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Jonathan Black
 Post subject: Hello
PostPosted: June 8th, 2010, 3:18 pm 
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Hi, my name is Jonathan Black. I am 15 years old and I would like to be a writer but I have not done very much towards that (aside from a few unfinished short stories).
I found out about this forum from my sister (Zoey Lillylight) and I was hoping that it would help me to become better at writing.
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Lady Terra
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PostPosted: June 8th, 2010, 3:22 pm 
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It is good to have you, Jonathan! Welcome to Holy Worlds :D :).

Your sister is a very nice person, so I'm sure you will fit in just fine. ;)

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Aris Hunter
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PostPosted: June 8th, 2010, 3:27 pm 
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Greetings and welcome, Master Black! ;)

Aw, you're so sweet, Lady Terra, thank you! *Hugs*

Yeah, I'm sure he'll fit in just fine. He's an AWESOME brother.

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Lady Terra
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PostPosted: June 8th, 2010, 3:30 pm 
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Zoey Lillylight wrote:
Aw, you're so sweet, Lady Terra, thank you! *Hugs*


You're welcome ;) :D :). *Hugs back*

I'll look forward to reading any of your stories Master Black. ;) (Couldn't resist.)

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My uncle kissed my hand, a peaceful expression on his face, “Goodbye Teresse.”
I slipped past the gate with Malka and ran into the forest, gazing back one last time to see the lights of my beloved city, Arenford--and the capture of my last living relative, uncle Eldon.

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Calenmiriel
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PostPosted: June 8th, 2010, 7:22 pm 
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Welcome to the forum! There's a lot of really great, helpful people here who will definitely be of assistance when it comes to your writing. Oh, and don't be put off by critiques. We're just helping you move forward in your writing. :D

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Taiven Knight
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PostPosted: June 9th, 2010, 10:00 am 
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Welcome Holy Worlds, Sir Black! :)

You should have tons of fun learning all the different writing techniques on here. :)

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Jonathan Black
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PostPosted: June 9th, 2010, 3:10 pm 
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Calenmiriel wrote:
Oh, and don't be put off by critiques. We're just helping you move forward in your writing. :D


Don't worry, I read somewhere that:
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Criticism (from an honest reader) forces you to close gaps, fix inconsistencies, and throw whole sections away that you labored over for hours. More than that, when you wrap up a draft and hand it off to that honest and able critic, and they are unable to pick holes in your narrative, then your confidence can blossom.

So I will be looking forward to hearing what everyone has to say about my writing.
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Calenmiriel
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PostPosted: June 9th, 2010, 5:27 pm 
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Wow, that is a pretty good quote there! :) Looking forward to it!

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Svensteel Mimetes
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PostPosted: July 28th, 2010, 10:38 am 
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Welcome to the crazy loonybin we call home!

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Sarah
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PostPosted: July 29th, 2010, 11:43 am 
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Welcome, Sir! ;)

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Varon
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PostPosted: August 10th, 2010, 9:00 am 
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Welcome to Holy Worlds, and your username is awesome. I'm honest.

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