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Author:  Suiauthon Mimetes [ August 9th, 2011, 11:52 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Repentance.

Good job, Inesdar! :D

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...only to turn into a completely lovable character overnight, or to killed of by the author (generally by sacrificing themselves)...

There should be a be in-between to and killed and of should be off.

Quote:
...yes God is working in that person’s life...

I think there should be a comma after yes.

Other than those items I didn't see anything else, great job! :D

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ August 11th, 2011, 12:00 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Repentance.

Today is posting day, Brendan. Are you going to post it, or do you need Philli to post it?

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ August 14th, 2011, 10:57 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Repentance.

Sorry, my internet was gone. Okay, did this not get posted?

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ August 15th, 2011, 12:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Repentance.

Okay, I'll take care of it.

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ September 4th, 2011, 8:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Repentance.

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