Anyone interested in reading a 13,000 novelette drabble that is pure YA romance? It's clean - just some hand-holding and almost-kisses.

It was an experiment at pantsing (vs outlining) and because it wasn't an odd enough experiment, I gave it 2 endings for a choose-your-own-adventure flavor.

I'm looking for as much feedback as one might want to give me.

Yes, please! I'll PM you my e-mail.

Yay! I shared it with you via Google Drive.

This sounds really cool! Unfortunately with school I wouldn't be able to read it soon enough... But I just wanted to pop in and say this sounds awesome!

Got delayed this morning and then back to back to back meetings this afternoon. Power nap and then some reading!

I'm traveling this weekend (last minute decision to visit my grandmother) but I got your comments, Domici. Thank you! I'll try to reply when I get a chance. And maybe you'll have some time, Lt General, after I edit! ;-)

I'm adding thoughts as they come to me. Work is exhausting my reserves so it may take a couple of days to fully finish. Will holler at you when it's done or you can track it in progress if you're totally bored.

Or I could just say "heck with it" and write even though tired. Updates are in green.

Oh dear, hopefully work eases up on you. Feel better soon!
And thank you - I appreciate it. But I hope you didn't inconvenience yourself!

Why wouldn't I be willing to inconvenience myself for a friend? I enjoyed the story and insight into a different person's thought process.

Work will improve in the next day or so; I just stress over-much. Feel free to write more if you want to distract me from the pressure, though.

I can't tell you how much I've appreciated your input. It's clear I need to "man up" my men and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story improves due to your feedback!

My hubs has been overly-stressed from work lately too. Nano will be quite a distraction and it's almost here!