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| Author: | Aragorn [ October 2nd, 2011, 9:41 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | The Puppet Master | 
| On a stage, right behind a black curtain Stood dolls of light incarnate The puppet master smiled and was certain That the crowd’s fears would abate Once they saw each tiny innocent smile On faces so young and pale Once the puppets spoke, negating all guile The story they were to tell Up went the curtain, there the stage of white Where angelic voices soared The crowd enthralled by the children of light Let past warnings be ignored The puppet master smiled, whispering words Watching his child puppets play In the shadows crept the ones who had heard And got their task underway The crowd was smiling, laughing, and crying The beauty leaving them awed They did not see, their perception dying That around them dark things crawled The shadows kissed their new prey with delight Fleeing as the curtain fell The crowd left, a darkness over their sight Believing that all was well But in the night, as their hearts beat faster They woke to a dreadful sound Caught in the web of the puppet master Laughter echoed all around | |
| Author: | BushMaid [ October 3rd, 2011, 12:11 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| *slackjaw*  That is an awesome poem. | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 3rd, 2011, 12:43 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Thank you, BushMaid.   | |
| Author: | Bethany Faith [ October 3rd, 2011, 6:41 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Wow...  That is amazingly creepy... Me likes!   | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 3rd, 2011, 2:14 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Thank you, Bethany.   | |
| Author: | J. Grace Pennington [ October 3rd, 2011, 2:31 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| That is amazing, Jonathan! Wow, it's very sobering. I love it! It's always awesome when you post your work.   | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 3rd, 2011, 3:18 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Thank you, Aniese.   | |
| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 3rd, 2011, 8:38 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| *Grins * I have always really liked this one, I am glad everyone now gets to see it.   | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 3rd, 2011, 9:30 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| I'm glad you like it, Airianna. Thank you.   | |
| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ October 3rd, 2011, 10:15 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
|  Wow... that is amazing. I love this poem.   | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 3rd, 2011, 10:17 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Thank you, Suiauthon.   | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 7th, 2011, 12:20 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| So... is this ready? | |
| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 8th, 2011, 5:23 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Power outages.  Gotta love them.  Especially when they last multiple days. Yes, this is. I was gonna call Philli and tell her to have you post this, but my phone battery was dead, and I couldn't get her number to come up.   What a mess! I am so sorry for the delay. Please post this epic masterpiece, Jonathan!!! | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 8th, 2011, 11:57 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| It's mostly my fault for not being more proactive on getting it up.  It's posted now.   | |
| Author: | Lady Elanor [ October 9th, 2011, 5:42 am ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Wow, this is an amazing poem, Jon.  I love it. | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 9th, 2011, 2:34 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Thank you, Lady Elanor.   | |
| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 11th, 2011, 7:48 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Not your fault at all. Okay, archive worthy now! | |
| Author: | Aragorn [ October 11th, 2011, 7:51 pm ] | 
| Post subject: | Re: The Puppet Master | 
| Okay. To the archive it goes.   | |
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