This is my book.

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** November 28th, 2011, 3:44 pm

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc7/391675_2161017110526_1399524630_31937880_583624178_n.jpg

This is the whole draft of my book. Yep.

Lady Vilisse Mimetes · **Posted:** November 28th, 2011, 3:48 pm

Wants. Read. Yes. Please?

wait...

Publish then I read

*coughs* If you ever need a cover designer... *coughs*

Celestria · **Posted:** November 28th, 2011, 3:48 pm

That is really really cruel.

Ophelia MirZA Mimetes · **Posted:** November 28th, 2011, 4:58 pm

Celestria wrote:

That is really really cruel.

.

When will you publish the magnificence?

Sincerely,

Your fan,

ZA

BushMaid · **Posted:** November 28th, 2011, 6:42 pm

*applauds*

Aragorn · **Joined:** September 23rd, 2010, 3:42 pm **Posts:** 9085

Good work, Sea Nymph!

Constable Jaynin Mimetes · **Posted:** November 29th, 2011, 1:01 am

Is... done?

Mostly done? Compiled? What?

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** November 29th, 2011, 12:42 pm

LOL all these different reactions are cracking me up! If I need a cover, I'll be sure to keep the lovely talented people of HW in mind.

Y'all are hilarious.

This is compiled. I pulled all the excerpts from the various perspectives, all of it that I needed to make the story make sense (which means all the stuff I'm going to eventually cut too) just to see how long it would be and to have the satisfaction of having it all together, even if it's tremendously long.

Kiev Shawn · **Posted:** November 29th, 2011, 3:42 pm

* screams *

Ophelia MirZA Mimetes · **Posted:** November 29th, 2011, 11:44 pm

*Finds this* http://www.youtube.com/user/holyworlds# ... JB2_GhRTeM

*huggles youtube video*

~ZA

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** November 30th, 2011, 5:50 pm

Haha Za, I'm going to upload another soon, if I can find the courage to actually stop making niggling little edits.

Lady Elanor · **Posted:** November 30th, 2011, 6:31 pm

Well done, Lady E!

Rachel Newhouse · **Posted:** December 1st, 2011, 3:56 pm

250k! You go, Lady E! That is an amazing accomplishment. *tosses cupcakes*

Are you going to edit it down now, or is the book going to stay about that length?

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** December 2nd, 2011, 5:06 pm

Oh no, I'm going to edit it down. The bit I'm rewriting now will take out around 30,000 words worth of unrelated and disconnected subplot, and then I have multiple cuts planned through the rest of it. 'Course, I also have multiple scenes that need added, so ... I'm really not sure where it's going to end up. I'll probably need to eventually split it into two, unless I find a really nice publisher who likes it just the way it is.

Green Mist · **Posted:** December 2nd, 2011, 5:22 pm

I haven't read it yet Lady E, but I will DEFINITELY get to it soon! *wants to see why everyone is screaming about this book*

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 7:21 pm

Mistie - sometimes I'm not sure myself!

Vili, every time I read your post I have to laugh. I love y'all.

Green Mist · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 7:53 pm

I am not sure, but I THINK that they scream because they like it...

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 8:57 pm

Yeah but ... why would they like it so much?

Kiev Shawn · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 9:20 pm

Lady Eruwaedhiel wrote:

Yeah but ... why would they like it so much?

It's wonderful, that's why! The excerpts are tantalizing, the characters are deep and create huge emotional attachments and the story is powerful.

Constable Jaynin Mimetes · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 10:11 pm

It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good.

But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

Kiev Shawn · **Posted:** December 3rd, 2011, 10:14 pm

Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:

It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good.

But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this.

Celestria · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 9:33 am

Shawn Alexis Henderson wrote:

Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:

It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good.

But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this.

I'd have to heartily third it. *nods* Yep. Definintely.

Green Mist · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 3:48 pm

@Vanya: Did you say that as an opinion or is it REALLY the best written book on hw?

Constable Jaynin Mimetes · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 4:43 pm

Everything is my opinion. There is no way to actually prove something is the best. But, in my opinion, it is really the best written book on HW.

Green Mist · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 4:48 pm

Where can I read it? I would love to.

Kiev Shawn · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 5:01 pm

That's why we're begging her to publish, Mist.

She has some excerpts here, here and here, for starters.

Green Mist · **Posted:** December 4th, 2011, 8:21 pm

*makes mental note to click links when she has the time*

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** December 5th, 2011, 12:46 pm

You is make me cry.

Honestly, that was just what I needed.

*can think of nothing more to say*

*leaves, still speechless*

*pops head back in* Oh, and the anniversary of when I finished the novel is coming up - December 27th of last year. If you beg, maybe I'll post another excerpt then.

PrincessoftheKing · **Posted:** December 5th, 2011, 1:39 pm

Celestria wrote:

Shawn Alexis Henderson wrote:

Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:

It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good.

But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this.

I'd have to heartily third it. *nods* Yep. Definintely.

Ditto! Your excerpts are amazing... you know something's good when you're attached to the characters when you've only read a couple pages.

Lady Eruwaedhiel wrote:

*pops head back in* Oh, and the anniversary of when I finished the novel is coming up - December 27th of last year. If you beg, maybe I'll post another excerpt then.

*begs*

...And December 27th happens to be my birthday... and an excerpt would be an awesome birthday present...

Airianna Valenshia · **Posted:** December 18th, 2011, 11:49 pm

She cannot publish it until Celestria and I beta read for her. So I shall let ya'll know how wonderful it is when it is finally delivered in my hands. No spoilers, though.

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** December 19th, 2011, 12:48 pm

*grins hugely*

Airianna Valenshia · **Posted:** December 19th, 2011, 1:14 pm

*winks *

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 1:29 pm

*dumps book trailer and poofs*

Aragorn · **Joined:** September 23rd, 2010, 3:42 pm **Posts:** 9085

Very nice trailer.

Constable Jaynin Mimetes · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 4:01 pm

Ooooh... pretty words! The Live editor is more sophisticated than the XP WMM, I see. This is your... third trailer now?

Ophelia MirZA Mimetes · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 6:20 pm

*Huggles Trailer*

:

*Goes to see if I can find any scene bits I haven't read yet*

~ZA

PrincessoftheKing · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 6:23 pm

Ooo... me likey.

*gasp* You changed your name, E!

cephron · **Joined:** December 31st, 2011, 2:20 am **Posts:** 313

Thanks for the trailer! *enjoyed it*

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 6:44 pm

Wow, thanks guys! I sat down to write a reply to Jaynin and I tried to post and three more replies came up!

I'm only trying this one out, Princess. You'll have to tell me what you think.

The font is Akveleir. http://www.dafont.com/akvaleir.font One of my favorites.

What's the Live Editor?

Constable Jaynin Mimetes · **Posted:** January 22nd, 2012, 10:31 pm

It says: "Editing Program: Windows Live Movie Maker." Which is the Windows 7 version. Much more sophisticated than Plain 'ole Windows Movie Maker... which is what us XP users have... or so it would seem. I can't do any of that text placement that you had.

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** January 23rd, 2012, 10:02 am

Oh, I see. Well. I use some rather unconventional text placement methods.

Aemi · **Posted:** January 23rd, 2012, 11:03 am

Wonderful music! Where did you get it?

Elly · **Joined:** October 22nd, 2010, 7:58 am **Posts:** 4197

* dances a little dance for the E *

I'll watch the trailer later, I hafta get back to school at the moment.

Manda Kondrael · **Posted:** January 23rd, 2012, 11:38 am

How come I didn't see this thread till now?

You book ish long, E.

Lots of awesomeness for us to read.

'Nother trailer! *watches happily*

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** January 23rd, 2012, 5:55 pm

I keep telling you guys it's long! You didn't believe me until now?

I hope you like it, Elly!

What did you think, Manda?

Aemi, the music is Heart by Thomas Bergersen. He's one of the composers for Two Steps from Hell. This song was actually inspired by the tsunami and earthquake victims of Japan; all the proceeds from the sale of the single went to Red Cross workers there.

Manda Kondrael · **Posted:** January 23rd, 2012, 6:19 pm

I dunno. But... let me read it?

Awesome. Definitely awesome.

Lady Eruwaedhiel · **Posted:** January 24th, 2012, 11:16 am

Airianna Valenshia · **Posted:** January 24th, 2012, 11:53 am

E, that is epic!!!! I love it!!

Elly · **Joined:** October 22nd, 2010, 7:58 am **Posts:** 4197

*sputter* I... I was - *speechless* *finds word* - enchanted by it, E! You must let me read it.

Lady Elanor · **Posted:** January 24th, 2012, 3:45 pm

I loved the trailer, E!

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