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 Post subject: On the Kudaren
PostPosted: April 15th, 2012, 9:32 pm 
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Once more I come with words regarding the Kudaren. In order to make them even more deadly than previously known (if that is possible), I have given them more hearts. I am giving them three hearts. two on either side of the chest, and then a third in an undisclosed location (ie, I can't figure out where...). If you want more information on these foul creatures, see my previous thread... When one of the hearts is killed, blood ceases to pump for two minutes, the maximum a human brain can go without oxygen. Kudaren's brains can last longer, and some have been known to cease pumping for longer periods, but the average is approximately two minutes. Only one heart is active at a time, so when the active heart dies, a second heart kicks in after the pause. The Kudaren can bleed out, but it is restricted by the constricting of the wounded heart. This makes them even more dangerous, because to all appearances they are dead, until they get back up and attack you again...

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 Post subject: Re: On the Kudaren
PostPosted: April 16th, 2012, 12:59 am 
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That's a cool idea. :cool:

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PostPosted: April 16th, 2012, 4:15 pm 
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Ooh, creepy... :shock:

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PostPosted: April 17th, 2012, 10:45 pm 
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Thanks! Any ideas for where the third heart could go? Any other suggestions?

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PostPosted: April 18th, 2012, 11:24 am 
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I would think that scientifically speaking, the third heart would have to be pretty close to the lungs, but of course fantasy isn't too scientifically accurate, most of the time. ;) Hmm.....Maybe the third heart is somewhere underneath the lungs..?

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PostPosted: April 25th, 2012, 12:17 pm 
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Thanks! Sorry it took so long to reply, but things have been a bit busy here, so I haven't had much time...

That's definitely where the third heart is going, I can't believe I didn't think of it before, so thank you very much for the help! It is greatly appreciated!

Any other thoughts/suggestions, anyone?

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PostPosted: April 25th, 2012, 3:03 pm 
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No problem. :D Good to have you back! :D

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Thanks! It's good to be back in the saddle, even if it's a little sporadic...

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*Really loves the 3 hearts idea.*

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Thanks, I thought about it while watching Doctor Who... :D

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