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 Post subject: Walden 3, Usher III
PostPosted: September 23rd, 2012, 11:57 pm 
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First, bonus points go to however know what stories/novels I am referencing in the title without having to read my explanation.

So, psychologist B.F. Skinner, who did not believe in free will, wrote about a utopian society (one that really isn't that great) in his novel Walden 2. I'm pretty sure "Walden" is a reference to Walden Pond, but it doesn't matter.

Some of you are, I hope, familiar with The Fall of the House of Usher. You probably don't know, however, that in The Martian Chronicles there is a short story called "Usher II" (a double reference, as the title also refers to the style of rocket names I.E. "Saturn 3") in which the House of Usher is recreated.

So, basically, I'm planning a distopian novel about a seriously messed up "utopian" society, and a sinister group of dissenters who plan to turn this society, a space colony called "Walden 3", into another House of Usher, complete with all the creepiness.

I'm mainly wondering if anyone will understand what I'm referencing, and which title, if either, I should use as the title of the novel.

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For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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 Post subject: Re: Walden 3, Usher III
PostPosted: September 24th, 2012, 5:51 am 
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That's an intriguing idea. Usher III sounds the best for a title.

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 Post subject: Re: Walden 3, Usher III
PostPosted: September 24th, 2012, 11:19 am 
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I agree with Jonathan. Usher III shounds and looks better for a title.

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 Post subject: Re: Walden 3, Usher III
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I didn't know what you were talking about, but your novel's premise sounds highly fascinating. As far as the book title goes, I shall not be the voice of dissent and therefore agree with Jonathan and Airianna.

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 Post subject: Re: Walden 3, Usher III
PostPosted: October 6th, 2012, 11:31 pm 
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Lord Tarin wrote:
I didn't know what you were talking about, but your novel's premise sounds highly fascinating. As far as the book title goes, I shall not be the voice of dissent and therefore agree with Jonathan and Airianna.


Who isn't fascinated by terrorists attacking distopian societies?

Right, so, Usher III. That's probably the more recognizable of the literature references anyway.

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Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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