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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 4:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Book Trip |
Well, my Beta readers, and all the supportive people in my life, will be very happy to know that this weekend my Daddy and I are leaving on a book trip. Not a book trip, but THE book trip. The time has finally come for me to move into the next stage of being a writer. Publication. Big scary word. Now I will be reading the first book in my trilogy to Daddy. He’s never actually read the story. He’s heard me talk about it, and the boys rave over it (good little brothers that they are), but he’s never actually sat down and read it from front to back. I am in the process of printing it out and getting it all nice and ready. We will also be discussing how I plan on going forward into the publishing world. For multiple reasons I want to go the traditional publishing route instead of self publishing. So, Daddy and I have to discuss the need of an agent and other such niceties that you must have to go through this process. I’m rather nervous over having Daddy read the piece. For some reason this is different than my Beta Readers. This is my Daddy. My idol (in the non deity sense). He lives with me day in, day out. I don’t know, I’m just nervous. Which is an unusual sensation for me. I will be gone most of Friday, all of Saturday, and will be back Sunday night. I trust ya’ll to be good while I’m gone and you not burn anything down. |
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| Author: | BushMaid [ October 18th, 2011, 4:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
There is something very unique about reading your writing to your parents. Their opinions are the ones you hold in the highest regard, and they are usually the most honest. I can understand you being nervous. God bless your trip, Airi dear. May He open doors for you on the way. |
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| Author: | Crushmaster [ October 18th, 2011, 4:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
We'll try. Godspeed, friend. God bless, Joel ><>. |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ October 18th, 2011, 4:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Yay! Airi, I am so excited for you! This is such a big step! I hope you enjoy your weekend away with your Dad, it will be very special, I love going on trips with my Dad. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 4:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
And be kind to me! Don't post too much whilst I am away. |
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| Author: | Aragorn [ October 18th, 2011, 4:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
I'm very happy you're going on the book trip, Airianna. Airianna Valenshia wrote: Don't post too much whilst I am away. You know we can't promise that. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 4:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Yes, parents are the most honest. Even more so than brothers. So we shall see.... Thanks, Elanor. I knew you would be excited by the prospect. As Andrew said, "this puts him one step closer to having a real book in his hands". At least, he said something along those lines. Can't remember exactly. Plus, this'll be more leisurely than our typical caving trips, so I think that will be good for me also. I need to relax and take it easy. Sitting around a campfire snuggled up to Daddy reading isn't too exhausting. *wags her finger at Jonathan and Joel * |
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| Author: | Crushmaster [ October 18th, 2011, 5:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Airianna Valenshia wrote: *wags her finger at Jonathan and Joel * Us? God bless, Joel ><>. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 5:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Oh I wonder..... |
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| Author: | Aragorn [ October 18th, 2011, 5:16 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*ponders the irony of Airianna wagging her finger at people for posting a lot* |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 5:44 pm ] |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 6:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*grins * When, Brendan, when. I knew you would. All my little 'uns over there want you to read it to them as a bedtime story, after all. |
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| Author: | AzlynRose [ October 18th, 2011, 8:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
I'm so happy for you, Airi! *Hugs* I can't wait till your book is published, and we'll try not to blow up the forum or do anything else awesome like that while you are gone. |
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| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ October 18th, 2011, 9:01 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*grins* I found this thread on the Sci-Fi side seconds before I found the link you gave me. Not only am I getting excited for you, but I'm getting excited for me. I'm that much closer to getting a physical copy of my own. Airianna Valenshia wrote: I trust ya’ll to be good while I’m gone and you not burn anything down. I'll make sure no one burns anything til you get back. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 18th, 2011, 10:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Oh good because *coughcough* you know I'd be devastated if something blew up and I wasn't here to enjo- I mean witness it. Thanks, Azzie! I can't either. 5 years of work will finally pay off. |
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| Author: | Ophelia MirZA Mimetes [ October 18th, 2011, 10:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Congratulations Airi on starting to take this "next step". I pray you have a wonderful time with your dad! ~Elmirza |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 19th, 2011, 9:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Thanks, Miraz! |
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 19th, 2011, 12:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Oooh! *likes the idea of a birthday weekend* I hope you have a wonderful, beneficial weekend. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 19th, 2011, 12:50 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*laughs * You just made my day, Zoey darling! *hugs you tight * |
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 19th, 2011, 4:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 24th, 2011, 9:12 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Well, many of you know that my parents are my biggest critics. They feel very strongly that the only way for me to grow and get better is to push me, to challenge and harness the talents and drive that God gave me. So while many people will tell me that one of my drawings is good, my parents will tell me “the nose is off. Next time try _____, focus more on x,y, and z”. Of course, this is always said most lovingly. It is always said because my parents don’t ever want me to settle. They want me to push for the best. To give my best effort. So I was very nervous going into this weekend, which is not typical for me. I knew my Daddy would be honest with me. We won’t say brutally honest, because he would have given me the truth in a loving way, but I knew he wouldn’t stroke my vanity. And I was nervous over that. I love my book. It is an offering of myself. It pulls from deep emotions buried within myself. Some of the characters are expressions of myself, they have my struggles and quirks. This book wasn’t just something I had written. It was a part of me. So we began the book week. The first thing on the agenda was to read the book. So I did. All 115,000 words. We spent all day Friday reading and talking, and most all of Saturday reading and talking. He loved it. He not only loved it, he could envision pulling my story off the family library shelf and reading it together like we do our lamplighters. He laughed at some parts (which surprised me because my Daddy doesn’t typically laugh when reading a book), became very quiet as I explored the emotions of loss (something we both understand all too well), and fell in love with my main character, Tierin, and his little sister Airianna. He was also surprised that I threw him two curve balls (twists, in Author terms) in the story plot. My Daddy is normally really good at judging where a writer is going with a story. I was stunned, to say the least. While Daddy had one or two words he thought I should change (he does not like when I use system to refer to the body, so all those need to be changed), and a couple of suggestions to help the technical side of one of my fight scenes near the end of the book, for the most part he was blown away that I had written the book. He said he shouldn’t be surprised, because I’ve always been a good writer, but this piece did surprise him. It was not what he excepted and it went beyond what he thought it would be. I have to tell you, his confidence has been the fuel I needed to aggressively begin publication. Saturday evening, into Sunday, Daddy and I began to discuss publication. I had tons of research (which meant more reading) that I had printed off for us to go over. The short story, and end result of this all, is that Daddy agrees with me that he does not want me to self publish. He wants me to push for traditional publication. We have also agreed that I will be beginning the search for an agent who will represent me. We ordered the research material I wanted (which consisted of many things, including the Eragon series my library never seems to have), and as soon as I get a few edits and additions made to my book, I will be seriously pursuing this path. Now on to the second book, because Daddy has joined my Beta readers in pushing me to get it finished. That’s the short story, anyways. |
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 24th, 2011, 10:12 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Squee!!!!! Oh, Airilyn, that's such good news! *haunts bookstore shelves, waiting for Airilyn's book to appear* |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 24th, 2011, 10:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*chuckles * I knew you did. I have to get an agent first, silly. |
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 24th, 2011, 10:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*will go threaten agents to make sure they accept Airi's book, and then haunt bookstore shelves* Honestly, though, I would be extremely surprised if you have troubles finding an agent. |
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| Author: | AzlynRose [ October 24th, 2011, 11:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 24th, 2011, 11:28 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*comes back with question* Did your dad like the toddler Oneedad? |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ October 24th, 2011, 1:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*Screams a girly excited squeal* This is brilliant news! Aah I am so excited for ya, Airi! *Skips around thread* |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 24th, 2011, 2:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*giggles at Zoey * Okay, so you know how I made you all answer my very long questionnaire when you were done reading? I made Daddy take it too. You remember this question? Quote: If you could remove one character from the book, who would it be and why? The toddler Oneedad was the only character he could think of for me to cut. I told him you would be devastated if I cut her out. |
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| Author: | Aragorn [ October 24th, 2011, 2:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
I'm very happy for you, Airianna. |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 24th, 2011, 2:07 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Thank you. |
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| Author: | Zoe M. Scrivener [ October 24th, 2011, 2:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
He would cut out the toddler Oneedad?! |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ October 24th, 2011, 3:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
No, he said if he had to. |
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| Author: | Suiauthon Mimetes [ October 24th, 2011, 10:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
*repeats what he said on Sci-Fi* That might have been the hardest question for me to answer out of all of the questionnaire. I think I managed to get away from that question by rambling about how I couldn't think of anyone... |
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| Author: | Crushmaster [ October 24th, 2011, 10:17 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Great! God bless, Joel ><>. |
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| Author: | Captain Nemo Marlene [ October 28th, 2011, 8:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Congratulations, Airi!!! Keep us posted! |
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| Author: | Airianna Valenshia [ November 21st, 2011, 3:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
This thread is now ready for archiving. |
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| Author: | Bethany Faith [ November 21st, 2011, 3:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
* hereby locks thread even though this isn't my forum and I'm not a mod...but I was bored * |
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| Author: | Aragorn [ November 21st, 2011, 8:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Book Trip |
Anyone with the power to can and should help out if they have time. |
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