Here is my submission, open to any harsh critiquing and flaw finding you can think of.
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If I am to be 100% honest, I'm not quite sure what to write. As of this moment, it is 12:17 am on November 17. My word count is 9,297, that's 19,042 words behind. As you can see, I'm still suffering from Week Two blues, as Chris Baty calls them I believe.
Perhaps you're also suffering from an extended case of the Blues. Don't fret chum, everyone gets over the blues eventually. No illness is permanent. They just sometimes need a lot of time to get over.
You may also be cheered to know that the saying "It's always darkest before Dawn" also applies here. We're sunk in the deepest trench of the darkest ocean, and it's here that Atlantis can be found. In Atlantis you find treasures beyond compare, light, relief, and a boost to the surface. You will soon find your second wind to fill your sails and propel you along the smooth seas of Thanksgiving break, if you have one.
On a more practical note, how's the plot? If by any chance your characters are searching for Atlantis, this probably the spot where they should be in the deepest trench of the darkest ocean, and about to find it. If not, thing figuratively.
To compare my plot with the search for Atlantis theme I've got here, my characters are about to fully embark on the quest. They've started but not yet fully committed.
Another well used saying, especially on the NaNo forums, "There's nothing like murder or betrayal to make a story more interesting." Chances are, you've already heard that, and maybe even its second form. "There's nothing like murder or betrayal to make a story more interesting, preferably both murder and betrayal at the same time."
You may not be sure how this fits into your novel, but it can. Do you have a character that appears to be jealous or unhappy? You already have someone with a reason to betray the character's allies. A simple betrayal can cause external and internal conflict. It's often the internal that hurts the most.
Perhaps you don't like your characters anymore. They're angry and don't listen to you. They aren't heroes anymore, they decided to become antiheros. What do you do? Let them loose and see how they like the consequences. Death, destruction, and overall chaos ensue when they failed to do what they tell you. It should get them back on track, or at least teach them a lesson. They go exploring sunken ships, where some unimportant non-hero character gets eaten by a shark or some other grisly fate.
In revamping all these, you mustn’t forget to take care of the setting. The setting is perhaps the most under rated aspect of writing. There are entire books about making plot and character, but not so many about setting. Do not under estimate it. Not only does lots of description boost your word count, it creates a foundation for your readers. I know that when I read “The Lightning Thief,” the lack of description and un-named characters made me dis-like it. Everything else was alright, but the lack of description made it seem to be in a vacuum.
Or maybe you no longer care about your story as a whole. This is harder to deal with. You mist revitalize the spark within you. Add murder and betrayal. Send one of your favorite characters deep into danger, with no hope of escape. Add a character you like. Make the story interesting again, add something you really want to try, but don’t think it will fit. Whatever you do, make it interesting. If you don’t the readers will sense your boredom and feel the same.
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In the end you're the writer so you can change and re change it as much as you like 
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Your story sounds exciting. 