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 Post subject: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 8th, 2011, 9:42 pm 
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Set into the tower was an arched door with a wooden ring for a handle. The traveler glanced around apprehensively, crossed to the door and knocked. Receiving no answer he pulled the ring and the door creaked open. Warily he entered, letting the door close behind him.

Inside the tower was dark and quiet. Outside the wind beat at the walls, but the stone structure had withstood worse and all was still within. As his eyes adjusted he made out a spiraling staircase. There was nothing else in the room. Curiosity battled with reason but after a moment’s hesitation he began to climb.

The stairs were much longer than he would have supposed them to be from outside, and the higher he climbed the farther it seemed he had to go. The challenge fed his determination however, and he kept doggedly on. It was dark and quiet. The only sound was his muted footsteps and labored breathing. On and on he climbed. As his reason told him to go down while he could, something drew him on without his knowledge. The closer he got the stronger the binding became, leading him higher, and pulling him closer.
Far down below, on the surface of the world, time swirled and rippled, occasionally snagging. In one of those snags stood the tower reaching up into eternity, caught between ages; a lookout post for events it could never be a part of.

None of this did the traveler know as he pressed doggedly on, drawn by that he did not understand. His reason at last surrendered to the binding and he climbed without questioning, his mind emptied of all thoughts except the continuous stone walls.

Time slowed as he went higher, and at last came almost to a stop. His progress quickened and the end came in sight. At last the stairs ended on a landing, and another door appeared where more stairs would have been, a wooden ring set into it for a handle.

He reached out without hesitation and pulled the door open.


Above is an excerpt from one of my many WIP describing a Tower of Neverending Stairs, also known as the Tower of Infinity, the Neverending Tower, the Tower of Eternity, the Tower of Impossible Stairs, the Tower of Eternal Stairs, the Unending Tower of Stairs, the Tower of Endless Stairs, the Endless Tower of Stairs, the Everlasting Tower of Stairs, the Tower of Infinite Stairs, or various variations on neverending, eternal, everlasting infinite, endless or impossible, combined with the words ‘tower’ and ‘stairs’.
Do you get the idea?

Outside the tower looks like an ordinary tower, though it’s oftentimes in ruins. No one lives there however, it’s always abandoned, and inside there is nothing but a flight of stairs to the next floor. Climbing to the next floor, however, can take days, months, even years. Sometimes you never get there, unless you understand the magic that built the illusion.

It is an illusion of course, you say. Like the impossible stairs built by the Penroses? Sometimes. Let me share with you the examples of such towers as found in fantasy.

Wind Tower (The Riddle Master of Hed trilogy): The Wind Tower is a ruin on the Wind plain, once a city of the Earth masters. Few have tried to climb it, taking food for many days, but they eventually came back down. The interior changes color as one climbs. The walls on each level are a different color. The levels are illusion only, worked by a magic to keep everyone out except for the High-One’s heir. One clever girl figures out a way around and flies to the to the window, avoiding the stairs and spell entirely.

Tower of Time (Here there be Dragons): This is an interesting tower, in that it is actually as tall as it is tall. On the bottom is the first time, and a new floor is added for time that passes. It takes days to climb the stairs, obviously, but if you get high enough you will catch up with the present. Doors along the way open out into the past. The top floor is inhabited by the time-keeper.

Neverending Tower
(The Hero and the Crown): This tower had no door, and part of the wall had to be knocked down in order to gain entry. While it appeared to be of short height, the MC climbed for centuries before reaching the top. After defeating the antagonist on the top level the tower was destroyed and, instead of breaking the spell, she proceeded to fall for centuries; fall as far as she climbed. So it seems it was actually really very tall, but the illusion was in making it appear a physical height. The MC thought a great deal as she climbed, thinking she would climb forever and be added to her country's collection of gods “The god who climbs.” As she fell she wondered if she would be “the god who falls” or even perhaps “the god who climbs and then falls.” Eventually, of course, she reaches the bottom.

Tower of Infinity (The Phantom Tollbooth): In the kingdom of numbers the MC of this book asks how to find infinity. At first he is told to walk a straight line forever, but he asks for a faster route. He's then pointed to a door that leads to a staircase. He climbs and climbs for several hours before realizing it's a waste of time and comes back down, finally understanding the meaning of infinite.

I have hunted through google, and through the knowledge of my comrades, through fairy tales and folklore and I have failed to find the origin of such a tower. I would be inclined to suspect however, that it is based in part on the Tower of Babel.

And they said, “Let us build us a city and a tower, whose top may reach unto heaven; and let us make us a name, lest we be scattered abroad upon the face of the whole earth.”

“Whose top may reach unto heaven” seems to sound very similar to some of the aforementioned towers, including my own. While my tower was drawn from the towers I read of, I don’t think it would be too much to assume that they, or their inspiration was built off of the tower of Babel, reaching up to heaven so that no flood could ever cover it. A tower so high, it would take days to travel from top to bottom. This would also explain why these towers are always unfinished, or in ruins.

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 Post subject: Re: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 8th, 2011, 9:45 pm 
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Author's notes (that editors might find useful or interesting): The excerpt is a discarded opening to Lightning Ranger Part Three. Lightning was supposed to meet a witch there who taught him to read and... yeah, there are reasons part three is still waiting to get written. But I liked the excerpt. :D

I cannot remember the details on Phantom Tollbooth to save my life. I'm going to the library and will double check things (find some names) but if anyone who's read the book (Reiyen) pick out errors in my representation, just let me know.

Like everything else I write I dislike the title, which was simply temporary. Tower of Eternity might be better, which is why I put it there as well. :P

And the ending... fails. But that's all. :D

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Floyd was frozen where he stood. He struggled to breathe, but the air smelled of blood and death and guilt. He tried to formulate a name, to ask, but language was meaningless, and words would not come. He tried to scream but the sound got stuck in his heart, shattered into a million pieces, and scattered to the wind.

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 Post subject: Re: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 8th, 2011, 9:57 pm 
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That was great, Vanya. I enjoyed reading that. :D I see nothing to edit...

I've read 'The Phantom Tollbooth', and I can't quite remember that part... I'll go get it and read that part... *dashes*

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 Post subject: Re: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 8th, 2011, 10:13 pm 
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Here's the excerpt for you. You got it right. :D

"Just follow that line forever," said the Mathemagician, "and when you reach the end, turn left. There you'll find the land of Infinity, where the tallest, the shortest, the biggest, the smallest, and the most and the least of everything are kept."
"I really don't have that much time," said Milo anxiously. "Isn't there a quicker way?"
"Well, you might try this flight of stairs," he suggested, opening another door and pointing up. "It goes there, too."
Milo bounded across the room and started up the stairs two at a time. "Wait for me please," he shouted to Tock and the Humbug. "I'll be gone just a few minutes."

Up he went - very quickly at first - then more slowly - then in a little while even more slowly then that - and finally, after many minutes of climbing up the endless stairway, one wear foot was barely able to follow the other. Milo suddenly realized that with all his effort he was no closer to the top than when he began, and no t a great deal further from the bottom. But he struggled on for a while longer, until at last, completely exhausted, he collapsed onto one of the steps.
"I should have known it," he mumbled, resting his tired legs and filling his lungs with air. "This is just like the line that goes on forever, and I'll never get there."
"You wouldn't like it much anyway," someone replied gently. "Infinity is a dreadfully poor place. They can never manage to make ends meet."
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"You see," he [the half child] went on, "it's very much like your trying to reach Infinity. You know it's there, but you just don't know where - but just because you can never reach it doesn't mean that it's not worth looking for."
"I hadn't thought of it that way," said Milo, starting down the stairs. "I think I'll go back now."
"A wise decision," the child agreed; "bu try again someday - perhaps you'll get much closer." And, as Milo waved good-by, he smiled warmly, which he did on the average of 47 times a day.
"Everyone here knows so much more than I do," thought Milo as he leaped from step to step. "I'll have to do a lot better if I'm going to rescue the princesses."
In a few moments he'd reached the bottom again and burst into the workshop where Tock and the Humbug were eagerly watching the Mathemagician perform.
"Ah, back already," he cried, greeting him with a friendly wave. "I hope you found what you were looking for."
"I'm afraid not," admitted Milo. And then he added in a very discouraged tone, "Everything in Digitopolis is much too difficult for me."

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 Post subject: Re: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 8th, 2011, 11:43 pm 
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Ah yes, thank you very much for that. I made some minor alterations to that particular description to fit in better, but it's mostly the same. :D

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Floyd was frozen where he stood. He struggled to breathe, but the air smelled of blood and death and guilt. He tried to formulate a name, to ask, but language was meaningless, and words would not come. He tried to scream but the sound got stuck in his heart, shattered into a million pieces, and scattered to the wind.

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 Post subject: Re: Never-Ending Staircase (Tower of Eternity)
PostPosted: May 9th, 2011, 10:22 am 
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Only thing I noticed was that in this part quoted below, "countries" should be "country's" to make it singular possessive instead of just plural.

Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:
The MC thought a great deal as she climbed, thinking she would climb forever and be added to her countries collection of gods “The god who climbs.”

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Edited. Thanks. :D

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Floyd was frozen where he stood. He struggled to breathe, but the air smelled of blood and death and guilt. He tried to formulate a name, to ask, but language was meaningless, and words would not come. He tried to scream but the sound got stuck in his heart, shattered into a million pieces, and scattered to the wind.

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Kaitlyn, I didn't get any instructions on this, and I gather you're generally unavailable this week, but I know you usually post on the blog on Thursday and since I've already engineered to have all manner of permissions over there I'll just go ahead and post it and hope I'm doing the right thing. :D

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Floyd was frozen where he stood. He struggled to breathe, but the air smelled of blood and death and guilt. He tried to formulate a name, to ask, but language was meaningless, and words would not come. He tried to scream but the sound got stuck in his heart, shattered into a million pieces, and scattered to the wind.

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*would hug Katie, but refrains for Katie's sake *

I feel soooo bad about dropping the ball on this. Yes, you did exactly what you were supposed to. Thanks so much for taking the initiative and posting this, Katie. I really couldn't contact you about it on Thursday, and I've felt horrible about it! I'm glad you were able to get it posted.

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

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