Jaynin wrote:
I am torn... the purist in me wants to say "how dare you attempt to make an essence of Robin Hood!!! 

 " the logic in me says, "So? That's cool! 

" 
That's funny, Jaynin!
Seer wrote:
I find your description of his lack of gracefulness intriguing since most interpretations have graceful motion as one of his key qualities. It certainly makes him your own character, unique from traditional Robin Hoods. You also used excellent metaphors. The use of rustic images gives him an almost farm-boy feel that most Robin Hoods don't possess. Well done!
Thanks! I'm glad that his unusualness shone through. Even though I'm using some of the same characters as other Robin Hood stories, I try to make them as much my own as possible.
PrincessoftheKing wrote:
Great job, Raven!
I get a very different impression than your normal, run-of-the-mill Robin Hood! I was also very intrigued by Robin's lack of grace. 

Thanks!