I've never listened to much rap but I like the message in this! Very straight to the point and well written
Music writing is one of my favourite past times, thanks for sharing this!
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| Author: | Malchus [ November 15th, 2010, 12:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Song (more like a rap) |
Here is a song I wrote, I'm not done with it though..... This title is unknown yet though......... VRS1 You try to make me who you want me to be But I'm not you I'm me Stop trying to make me something I'm not Cuz whenever I follow you, a bullet is shot Straight towards my head Trying to make me fall, shoot me dead Stop Deceiving me Let me keep reaching for His Glory Cuz I wanna live life for Christ So stop following me, I've already made up my mind VRS2 I've heard every lie of yours And it won't work this time, I've got an umbrella to stop your downpours He will keep me in a safe place, Oh Yea, He's something I can't replace He's Number 1 In my life, And I'm Never going back to Old Times. Chorus Cuz I wanna go where He Leads me I wanna be who He wants me to be Life would be nothing, Yea I'd be lost Without Him Dying for me, He paid my cost |
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| Author: | Lady Elanor [ November 15th, 2010, 1:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
I've never listened to much rap but I like the message in this! Very straight to the point and well written Music writing is one of my favourite past times, thanks for sharing this!
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| Author: | Malchus [ November 15th, 2010, 3:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
Yea, I'm better at singing a little bit faster, than I am singing...I don't have that good of a voice, but I like to sing a bit. 
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| Author: | Willow Wenial Mimetes [ November 15th, 2010, 11:33 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
I like it Malchus! Who is the song addressed to? Sin? |
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| Author: | Malchus [ November 16th, 2010, 10:20 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
Yea, it's addressed to sin, and how it tries to pull us further away from Christ. |
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| Author: | Kiev Shawn [ November 23rd, 2010, 10:35 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
I like it.  I have one question: Would you sing Verse 2 through twice? It seemed shorter than the first one.
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| Author: | Miss Pickwickian [ November 25th, 2010, 11:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Song (more like a rap :) ) |
I love good rap and I love writing song lyrics. :-) Enjoyed your song! |
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