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 Post subject: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: February 17th, 2011, 1:13 pm 
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Book Review: Saved at Sea
Saved at Sea is an old-fashioned book with good values which was masterfully written in the 1800s by Mrs. O.F. Walton. It was published much later, by the Lamplighter Rare Collector's Series and is only sold by them.. This 117-page book offers special appeal to boys, but also intrigues girls. It is the story of a lighthouse, standing tall and strong on the small island where Alick Fergusson lives with his grandfather. A neighbor, Jem Millar, lives on the island with his family also. Alick, Jem Millar, and Mr. Fergusson see a ship in distress one late night. They are able to save no lives except one bundle. They discover what the bundle is- a little girl. What happened to her parents? Alick develops a close relationship with the young toddler. But they are all wondering what happened to her parents. Alick soons finds a hymn about being on a Rock {On Christ the sold Rock I stand, all other ground is sinking sand}. He is confused, because he thought that the lighthouse was like a rock. Yet he finds the true Rock- Jesus Christ. Will Alick and his grandfather cope with the drastic death of someone they knew and loved? When someone mysterious shows up, will Alick recognize him? Find out in Saved at Sea!

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: February 17th, 2011, 11:34 pm 
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Just wanted to let the mods & eds know that they don't need to edit this piece just yet. We'll let y'all know when this piece comes up on the schedule and is ready for it's final polish. However, if anyone is bored in the meantime, feel free to post your thoughts. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: February 18th, 2011, 3:21 pm 
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I have PMed Philli.
I've updated it as of today.
Any thoughts?

Also... it will be ready for editing in a few days. Just want to discuss it with Philli and probably Airi.

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: February 20th, 2011, 12:09 pm 
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As I said via PM, the new version is great! Airianna loves it. :D

Just to clarify, you're welcome to do as much editing and critique-gathering as you want. Just be warned that Airianna and I will ask you to post your piece here again, for a final polish, just before it goes up on the blog. But that needn't stop you from getting opinions on it now.

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: February 25th, 2011, 12:19 pm 
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Philadelphia wrote:
As I said via PM, the new version is great! Airianna loves it. :D

Just to clarify, you're welcome to do as much editing and critique-gathering as you want. Just be warned that Airianna and I will ask you to post your piece here again, for a final polish, just before it goes up on the blog. But that needn't stop you from getting opinions on it now.

Right! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 12th, 2011, 11:41 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 12th, 2011, 1:53 pm 
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Thanks, Elly. :D Your post will be coming up next thursday (4/21), so we will need to get this edited before long.

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 13th, 2011, 9:05 am 
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Thank you, Airi. It's coming up soon. :)

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 13th, 2011, 10:51 am 
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Yes, isn't it exciting?

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

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The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 13th, 2011, 12:04 pm 
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Positive!

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 18th, 2011, 2:49 pm 
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Elly wrote:
It was published much later, by the Lamplighter Rare Collector's Series and is only sold by them..


There are two full stops here when it only needs one.

Elly wrote:
Alick soons finds a hymn about being on a Rock


This should say 'Alick soon finds a hymn about being on a Rock.

I love it, it tells you enough but not too much to spoil the plot. :D Nice one Elly.

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Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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 Post subject: Re: Saved at Sea book review
PostPosted: April 20th, 2011, 6:00 pm 
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Alrighty Miss Elly, tomorrow you may post this :D

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


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