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Author:  Lady Sparks [ October 19th, 2017, 5:02 pm ]
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Anyone interested in reading a 13,000 novelette drabble that is pure YA romance? It's clean - just some hand-holding and almost-kisses.

It was an experiment at pantsing (vs outlining) and because it wasn't an odd enough experiment, I gave it 2 endings for a choose-your-own-adventure flavor.

I'm looking for as much feedback as one might want to give me.
Author:  Domici [ October 19th, 2017, 6:08 pm ]
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Yes, please! I'll PM you my e-mail.
Author:  Lady Sparks [ October 19th, 2017, 8:32 pm ]
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Yay! I shared it with you via Google Drive. :D
Author:  Rachel Newhouse [ October 20th, 2017, 1:43 pm ]
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This sounds really cool! Unfortunately with school I wouldn't be able to read it soon enough... But I just wanted to pop in and say this sounds awesome!
Author:  Domici [ October 20th, 2017, 3:13 pm ]
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Got delayed this morning and then back to back to back meetings this afternoon. Power nap and then some reading!
Author:  Lady Sparks [ October 21st, 2017, 10:12 am ]
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I'm traveling this weekend (last minute decision to visit my grandmother) but I got your comments, Domici. Thank you! I'll try to reply when I get a chance. And maybe you'll have some time, Lt General, after I edit! ;-)
Author:  Domici [ October 24th, 2017, 5:09 pm ]
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I'm adding thoughts as they come to me. Work is exhausting my reserves so it may take a couple of days to fully finish. Will holler at you when it's done or you can track it in progress if you're totally bored. :)
Author:  Domici [ October 24th, 2017, 7:11 pm ]
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Or I could just say "heck with it" and write even though tired. Updates are in green.
Author:  Lady Sparks [ October 24th, 2017, 8:12 pm ]
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Oh dear, hopefully work eases up on you. Feel better soon!
And thank you - I appreciate it. But I hope you didn't inconvenience yourself! ^_^
Author:  Domici [ October 25th, 2017, 3:08 am ]
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Lady Sparks wrote:
Oh dear, hopefully work eases up on you. Feel better soon!
And thank you - I appreciate it. But I hope you didn't inconvenience yourself! ^_^


Why wouldn't I be willing to inconvenience myself for a friend? I enjoyed the story and insight into a different person's thought process.

Work will improve in the next day or so; I just stress over-much. Feel free to write more if you want to distract me from the pressure, though. :P
Author:  Lady Sparks [ October 25th, 2017, 9:18 am ]
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I can't tell you how much I've appreciated your input. It's clear I need to "man up" my men and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story improves due to your feedback!

My hubs has been overly-stressed from work lately too. Nano will be quite a distraction and it's almost here!
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