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Because of the important nature of it, it’s never taken lightly and there should always be plenty of research done.
I found this sentence to be a little awkward... Perhaps something like:
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Because of how important publishing is, the process is never taken lightly, and you should always do plenty of research beforehand.
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As previously stated, there are many way that one may go about publishing.
I think you meant to say "ways" here.
The main ones of these that I’ll be looking at are traditional publishing vs. self-publishing, and e-book vs. physical publishing. I was very familiar with these methods when I began my research, but I wanted to know which form or way of publishing worked best.
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As I researched, I discovered that each mode is good in different ways, and the advantages and disadvantages of each one make it fit certain circumstances.
This one also felt a little awkward. Maybe something like:
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As I researched, I discovered that each of these types of publishing have both great advantages and disadvantages allowing them to fulfill certain purposes.
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I found much valuable information there, and links to other websites.
Here you don't need the comma because the phrase after the conjunction is not a clause.
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From these links I chose to look at what some publishing companies had to say first-hand, particularly
http://www.lulu.com, and
http://www.smashwords.com. Lulu is a self-publishing service, and Smashwords is an e-book publishing service. I also checked out some other trusted sources, and soon enough I had plenty of information to work with.
I like this section. It is very clear and concise, letting your reader know what the different websites had to offer. What I would suggest for here would be adding in some other links for the other websites you checked out.
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The first thing I learned in my research was an almost obvious statement from Valerie Peterson: It doesn’t matter if the piece you are looking to publish is printed or in e-book format, or whether it is traditionally or self-published if the content doesn’t satisfy readers. Also I learned from Robert Treskillard that any method decided upon, much, if not all of the marketing is left up to the author.
This is an excellent section! Just a couple of punctuation things I noticed: You probably want to put quotation marks around the quote from Valerie Peterson, and the "Also" in the paragraph needs a comma after it. I love the information put into this paragraph, though!
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In fact, the author actually makes money if their draft is accepted; there is an advance given against future sales.
This sentence seemed just a tad disconnected. Perhaps you could try something like:
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In fact, the author actually makes money if their draft is accepted; they are given an advance against future sales.
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The second thing about traditional publishing is it gives the author some credibility in the eyes of the reader. If readers were to see a book that was self-published beside a book that was published traditionally, they would be more likely to pick up the book that was traditionally published. In their mind, if the book was good enough for the publisher, it’s good enough for them. When self-publishing, the reader doesn’t know if the book is good or not off hand, because there is no mark of a publisher that they trust or like to prove to them that the read is worth their time and money. So, self-publishing gives the author less credibility in the eyes of the public.
This is an excellent paragraph! I love the information and example you give; it let me know some things that I would most definitely want to consider in publishing.
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If the process is through an e-book publisher, then the author receives a similar cut as if they were being traditionally published.
I think it would flow a little better here to use "he" instead of "they."
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But e-books do have advantages.
Here I'd suggest saying:
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E-books do have their advantages, however.
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There are exceptions to this of course. There are authors who have begun very successfully with a self-published work, and many authors who have gained reader credibility still use traditional publishing means for their novels or other works.
This is a great paragraph! The one thing I would suggest for it is adding one more sentence to help it conclude. The last sentence there left me hanging, wanting a little bit more. Something like the following could work:
If you're a published author, Elanhil, I would suggest saying something like:
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Overall, I have found that _____ method of publishing has been very successful, and I highly recommend it.
Or you could say:
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All of these are very effective ways of publishing, and I encourage you to research them yourself and figure out which means is the best for you.
These might not be the best examples to use, but I'm sure you get the picture.
One last editing note I'd like to leave you with is this: Just look out for contractions. Usually those are not encouraged for formal writing, so keep an eye out for them.
One last overall note: This is an amazing blog post! I found out a lot about publishing, and now I have an idea of how I want to begin publishing when my stories are finished. Great job, keep up the good work, and I look forward to reading more of your writing.
