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PostPosted: August 31st, 2011, 9:45 am 
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September 16, I've been asked to speak to an 8th grade class on - what else - writing. The teacher was impressed with my work, and I think he's hoping I can show his students that even kids can write and get their work published. (I know, no big surprise there. ;) )

So now I shall get down to the point. HWers, I need your help. The situation is dire - make or break. Why? Those of you who have met me probably already know the answer. I'm extremely shy and terrified of talking to a whole class.

And so I bring the matter before you. What would you do if you were in my situation? What would you talk about? Would you ask questions to make it interactive? I'm open for advice!

There's also one more thing I wanted to ask you. Could you pray for me? I feel God is calling me to do this hard thing, and I know the only way I'll be able to get through it is with his help.

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PostPosted: August 31st, 2011, 11:25 am 
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Considering that I used to be extremely quiet and kinda shy too, I'll see if I can offer you a few tips that my college speech professor gave me. (Obviously, I doubt you'll be able to take a semester of speech before you do this, but I still might be able to full a few magic bunnies out of the hat for you).

First, pray (more). Second, breathe (deeply).
Or you could do that in reverse. You might not be able to pray if you're not breathing... :P After you've sought the Lord's will, keep seeking while you continue to prepare yourself ;)

(Skip through this list if you want ideas about the speech itself, not the structure...)

With those building blocks in place, you can continue on to build the wall. Which means you might like to find your comfortable way of speaking. It's a class of 8th-graders, so the best kind would probably be an extemp speech, but you might find it more comfortable to do something else. Here are the pros and cons of each method:

    1) Written/outline/manuscript speech--where you can take a manuscript of however papers you want with you and read your speech from the text:
    PROS--well most people are most comfortable with this one. It's easy to write out, easy to read from, and easy to estimate how long it will take you (with a font of 14pt, it takes roughly a minute per page).
    CONS--it's hard to connect with the audience, since you'll be reading from the MSS instead of looking at them the whole time, so eye contact is a biggie. Also, if you think of something you want to say during the speech, you most likely won't be able to include it unless you find a good gap, but then that might interrupt the flow of your speech. This is also not generally a good idea for small audiences, since it's a bit too formal-ish.

    2) Extemporaneous speech--where you can either use note cards, an outline, or visual objects to remind you of the main points you want to make in your speech:
    PROS--since this one has your main ideas set in stone, it's a concrete way of speaking without the awkwardness of the MSS speech. For this one, you can use note cards to help you with particularly powerful lines you want to include as well as the main ideas of your speech (and things like quotes, statistics, names of books, etc.) without restricting you to a step-by-step procedure that might sound robotic. It's also a good way to keep eye contact with the audience and to be actively engaged with answering Q's and the like.
    CONS--it's not the best of any of the types of speeches. If you want flow, the MSS speech is best. If you want connection, the Improv speech is best. If you want eye contact, the memorized speech is best. This is, however, the most rounded speech of the four, so it's usually the most suggested one.

    3) Memorized speech--this is one I don't recommend, but it's essentially the same as the MSS speech except you memorize your whole speech:
    PROS--good for long meetings where you need to maintain contact with the audience.
    CONS--takes a lot of practice and time. Also, if you lose your place, it's hard to pick up your speech; and if they have questions, you need to put them at the end of your speech.

    4) Improv speech--I'm not going to explain this one because it's basically not preparing as much and just "going on the fly" on the day of. You'd be better off doing the Extemp speech.
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No matter what kind of speech you do, however, remember to practice as much as you can. Do it front of your family if you're comfortable with it and get feedback. OR you can do it in front of yourself with a mirror and a tape recorder. This is just to get more comfortable with your speech--to solidify it in your brain and get a grasp of how long it'll take you.

Once you know what type of speech you want to do, you can start coming up with ideas. Actually, first you should decide on a thesis (even if it's not final, just so you have a main idea in place) and then you can come up with ideas. Personally, I suggest using the basic three-point extemp model so you can bring 10 or less note cards with you main points and "supports" (or whatever you want to include) written in them =)

As for what you can talk about, I might suggest doing just a quick half-minute to full minute introduction on why we write (just like writing a hook to your story--"why should I read?") and then give them another half-minute or so of a little "backstory" on who you are so that they're not zoning out for the rest of the speech. Then you can build your points.

For what you want to say, I'm going to ask you questions about writing if you don't mind :)

Q's: At what level of writing did you start? How did you start writing? Have you always liked writing? Is writing a gift, lots of hard work, both? Why do YOU write? What is your purpose in writing? Why should we care? What's in the power of words?

As for keeping it interactive, a visual of any kind would work, even the audience :D If you want to do something fun, maybe you could have each of them pull out a piece of paper and pencil and write something for you, and you would write something for them. OR ask a couple kids for a quick introduction about themselves (favorite color, age, etc.) and then relay it back to them in "story" form, to show them that everything we do and say is really the makings of a story.

Or, you could bring your own visual (a simple pen, piece of paper... or something "ugly to look at" like your original rough draft--the one covered with highlights and etc.--to show them everyone starts somewhere. You could even bring a one page story filled with doodles that you wrote while you were younger or something).

Anyway, those are my suggestions :) If you want anymore ideas, I can pool a few quotes I used from a speech I did on writing. Otherwise, I'll spare you from reading anymore of my wordy monologue <_<

God bless ^_^
I hope this was more helpful than annoying...

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 Post subject: Re: The Day Encroaches... HELP!
PostPosted: September 1st, 2011, 3:14 pm 
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Praying for you, Celestria. :)

I'm quite shy too, and here are a couple little things I made sure to do when teaching a class at our co-op:

1. Pray, of course! :)

2. Have notes, something written where you can prompt yourself if you forget.

3. Keep things specific. Pick a particular aspect of writing, not just "writing" -- that's too broad and it will make it hard for you to think of things to say. :) Pick "Publishing" or "Plot" or "Premise" (no, they don't all have to start with P... :D)

Just some suggestions. :) Do let us know how it goes! :)

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First, pray. Ask God to help you. I'm definitely praying for you, as well.

I'm normally lively and outgoing (just ask any of my friends IRL ;) ), but when I am in front of a crowd (especially of people that I don't know), I'm very nervous. I'm especially nervous using a mic. :roll:

I would ask the teacher how long you have to talk to them, if you haven't already. Maybe allot five minutes for any questions they might want to ask you.

I'd try to keep the speech a bit light. At the beginning, try doing what our guest pastor did: crack a joke.

Focus on one person who is listening and paying attention, maybe smiling. Try to smile often. Smile whenever you are introduced by the teacher (or when you introduce yourself).

Try to imagine yourself with a bunch of friends. Always try to relax. If you mess up, start the sentence over and act calm.

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I'm still praying, Celestria. I hope it goes well tomorrow. :)

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I really appreciate all your advice and prayers! Whatever happens tomorrow, I'm sure you'll all be some of the first to hear about it. :)

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I'll be praying too. :D Don't overthink what might go wrong, instead consider that God will do as He wills to bring glory to His name.

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Try to relax and ask God for help, and I'm sure we'll all be proud of our Celestria! :D

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Try to relax and ask God for help, and I'm sure we'll all be proud of our Celestria! :D


I already am. ;) Praying, Celestria. :D

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Shawn Alexis Henderson wrote:
Elly of Zoriah wrote:
Try to relax and ask God for help, and I'm sure we'll all be proud of our Celestria! :D


I already am. ;) Praying, Celestria. :D

I mean, even more. ;)

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I survived! And I don't think I did all that bad. Who knows? Maybe if I made a big enough impression one might just wander onto HW.

I really appreciated your prayer through all this! It really, really helped. I've never been able to speak in front of anyone, even with a group of family, without getting so nervous I start shaking or stumbling over my words. I might have been nervous, but as soon as I started, I felt a strange peace that can only be described as one of those really cool God things. Isn't He so epicly awesome?

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He is indeed. I am glad it went well for you, Celestria. Well done! :)

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He is indeed awesome! I'm glad to hear it went well. :)

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Awww!!! Meaghan, I'm so proud of you! *hugs * How exciting! So, what format did you choose, in the end? More interactive, or more of a speech type format?

*feels very proud *

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It was more interactive and handled sort of like an interview. In the long run, I think that was better for me and for them. The teacher also made me bring some of my illustrations and my first chapter. I think they were more impressed with seeing and hearing all that. And I'm pretty sure they were all surprise when this really shy girl who sometimes stuttered when she talked whips out a chapter that begins with an intense sword fight. :dieshappy:

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You go girl!!! I'm so excited for you.

Just because you're shy, doesn't mean you are boring, Piglet. :D

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Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

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Awesome to hear ^_^

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Dreams like silk fall tattered to the ground, torn by the claws of despair. Hope shattered, light hidden, replaced by the veil of darkness. But pull it aside, tear it down, a glimpse of freedom lies beyond. Through the hole, open your eyes, see the sun. With it is a brightness that burns, that scars; that hurts yet heals. Shrinking back, yet reaching out, within sight is the sky, within reach is the world. Leave the broken cloths of the past behind and go pursue something worth pursuing. A new reason worth living for. A new dream.
You are alive.
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Go. You are being called.

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