: I was about to ask the same thing.

Me: It's a tool we use here in the future.

Cara: *withdraws sword* This is our tool. :D

Derek: *also withdraws sword* I can use it better than you can, though.

Me: Aren't you two not talking to each other at the moment?

Cara: Well---

Derek: *scowls* No. We aren't. *resheathes sword and walks away*

Cara: When are you going to make us get along again? I'm getting lonely.

Me: When I get around to it. *wanders out*

Cara: *follows nonchalantly behind*

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Me - Hi Bush! Glad you could join us! :D

Zanya - Hi.

Niarah - Hi.

Me - *glares* Don't you two have better things to do?

Niarah - Zanya's laying low after her last duel, and I'm just meandering around and making snide comments.

Thysal - (Growls, then twists her body, whacking Merashath hard with her tail, then snaps at Mordir) Watch it with that sword!

Niarah - And that dragon isn't normally this . . . aggressive.

Rahor - Whose fault is that?

Me - Hey, you should pay attention to your duel!

Rahor - He hasn't moved!

Sylvia - And that is why Ember and I stay low key. Right Ember?

Ember - (growls in agreement)

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PostPosted: February 25th, 2011, 7:11 am 
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Merashath: Suddenly drops downward, before Chayn has a chance to meet him, leaving Thysal and Mordir as the only thing to hit. He loops around, and comes up behind her, and lets out a long burst of fire.
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Similar to that, but more light and closer to rapiers. More flexible and wieldy. More efficient. ;)

Kimun fends it off to the side and maintains a center guard.

Two handed grips limit mobility, a tip.
Elanhil: Yes, but they increase accuracy and control, as well as strength. *Elanhil repeats the stroke, this time from the other side.*

Me: Oh. Those are the kinds of swords Elanhil is used to, his world's technology hasn't gotten that far yet. But he is fine with these.

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Jay: *drives his sword down at Mordir* "You're in over you're head now."

Shawn: "Not a chance, Mordir. Chayn, think calculatingly and rationally."

Me: "That still sounds intense." *is laughing at Gavin and Emuna*

Pirzak and Raczr: "What were we doing again?"

Me: "I have no clue." :? "Help, anyone?"

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Gavin: I do not get laughed at!

Emuna: I don't know...I thought it was pretty funny when you froze in that cave *laughs*

Gavin: I will knock Brian unconscious to get over there!

Brian: :shock: No you will not!

Me: Haha....Maybe you guys should duel.

Brian: Bethany!

Gavin: Bring it on! Winner gets to beat up Emuna!

Emuna: I'm sorry, what?

Brian: And the loser?

Gavin: Losers don't get prizes! Duh!

Brian: *sigh*

Me: This should be interesting...

Brian: *scowls at me* You're a really mean author you know that?

Me: I'm aware.

Gavin: *draws sword* Okay, let's go.

Brian: *sigh* Fine. *draws sword*

Me: :D *watches*

Emuna* For the record, I disagree with this whole thing. *grabs some grapes*

Me: *grabs popcorn*

Emuna: What's popcorn?

Me: It's an earth thing, now shh.

Brian & Gavin: *preparing to duel*


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Me: "Maybe Emuna should beat up the loser instead."

Shawn: "Brilliant. Not."

Jay: "And you say we're a handful?"

Me: "Oh, hush."

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Me - Thysal still has Mordir?

Thysal - Sweet! (Flies out of Chayn's way) Right Jay, it's your call, what do we do with Mordir?

Zanya - Look, another duel! (goes over to Bethany's post and watches in interest) So Emuna, who do you think is going to win?

Niarah - (Decides to clarify everything) Pirzak and Raczr were threatening Thysal and Jay, but they're stuck on the ground. Merashath abandoned Mordir to said Thysal, and right now, Chayn's in a furious rage, and Merashath had better beware. I'm not sure what Kai's doing, but the Cat-Dragon was noble and left Shawn alone. Gavin and Brian are duelling each other, and is there anything else I've missed?

Ashrai - Talk about a run-on sentence.

Rahor - You've probably garbled some of the facts, but we'll let everyone else cover that.

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Me: Wait, wait, wait.

Gavin & Brian: What?!

Me: I can't write a duel *makes their swords disappear* hand-to-hand....carry on.

Brian: *looks at empty hand* oh well thanks alo-

Gavin: *tackles Brian and punches him*

Brian: *kicks Gavin in stomach and pushes him off*

Emuna: *chuckles* If the loser's Gavin I would go with Shawn Hendersons' idea....

Me: Shh...watch them fight *eats popcorn*

Emuna: Can I have popcorn? :D

Brian: *kicks Gavin in knee*

Gavin: *falls down*

Brian: *goes to punch Gavin but stops* This is stupid...I'm out! *begins to leave*

Gavin: *tackles Brian*

Brian: Will somebody get....him...off?!

Emuna: *pulls Gavin off Brian*

Me: In hind sight I shouldn't have made the peace maker fight...

Brian: *wipes nose then looks at blood on hand* Now you realize that?!

Me: Hehe....you still won. :roll:

Gavin: That's not fair! He had the girl help him!

Emuna: What is poor Gavin a sore looser? *feigning pity*

Me: *cough* Be nice.

Emuna: Wait....so can I beat up Gavin now?! :D

Me, Brian, & Gavin: No!


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Elanhil: Yes, but they increase accuracy and control, as well as strength. *Elanhil repeats the stroke, this time from the other side.*

Me: Oh. Those are the kinds of swords Elanhil is used to, his world's technology hasn't gotten that far yet. But he is fine with these.


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Shawn: "I like the way you put that, Niarah." :D

Me: "Okay, but now I don't know what to do with them..."

Pirzak: "What to do with us?! This is pathetic!"

Raczr: *climbs up into the rafters*

Pirzak: *follows*

Jay: "Drop him into a hole!"

Shawn: "Lovely." :P

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Me: I know how you feel Bethany, that's how I used to write all of Tanner's old fights.

Tanner: I would've helped if you'd teach me to use a sword.

Aren: I think she's waiting until we officially meet Tahn.

Tanner: Which can't happen until there's a decent scale of the Lamarian map so we'll know how long it takes me to get to Glenhaven. *sighs*

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All resemblance to persons, people, friends, relatives, quotes, cultures, artificial intelligences, inside jokes, pets, unclaimed personalities, sentient objects, extra-terrestrials, inter-terrestrials, and draperies living, dead, undead, or comatose in any of my work are purely coincidental, incidental, circumstantial, inadvertent, unplanned, unforeseen, and unintentional. There's seriously no way I was referring to you. Honest.

The story so far:
Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

Other novels on the brain:
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Shen'oh Story
Crusoe's Star
War Blazer
Seven Arts Story
The Queen's Knave
Polarians
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Me: I can write a duel...it's not really my strong point though.

Gavin: *cough* why the only duels you have are with magical energy *cough*

Me: Don't spoil the book Gavin! *pinches Gavin*

Gavin: Ow!

Brian: So where's the part where I and Emuna get out alive? :book:

Me: Umm...keep reading...I'm sure it's in there somewhere.

Emuna: She hasn't written that yet...

Me: How'd you know that?

Emuna: Because you told me...

Me: Oh, yah...


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Kimun fends it off identically, inversed.
Elanhil: *Loops his sword around, and strikes upward from below, slightly to the right, and loops over Jay's head and cut's at his neck, from the opposite side that he would expect concerning his approach.*

Merashath: *dives down...down to the...the ceiling I guess...not sure how that works...and grabs Pirzak and Raczr, flinging Pirzak onto his back and holding Raczr in his claws. He swoops upward, and flying directly above Thysal gently sets Raczr on her back.* Get her to drop Mordir. I'll get him. *needs another bad dragon.* Can you send one in, Elanhil?

Me: You're the only dragon in Menbie.

Merashath: :evil:

Me: Anyways, Trina is coming back. She's less of your stereotype helpless girl now.

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Lightning: So the spoiled prince gets to fly around rescuing damsels in distress while I sit here and do nothing?

Me: Do you want to rescue damsels in distress?

Lightning; No.

Me: than stop complaining.

Jarier: *pants* I finally made it in here. Why'd you have to make it so tedious to get out of my story again?

Me: make yourself comfortable.

Lightning: Who is that?

Me: Someone you're not going to like.

Lighting: Obviously. But why is he here?

Me: We're trying to find a reason for his existence. :?

Jarier: You can't just cut me out of a story because the plot changed. It's bad enough you're deleting so many other characters, but without me how does Morgon get in trouble? How can he come to a realization of what that monster Tirol did if he doesn't have me to kill? How can he--

Me: *stops listening*

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Chayn: [Wings flare out to slow down. Whips around and flaps to redirect the flames] Alright, where's the assassin?! I'll rip him to shreds I will! The cowardly, murderous little-

Me: OK, that's enough. We understand you're-

Chayn: You do not understand what I feel! My rider has been threatened, and I will not stand by and let him get away with it!

Me: Hey, watch it. I'm getting enough attitude from Mr. Rebellious over there. I don't need it from you.

Mordir: [Thrusts as Thysal snaps at him] You watch it. I won't give in! Ever!!!

Tesmir: Lakkerfax, can we blow it up now? [Looks very eager]

Tynx: [Not sure what to do] Is it safe to help? [Looks at Chayn]

Seymour: [Looks a little overwhelmed] Alright, all three of you hush. We're going to try something. [Pulls out a small pouch and places it on a tree stump] OK, you three will need to work together to do this. In that pouch are six gold coins. If you three can work together, without arguing, you may have the coins. But you must not bicker. I will allow only one argument. But I suggest that you don't use it, because arguing will get you nowhere. You must think carefully, and consider the suggestion of the others. Now, begin .[Suddenly the top of the tree stump open up like a trapdoor, and the coins fall down into a pit several yard down]

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Brian: Was Seymour referring to us when he said "three"?

Gavin: Don't know...but I want them coins... *looks at pit*

Emuna: Don't be greedy Gavin you don't know if those coins are yours...

Gavin: Sha! Leave if to you to say that...I doubt that necklace you're wearing is yours.

Emuna: Excuse me?! :evil:

Brian: Well if he was referring to us we shouldn't be Fight-

Emuna: *lunges at Gavin*

Brian: *catches Emuna* We shouldn't be fighting!

Me: Nice catch...

Emuna: *thrashing against Brian* Let me go!

Brian: A little help?

Me: I can't help...that would ruin the fantasy aspect if the author solved everything by intervening...

Brian: *trying to control Emuna* Why...thank you...for...your help!

Gavin: Ha! You can't reach me! =P

Emuna: :evil: *still trying to get Brian to let go of her*

Brian: Gavin! That did not make my job easier!


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Skooter: *peers over the edge of the tree stump* Tokens?

Aren: *watches dragons* if I were less flammable and there were a purpose to it, I would join them.

Melany: Better to leave that to Kaida, dragon fighter is her middle name.

Kaida: First and middle technically.

Lakkerfax: What should we blow up with it?

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The story so far:
Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

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Crusoe's Star
War Blazer
Seven Arts Story
The Queen's Knave
Polarians
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Cat-Dragon: I think someone just associated ME with the villains who were trying to hurt that little girl!!!

Kai: Calm down, Cat-Dragon.

Cat-Dragon: *snarls*

Kai: * sigh *

Cat-Dragon: *flies down to figure out what is happening*

Kai: *falls asleep*

Me: You? Fall asleep?

Kai: Me. Fall asleep. I'm tired, you've been tinkering with my history all day.

Me: True. But you're an assassin! Act like it!

Kai: *yawn*

Roel: Oh, ignore him. He's just doing it to annoy you..

Kai: :D

Roel: Point proven. Now what was Rahor doing..? Oh, right, stabbing at me. *Rahor just rips Roel's leggings and the latter lands unharmed. Instantly he turns around and starts slashing at Rahor with his brand new katana, which flashes magnificently in the sunlight*

Me: This is why I usually don't let you write the action...

Roel: Can't I be dramatic sometimes?

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Rahor - (halts and whirls to face Roel) Nice katana, that's a fine weapon. Mind if we compare blades afterwards? (Slashes at Roel's head)

Niarah - Ever the gentleman. It gets on my nerves sometimes.

Me - Brothers and sisters do that. *nods knowingly*

Thysal - (moves her head away as Mordir thrusts his sword, and notices the weight of Raczr on her back) Jay, get him! (Clutches Mordir in all four claws as she puts distance between herself and Merashath)

Zanya - Get him, Emuna! Get him!

Sylvia - (glares at her) You're no help whatsoever.

Ashrai - (Watches the dragon battle, his ears pricked with interest) It would be fantastic to be up there.

Thysal - (twisting to reach Raczr) It is probably very overrated!

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Malcolm: *To Thysal* Allow me. *Bites at Raczr*

Erronys: *Swoops down next to Ashrai and motions to get on*

Kaida: Not without me buddy! *climbs up Erronys' back*

Tanner: What about your fight with Nameless?

Kaida: He seems quite content to merely be insulted, besides I missed my monthly hunt, I need to see some action!

Aren: Stian, keep an eye on her.

Stian: *shrieks and bolts into the sky*

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The story so far:
Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

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Shen'oh Story
Crusoe's Star
War Blazer
Seven Arts Story
The Queen's Knave
Polarians
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Elanhil wrote:
Elanhil: *Loops his sword around, and strikes upward from below, slightly to the right, and loops over Jay's head and cut's at his neck, from the opposite side that he would expect concerning his approach.*


Kimun catches the blade as it goes over and continues its loop, pressing just enough to make it pass in front of him without making contact, and then twisting it violently.

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Nameless: Excuse me?! I gave you the first move!

Me: Chill, Nameless. SHe'd probably be able to beat you anyways.

Tesmir: That would be embarrassing. Getting beaten by a girl.

Tounon: Fire? What else would we blow it up with?

Seymour: [Looks calmly at Brian, Gavin, and Emuna] I was referring to you three, yes. Because of that confusion, I will allow this fight to pass without your using your one chance for arguing. You three have to work together. [Smiles at Skooter] Gold coins, little one. Here. [Tosses Skooter a coin]

Me: What are you, an indulgent grandparent?

Mordir: [Tries to twist out of Thysal's grip] A little help?!

Chayn: Thysal, you can breathe fire! torch him!

Rowen: She's completely lost it.

Tynx: Where can I help?

Mordir: [To Pirzak and Merashath only] Merashath, drop Pirzak onto Chayn's back and grab Shawn! Merashath, be ready to catch them both and fly away as soon as Pirzak has the girl!

Rune: That assassin is going to get himself killed.

Me: Probably, but I don't think he cares anymore...

Orrun: What's it like to be up there I wonder?

Tesmir: Windy, cold, with random moments of heat, dangerous sword fights, really angry dragons-

Orrun: I'm not blind, you know. I can see that.

Cory: [Stands up] Well, I'll be going. Ya'll let me know how the dragon war and the rebellion goes.

Me: Miss you!

Cory: Of course you will. But then again, you've completely forgotten about me.

Me The dragon war and this rebellion take a lot of focus.

Cory: Sure.

Tesmir: [Has a brilliant idea] Kimun, could Tounon and I try dueling you?

Me: You know that's not fair.

Tesmir: You sure? Kimun's taken down a lot of really skilled people! Even Seymour!

Me: Yeah, but he seems to be kept on his toes with Elanhil-

Tounon: Elanhil's the swordmaster in his world, that's why.

Rune: He defeated Cory. And Cory's better than you.

Tesmir: Thanks, Rune. But come on! If I'm as bad as you and the rest of the family says, I'd be out quickly.

Orrun: But there's Tounon.

Me: No arguing. It's making this post long. No one on my side duels Kimun if someone else wants a turn. So you boys just stick with blowing yourselves up.

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Lakkerfax: No, what will be the subject of our explosion. We could wreak some havoc in the dragon war if it's big enough.

Kaida: Telling me to go first is not a first move, it's a surrender.

Skooter: *tackles coin*

Me: He likes shiny things. Sorry about the would be duel. Kaida is rather impatient.

Kaida: *arches eyebrows* I have mixed passions, but let's not forget where you got me from.

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Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

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Crusoe's Star
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Thysal - Thanks, Malcolm. See if you can knock him off! (Shifts so that Raczr is unbalanced) I can't blow fire, Chayn! I can't even roar, for crying out loud! (snarls at Mordir) Watch it, or you might find yourself in two halves like Kai.

Niarah - Notice he put himself back together.

Thysal - I DON'T CARE!

Niarah - *shrugs* Touche.

Ashrai - (Climbs on Erronys) Thank you, friend. Who's side are you on?

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Erronys: *nods to Thysal and Malcolm and launches into the air*

Malcolm: *snorts fire out of one nostril at Mordir then turns and pushes Raczr onto his nose and moves away from Thysal* Ready for a ride? *nose dives*

Kaida: Alright, who are we after first buddy? *climbs between Erronys' horns and draws her knife*

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All resemblance to persons, people, friends, relatives, quotes, cultures, artificial intelligences, inside jokes, pets, unclaimed personalities, sentient objects, extra-terrestrials, inter-terrestrials, and draperies living, dead, undead, or comatose in any of my work are purely coincidental, incidental, circumstantial, inadvertent, unplanned, unforeseen, and unintentional. There's seriously no way I was referring to you. Honest.

The story so far:
Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

Other novels on the brain:
Quicksilver
Shen'oh Story
Crusoe's Star
War Blazer
Seven Arts Story
The Queen's Knave
Polarians
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Sir Emeth Mimetes wrote:
Kimun catches the blade as it goes over and continues its loop, pressing just enough to make it pass in front of him without making contact, and then twisting it violently.

A disarming strategy.
Elanhil: *Sees what Kimun is doing, and is prepared to move his sword in a similar motion as Kimun twists it. He loops his hilt around in a wide circle, and then twists his own blade in the opposite direction, in an attempt to counter the move.*

Merashath: *Flies above Chayn, and drops Pirzak, picking up Shawn at the same instant, in an attempt to shadow the weight change as a shift in position to Chayn. He flies down low to the ground, keeping a wary eye up on his comrades on the enemy dragons.*

Trina: That poor girl! I wish I could fly.

Merashath: Watch it, or you'll be the victim as well.

Trina: *shakes fist at him.* Then do something about it, 'cause I'm not watching it.

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Raczr: *snarls as he falls off and dangles from Thysal's tail*

Jay: "Thank you, thank you."

Me: *smacks Jay* "Cut it out. Good gravy, I was only gone for a day, and there's 2 pages already?!"

Pirzak: "Told you." *twisted evil grin*

Shawn: "Let me go!" *punches and kicks at Merashath and Pirzak*

Jay: "NO! Thysal!"

Me: "Pirzak, you are dead."

Pirzak: "Hardly." *calmly avoids the blows and twists Shawn's wrist* "Knock it off."

Shawn: *attempts to do so*

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Elanhil wrote:
Elanhil: *Sees what Kimun is doing, and is prepared to move his sword in a similar motion as Kimun twists it. He loops his hilt around in a wide circle, and then twists his own blade in the opposite direction, in an attempt to counter the move.*


Kimun's arm wrenches violently as every muscle strains to maintain hold of his blade as he leaps back, disengaging just in time.

Very very close. Good job. If he wasn't so strong he would have lost it there.


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Thysal - You realize that this is suicidal right? Right, hang on! (Swoops towards Merashath, slamming into him) Grab her, Jay! (Swings her tail and whacks Merashath, leaving Raczr sprawled on Merashath's face)

Me - Hmm, there's really nothing else I can do in here . . .

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Stian: *swoops at Pirzak and nips at his arms with his sharp beak*

Erronys: *follows Stian and tackles Merashath*

Kaida: *swings over to Merashath and wraps her legs tightly around his neck for stability* HUHAAHHH! *stabs between Merashath's shoulder blades multiple times as hard as she can*

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Birthright: Eleventh chapter pending. 28280 words.
Heritage: First chapter drafted.
Legacy: Character and plot development stage.
Get a feel for the land. Visit Lor-Amar today!

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Chayn:[Looks at Thysal] What d'you you can't breathe fire?! Isn't that what dragons do?!

Me: Um, you can't breathe fire.

Chayn: I can breathe something. [Spin around, roaring in anger] Shawn!

Mordir: [Tries to swing himself back, but gets singed] Ugh, this isn't working! [Stabs Thysal's belly] Merashath, Pirzak, get out of here! Don't let them get the girl!

Nameless: [Is fuming.] You, author. Get me up there!

Me: You, character. No.

Nameless: Why not?

Me: Because I said so. I have no more evil dragons. And....

Rune: Oh, she's gotten an idea.

Tesmir: I think mine was ignored. [Turns to Lakkerfax] Brilliant! Where would be a good place to do it?

Tounon: There's still the problem of what to light it with.

Tesmir: We can shoot it!

Me: Huh?!

Tesmir: WHo has a gun?

Me: Tesmir!

Tesmir: What? I'm not seeing you coming up with great ideas.

Me: I'm trying to keep my dragon from having a mental break down and becoming an angry, poison-breathing wreck.

[Some sort of winged human darts toward the dragons, then darts away.]

Seymour: What are you doing?!

Me: Um.... maybe giving the rebellion side a hand?

Tynx: Are you crazy?! You've already got a villain who hates you, why one more?

Me: It'll be fine. The Meriak knows who to help.

Seymour: You say that now...

Meriak: [Flies around Thysal's head like an annoying fly]

Nameless: What! And you won't let me go up there?! My enemy is up there hiding from our duel!

Me: Your enemy is not hiding up there. She didn't feel like dueling. I messed that up. The Meriak can fly, you can't.

Seymour: Don't you think you should tell the otehrs what a Meriak is capable of?

Me: Nah, I'll let them figure it out.

Chayn: [Roars and flies after Merashath] Give back my rider, fiend!

Tynx: I'm not sure if I'd be helpful or harmful... [Glides slowly back down to the ground and shifts back into his fox form] If you guys need help, just holler.

Mordir: [Twists and wriggles, trying to loosen Thysal's hold, while stabbing at whatever is in reach]

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Zanya - There's a lot happening up there.

Thysal - (Notices the Meriak) Hey! Buzz off!

Ashrai - Let me know if you need a paw, Kaida! (Clings to Erronys' neck, ready for anything)

Thysal - Jay, let Chayn save Shawn, you and I will deal with Mordir! (Seperates herself away from the fighting, then lands, pinning Mordir beneath her with a claw at his throat) Rider, you decide what to do with him.

Niarah - (Toys with her tail restlessly) I don't know what to do with myself down here.

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Brian: *still holding Emuna back* See? He was talking to us!

Emuna: *stops fighting against Brian* Oh...okay than.

Gavin: Meh...I don't want to work...Emuna, you get the coins.

Emuna: *raises eyebrow* Why me?

Gavin: 'Cause you can do that thing *waves hands around* were you pick things up with your mind....umm...the thingy!

Brian: Levitation?

Gavin: Yah! That!

Emuna: I don't want to. *crosses arms*

Brian: Emuna...please? You can have all the gold coins. :D

Emuna: Seymour said we had to work together....so let's work together. I'm certainly not doing all the work.

Gavin: No fair!

Brian: *sigh* seems fair enough... What's the plan?

Me: I have one! :D *poofs Gavin, Brian, and Emuna to the edge of the cliff* *screams at them* HAVE FUN KEEPING FROM FALLING OFF! *mumbles* Especially with the way those to fight.

Brian: :shock: WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!


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Lakkerfax: I thought I was the light. *shrugs and licks the air with his tongue on fire*

Kaida: *To Ashrai* Just take whomever needs it or keep them off Erroy, I think I got this covered for now.

Stellwento: *watches Nameless fume* Hey K! are you getting this? He's really taking it personally, you've got a gift!

Fulgar: And it was what? Saying she could take him and saying she doesn't know what she's afraid of? Indeed impressive.

Skooter: *bounds up to Tynx* You fought dragons. Have a token! *Drops coin in front of Tynx*

Pernoxnix: Levitation, that's a new one. What else have we here besides the invisible, the transfiguring, and the pathokinetic?

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Emuna: *holds hands out and creates bright, purple, glowing, orb, it melts away within a few seconds* Yah, that's all I got....

Brian: Emuna, don't play with your power when we're standing on the edge of a large pit...

Emuna: *sigh* I was just showing Pernoxnix what my levitation is.

Gavin: *growls* Show off.

Emuna: Excuse me?!

Gavin: Well, it's not like I can't make a glowing light!

Emuna: Ha! I'd like to see you try!

Brian: There goes our fighting strike...

Gavin: I bet you would! Except I wouldn't be trying, I would be doing!

Emuna: I doubt that.

Gavin: *holds hands out and tries to make glowing orb...but doesn't* I'm just sleepy...

Emuna: Whatever... Let's just get the coins back to Seymour and get off this cliff before we get blown up by dragons.

Brian: Sure, if you two don't kill each other first...

Gavin: Not my fault she's using her power to control mine!

Brian: Emuna, you really shouldn't do that.

Emuna: Why not? It doesn't hurt anyone... :roll:

Brian: Why's Bethany being so quiet?

Me: *screams at them* YOU GUYS GET THE COINS I'LL HANG BACK HERE! :rofl:


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