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PostPosted: November 28th, 2011, 3:44 pm 
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This is the whole draft of my book. Yep.

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Wants. Read. Yes. Please?

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Publish then I read ^_^

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That is really really cruel. :bawl:

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That is really really cruel. :bawl: .


:bawl: When will you publish the magnificence? :bawl:

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Is... done? :shock: Mostly done? Compiled? What?

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LOL all these different reactions are cracking me up! If I need a cover, I'll be sure to keep the lovely talented people of HW in mind. ^_^ Y'all are hilarious.

This is compiled. I pulled all the excerpts from the various perspectives, all of it that I needed to make the story make sense (which means all the stuff I'm going to eventually cut too) just to see how long it would be and to have the satisfaction of having it all together, even if it's tremendously long. :D

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Haha Za, I'm going to upload another soon, if I can find the courage to actually stop making niggling little edits. :P

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Well done, Lady E! :cool:

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250k! You go, Lady E! That is an amazing accomplishment. *tosses cupcakes*

Are you going to edit it down now, or is the book going to stay about that length?

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Oh no, I'm going to edit it down. The bit I'm rewriting now will take out around 30,000 words worth of unrelated and disconnected subplot, and then I have multiple cuts planned through the rest of it. 'Course, I also have multiple scenes that need added, so ... I'm really not sure where it's going to end up. I'll probably need to eventually split it into two, unless I find a really nice publisher who likes it just the way it is. :roll:

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I haven't read it yet Lady E, but I will DEFINITELY get to it soon! *wants to see why everyone is screaming about this book* :dieshappy:

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Mistie - sometimes I'm not sure myself! o.O

Vili, every time I read your post I have to laugh. I love y'all. :rofl:

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I am not sure, but I THINK that they scream because they like it... :rofl:

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Yeah but ... why would they like it so much? :?

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Yeah but ... why would they like it so much? :?

:shock: It's wonderful, that's why! The excerpts are tantalizing, the characters are deep and create huge emotional attachments and the story is powerful.

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It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good. :roll: But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

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Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:
It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good. :roll: But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this. :D

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Shawn Alexis Henderson wrote:
Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:
It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good. :roll: But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this. :D


I'd have to heartily third it. *nods* Yep. Definintely.

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@Vanya: Did you say that as an opinion or is it REALLY the best written book on hw?

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Everything is my opinion. There is no way to actually prove something is the best. But, in my opinion, it is really the best written book on HW. :D

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Where can I read it? I would love to. :D

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That's why we're begging her to publish, Mist. :D She has some excerpts here, here and here, for starters. :D

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You is make me cry. :shock:

Honestly, that was just what I needed.

*can think of nothing more to say*

*leaves, still speechless*

*pops head back in* Oh, and the anniversary of when I finished the novel is coming up - December 27th of last year. If you beg, maybe I'll post another excerpt then. :D

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Celestria wrote:
Shawn Alexis Henderson wrote:
Vanya Katerina Jaynin wrote:
It's the best written work in all of Holy Worlds, and definitely among the best fantasy I've ever read.

Judging on your excerpts, of course. I'd be absolutely floored if more than two hundred thousand words could all come out that good. :roll: But! I have faith in your perseverance and your perfectionism that most of it will come out awe-inspiringly beautiful.

I heartily second this. :D


I'd have to heartily third it. *nods* Yep. Definintely.


Ditto! Your excerpts are amazing... you know something's good when you're attached to the characters when you've only read a couple pages. :D

Lady Eruwaedhiel wrote:
*pops head back in* Oh, and the anniversary of when I finished the novel is coming up - December 27th of last year. If you beg, maybe I'll post another excerpt then.


*begs*

...And December 27th happens to be my birthday... and an excerpt would be an awesome birthday present... ;) :rofl:

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She cannot publish it until Celestria and I beta read for her. So I shall let ya'll know how wonderful it is when it is finally delivered in my hands. No spoilers, though. ;)

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Ooooh... pretty words! The Live editor is more sophisticated than the XP WMM, I see. This is your... third trailer now? :D

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*Huggles Trailer* :dieshappy: : :cool: ^_^ *Goes to see if I can find any scene bits I haven't read yet*


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Ooo... me likey. :D

*gasp* You changed your name, E! :shock:

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PostPosted: January 22nd, 2012, 6:32 pm 
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Thanks for the trailer! *enjoyed it*

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Wow, thanks guys! I sat down to write a reply to Jaynin and I tried to post and three more replies came up! o.O

I'm only trying this one out, Princess. You'll have to tell me what you think.

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It says: "Editing Program: Windows Live Movie Maker." Which is the Windows 7 version. Much more sophisticated than Plain 'ole Windows Movie Maker... which is what us XP users have... or so it would seem. I can't do any of that text placement that you had.

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Oh, I see. Well. I use some rather unconventional text placement methods. :dieshappy:

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Wonderful music! Where did you get it?

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* dances a little dance for the E * ^_^ I'll watch the trailer later, I hafta get back to school at the moment. :P

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How come I didn't see this thread till now? :P You book ish long, E. o.O Lots of awesomeness for us to read. ^_^
'Nother trailer! *watches happily*


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I keep telling you guys it's long! You didn't believe me until now? :?

I hope you like it, Elly! ^_^ What did you think, Manda?

Aemi, the music is Heart by Thomas Bergersen. He's one of the composers for Two Steps from Hell. This song was actually inspired by the tsunami and earthquake victims of Japan; all the proceeds from the sale of the single went to Red Cross workers there.


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I dunno. But... let me read it? :beg:

Awesome. Definitely awesome. :D


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E, that is epic!!!! I love it!! :D

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*sputter* I... I was - *speechless* *finds word* - enchanted by it, E! You must let me read it. ^_^

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I loved the trailer, E!

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Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king

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