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PostPosted: August 6th, 2010, 3:31 pm 
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... and Shawn means me. Okay, not really. Here is the background on my book: I have always loved reading and writing (I got the title of this post from LOTR). I read Start Here by Alex and Brett Harris this year, and an example of a girl who was fighting modern day slavery stuck out to me. I never knew that slavery still existed today, but last year there were more slaves than in any other time in history. So, I am now what you could call an abolitionist, and I am writing my fantasy book to help spread awareness of modern day slavery (among other things). If you know any good sites that have reliable info about modern day slavery, please PM me.

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P.S. The first chapter is at viewtopic.php?f=19&t=840. It is called A Slave's Song.

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Welcome, Shawn! I read your excerpt and I think it has the potential to be very powerful. Keep up the good work!

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Welcome as well, Shawn. I left some comments on your story! Hope you enjoy HW, even those of us who are sometimes *cough* strange. ;)

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Welcome Shawn! Glad to see you.

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I am Ebed Eleutheros, redeemed from slavery in sin to the bond-service of my Master, Jesus Christ.

Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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Welcome, welcome! Glad to have you here! :D I'm looking forward to your posts! ^^

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Welcome to Holy Worlds, Shawn! :D


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Thanks, all of you! :)

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Welcome to HW Shawn!! :D

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Welcome to HW! :)

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Hey Shawn! Oh you might find something interesting (if you haven't already seen it) a the rebelution. http://www.therebelution.com/

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Welcome! :D
Your ideas sounds very interesting. Looking forward to hear more from you :cool:

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Thanks to you all! I noticed that some people in the introductions got a song... :( Just kidding! :D

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Namor should be dropping by right about now. Thought he might have to modify his lyrics because his past ones have included brother of eruheran. I'm pretty sure that only covers Elanhil. :P

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I can sing, but my voice isn't nearly as good as Namor's. :)

Welcome, Welcome, Welcome,
To Holy worlds,
The loony bin we call home,
And, I can't think of anything to ryhme with worlds. Oh well.

Who knows how many times in the intros threads that HW has been called a loony bin we call home? It'd be interesting to know. :)

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Welcome, I am Shawn
Please mow the Lawn!
Welcome to HW (say the literal H.W and it rhymes)
Bla Bla Bla Bla Bloo!
Welcome Welcome Welcome!
You will have so much fun!
Welcome Welcome Welcome!
I!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SSSHHHAAAWWWNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Your talent is extending at such a high rate, science probably doesn't know how to calculate it. :D *claps and cheers* :D :D

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Good job! :D *claps* I feel so honored! :D

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YOU BETTER! I SPENT HOURS UPON HOURS WORKING ON IT! :shock:

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Touchy, touchy.

You know how these artists are, so nervous about what people think. ;)

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WWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
STOP CALLING ME NAMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(

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Methinks the Cap lock got stuck on the artist's keyboard whilst writing the song, and it is still on! :D Any agreements?

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Oh, that's what's going on! Agreement!

Namor, you might want to look into that. ;)

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Methinks you be right. :) His voice is good though, wouldn't you say?

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Most definitely! :D

Have you fixed it, Namor? Or are you still working on it? :D

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I think we scared him off...

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Perhaps...

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I never thought Namor would be scared. Maybe he's just waiting for a new keyboard and can't type anything in the meanwhile. :D :D :D

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Janin of Yen wrote:
I never thought Namor would be scared. Maybe he's just waiting for a new keyboard and can't type anything in the meanwhile. :D :D :D


I agree!

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Or maybe he's so busy fixing the key that he can't see what we're writing.

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That is possible too. I wonder what he will do when he sees this thread. Sing, perhaps?

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I hope not. :P

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Well, I have found several things on here (and things I forgot to say!). First, I like digging up old threads. Second, I like the (helpful!) crazy silliness on here. Third, I forgot to say my real name. It is Elizabeth (like Lady E's!). Ooh, and fourth, I like using smilies. :D Especially that one. Oh, and my MCs are getting quite rambunctiously demanding (ever heard that word? :D)!

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Welcome Shawn! Although I'm newer I thought I'd pop in your thread.

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Yay! It is nice to be welcomed by new people! :D

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