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Author:  Faith_Blum [ February 26th, 2018, 1:53 pm ]
Post subject:  Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly Challenge #296: Write something about parents.

Directions:
1. Post on the challenge thread, declaring the goals you have committed to. This must be done before midnight on Tuesday.
2. When you have finished your goals, post on the challenge thread again, stating what goals you have completed, how many times you have completed them, and whether any of them were combined.
3. At 10AM on Monday you are not allowed to report any more finished goals, and the challenge is over.


Rules:
1. You can repeat the weekly challenges, and get more points, but if you repeat your own personal goal, you will not get extra points.
2. The organizer has the right to veto any personal goal that seems too easy (i.e. writing a sentence).


Points:
You can earn points by:
1. completing the weekly challenge
2. repeating the weekly challenge
3. completing your personal goal
4. combining your personal goal and the weekly challenge

Author:  Faith_Blum [ February 26th, 2018, 1:54 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Writerly Warriors for February 26-March 4:

AuthorFaith: Weekly challenge accepted. Completed
Personal goal: Go through half of HLM beta-reader comments Failed

atpollard: Personal Goal: write 3000 words Failed

Teyn Greenhood: Weekly challenge accepted. Completed and combined
Personal goal: Write at least 200 words every day this week. Completed and combined

Lady Brie D.: Weekly challenge accepted. Completed
Personal goal: Write at least 200 words every day this week. Completed

Author:  Faith_Blum [ February 26th, 2018, 1:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly challenge accepted.
Personal goal: Go through half of HLM beta-reader comments
Time Zone: CST

Author:  atpollard [ February 26th, 2018, 3:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Personal Goal: write 3000 words
Time Zone: EST

Author:  Teyn Greenhood [ February 26th, 2018, 3:37 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly challenge accepted.
Personal goal: Write at least 200 words every day this week.

Author:  Lady Brie D. [ February 27th, 2018, 12:10 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly challenge accepted.
Personal goal: Edit chapter

Timezone: AEDT

Author:  Teyn Greenhood [ March 3rd, 2018, 1:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly challenge complete.
Personal goal complete.

Not sure if it counts as combining if I only wrote about parents one day, but I did that.

Author:  Domici [ March 3rd, 2018, 5:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Teyn Greenhood wrote:
Weekly challenge complete.
Personal goal complete.

Not sure if it counts as combining if I only wrote about parents one day, but I did that.


I'd say it combines.

Author:  Teyn Greenhood [ March 3rd, 2018, 7:26 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Domici wrote:
Teyn Greenhood wrote:
Weekly challenge complete.
Personal goal complete.

Not sure if it counts as combining if I only wrote about parents one day, but I did that.


I'd say it combines.

Okay, thanks! :D

It was pretty bad though because I was writing and going, "Uh, they aren't going to have this conversation this week at the rate they're moving, and I need to write it this week." So I succumbed to my great weakness last night- making gaps in the storyline. D: :roll:

Author:  Domici [ March 3rd, 2018, 7:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Teyn Greenhood wrote:
It was pretty bad though because I was writing and going, "Uh, they aren't going to have this conversation this week at the rate they're moving, and I need to write it this week." So I succumbed to my great weakness last night- making gaps in the storyline. D: :roll:


Ah, young Padawan, let me teach you the ways of the Force (of Revision). Gaps are your friend, indeed, a comfort and a tool. Embrace the gap now; then fill in the story with depth learned from the far side of the tale.

To be less wordy, don't worry about a gap. I have whole books as gaps; I've learned stuff in Book 4 that I now set up in Book 1. For example, early in Book 4 Al tells Dede about a "vacation" where she learned to sky dive. That wasn't mentioned anywhere. Now it is. Like, as of this week's edits for Book 1.

Author:  Teyn Greenhood [ March 3rd, 2018, 8:22 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Domici wrote:
Teyn Greenhood wrote:
It was pretty bad though because I was writing and going, "Uh, they aren't going to have this conversation this week at the rate they're moving, and I need to write it this week." So I succumbed to my great weakness last night- making gaps in the storyline. D: :roll:


Ah, young Padawan, let me teach you the ways of the Force (of Revision). Gaps are your friend, indeed, a comfort and a tool. Embrace the gap now; then fill in the story with depth learned from the far side of the tale.

To be less wordy, don't worry about a gap. I have whole books as gaps; I've learned stuff in Book 4 that I now set up in Book 1. For example, early in Book 4 Al tells Dede about a "vacation" where she learned to sky dive. That wasn't mentioned anywhere. Now it is. Like, as of this week's edits for Book 1.

Yeah, except my problem is that I write the same scenes and leave the same gaps. Then I end up writing something like this: *insert conversation* *insert fight scene* *insert attack on this particular city* *insert this life-and-death conversation* *insert scene where this character dies* *insert happy ending*. (I have literally done this, no joke.)

*headdesk*

And my characters are like, "Uh, how exactly did I get here?"
Me: "Oh, I kind of skipped that part - not sure when I'm going to write it - but just roll with it and be miserable/fine now."
Characters: "...sure..."
(or in Renn's case: "I'm supposed to know about who my parents are, but you haven't told me yet! Wait, I'm seriously that person? No, no. He died, thought he died at least. I guess I'm still alive or... I'm so confused.")

Author:  atpollard [ March 3rd, 2018, 9:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Personal Goal (write 3000 words): Big Fail ... only made 500 words this week.

Author:  Domici [ March 3rd, 2018, 9:06 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

atpollard wrote:
Personal Goal (write 3000 words): Big Fail ... only made 500 words this week.


You still have time; Spyder and company have lots of options. :)

Author:  Domici [ March 3rd, 2018, 9:13 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Teyn Greenhood wrote:
Yeah, except my problem is that I write the same scenes and leave the same gaps. Then I end up writing something like this: *insert conversation* *insert fight scene* *insert attack on this particular city* *insert this life-and-death conversation* *insert scene where this character dies* *insert happy ending*. (I have literally done this, no joke.)

*headdesk*

And my characters are like, "Uh, how exactly did I get here?"
Me: "Oh, I kind of skipped that part - not sure when I'm going to write it - but just roll with it and be miserable/fine now."
Characters: "...sure..."
(or in Renn's case: "I'm supposed to know about who my parents are, but you haven't told me yet! Wait, I'm seriously that person? No, no. He died, thought he died at least. I guess I'm still alive or... I'm so confused.")


Sounds like you have a bad case of "expectations". Worse than cooties, trust me. You expect to write in a certain way. You might expect others to not have the issues you're facing. Few things could be further from the truth. I have this great idea for Book 3 but nothing written. Skipped it and am on Book 5, "Tinny". Mostly because my Ever Enthusiastic Reader liked the character.

Before I totter off to nappy time, let me share my secret:

QUIT WORRYING ABOUT IT! SERIOUSLY, GIRL; YOU WRITE WELL!

It took me a hear and a half to figure out why Parker Levigne stood up and clapped for Al at the awards banquet. Really; July 2016 for the first draft and "figure it out" February 2018. If you have those scenes you're doing great outlines. Get to them when you are ready.

Author:  Faith_Blum [ March 4th, 2018, 8:00 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Weekly challenge completed.
Personal goal failed.

Author:  Lady Brie D. [ March 4th, 2018, 7:01 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

Personal Goal complete.
Weekly challenge complete.
Not getting distracted when going to report: Epic Fail. Should have done it last night despite the late hour.

Author:  Faith_Blum [ March 5th, 2018, 8:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Holy Worlds Weekly Challenge: Week 296

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