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| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ August 9th, 2011, 11:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Repentance. |
Good job, Inesdar! Quote: ...only to turn into a completely lovable character overnight, or to killed of by the author (generally by sacrificing themselves)... There should be a be in-between to and killed and of should be off. Quote: ...yes God is working in that person’s life... I think there should be a comma after yes. Other than those items I didn't see anything else, great job! |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ August 11th, 2011, 12:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Repentance. |
Today is posting day, Brendan. Are you going to post it, or do you need Philli to post it? |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ August 14th, 2011, 10:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Repentance. |
Sorry, my internet was gone. Okay, did this not get posted? |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ August 15th, 2011, 12:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Repentance. |
Okay, I'll take care of it. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ September 4th, 2011, 8:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Repentance. |
This thread has been archived now that the post is published on the blog. |
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