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 Post subject: Greetings in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 8:56 am 
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Greetings,

I am Falcon Lord, I am a writer, I am hoping that HW will have helpful criticism that will help me to become better. Well that's it, hope to get to know some new friends soon.

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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 10:23 am 
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Welcome, Falcon Lord! ;)


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 10:29 am 
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That picture look's familiar, Do I know you? :D

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"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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Yep. :D At least, I know you, but whether or not you know me is debatable.


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Cool avatar, btw. :)


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 10:39 am 
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Thanks :cool:

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Emunah is the Hebrew word meaning faith.


"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
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You two know each other, yes.


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 2:13 pm 
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Yes, I figured that out :cool:

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Emunah is the Hebrew word meaning faith.


"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 3rd, 2010, 11:54 pm 
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How does one not know one knows one? Anyways, welcome to the forum, Falcon Lord! It's a tough bunch of critics that hangs out here, and they'll seemingly strangle your writing, but it's all for your own good. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 4th, 2010, 3:34 pm 
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I feel like family already :D

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"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
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How does one not know one knows one? Anyways, welcome to the forum, Falcon Lord! It's a tough bunch of critics that hangs out here, and they'll seemingly strangle your writing, but it's all for your own good. :D

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Welcome Falcon Lord! I look forward to giving you encouraging advice... I promise I wont be harsh :D

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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
PostPosted: July 4th, 2010, 11:41 pm 
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Thank's for not being harsh, I have wrote story's (of me and a few friends) but they weren't like "Super-Amazing"

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"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
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Welcome, Falcon Lord! :)


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Welcome, welcome! Glad to have you here! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Greeting's in Him!
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Thank you, I'm glad to be here ;)

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"The youth ran up the stairs, ever since he was told he was a Keeper, destined to become a powerful user of fire, lightning, water, earth, or air, just as his great grandfather had been, he had busily prepared himself for the day that the Counsel would take his DNA and mix it with that of the Verix plant.  The plant would then transform him into the Keeper, if one happened to find the Verix plant, it would be entirely impossible for that person to transform himself, only those with the correct DNA could be transformed. The Counsel had said it would be soon, for there were terrible forces at work in the east, so they said."


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