| Holy Worlds Christian Forum https://archive.holyworlds.org/ |
|
| Music-Inspired https://archive.holyworlds.org/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=1733 |
Page 1 of 1 |
| Author: | KathrineROID [ December 29th, 2010, 5:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Music-Inspired |
I was listening to the Imperial March earlier today. . . and saw the flash of a scene, adrenaline-filled, martial, and sci-fi. If you have another inspiring sound track, please post about it on this thread, preferably with a link. I'll add my scene once I edit it. |
|
| Author: | Rachel Newhouse [ December 29th, 2010, 10:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
I love writing scenes inspired by music. I do it quite often. I hope I can find some time to do this! |
|
| Author: | Varon [ December 30th, 2010, 10:14 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
I'll try it later today, as well as other songs. |
|
| Author: | KathrineROID [ January 1st, 2011, 9:35 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Well, here's the scene. It's not my best work, even with my attempts at polishing. Quote: Marshka threw herself back from around the corner, catching me and slamming us both against the wall. She pressed a solitary finger against her lips. Then I heard them. The Pure-bred. The elite. I squeezed my spine closer to the wall when they came into view, but knowing it would do no good if one happened to violate the discipline the Veninians required and glanced down this hall. These were younger, about fourteen, if I had to guess. Orange line after orange line, four-abreast, they marched, their boots beating a steady rhythm. Each identical face was drawn in a seriousness far beyond their years. The only thing setting apart one clone from another was the occasional loose hair, or green collar for exceptional behavior. The two never went together. Marshka and I dared not move, or the Pure's enhanced hearing would detect us. I stole a glance at Marshka. She watched the line with an expression matching that of the marchers. A tear trickled down her cheek. I blinked. She tilted her face towards me and I saw several tear strains. I dropped my head to my chest, feeling confused. The line marching past us was a carefully trained war machine, and needed to be treated as such if we were to survive. Yet they were scared, abused children. My wrist vibrated. I bit my lower lip. Our protocols called for confirmation before a message transfer. But if it was deemed important enough, Caleb wouldn't wait for confirmation. His voice, however quiet, would catch the ears of the marchers. After several minutes, the communicator stopped vibrating. At least Caleb knew we were detained, and the rest of the agents could be informed. When I felt the march could never end, the last row passed us. Suddenly I was aware of my locked knees and shoulders. Marshka already had her communicator to her mouth, and her other hand on her hip. “Blast, Caleb, wasn't this route clear tonight? We just had a complete contingent of Pures pass us.” “It was.” Caleb's terse voice issued from Marshka's wrist. “And this is the edge of their territory. They're up to something. Forget your part for the mission. Christine and Alec are secure for the time being. I'll send Jandice and Alexis in your stead. Find out what the Pures are up to.” “Jandice!” I exclaimed a bit to loudly. Marshka shot me a look. “Confirmed,” she said. I only shook my head. Is anyone else jealous at how movie makers get to use music to set a feel? We writers are stuck with words. |
|
| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ January 2nd, 2011, 9:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Ack! That's great, Droid! =) I loved the tenseness--except "I dropped my head to my chest, feeling confused." Wouldn't They see this? Anyways, yes--I am very jealous of movie-makers. Music can make very ordinary looking stuff very dramatic or emotional. But with a book--the reader can make it up in their head! eruheran |
|
| Author: | KathrineROID [ January 2nd, 2011, 12:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
"Ack, that's great"? LOL. Anywho, thanks! I wondered about the head-dropping-to-the-chest thing myself. *thinks* Well? Anyone else want to share? |
|
| Author: | Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ January 6th, 2011, 9:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Here ya go--based on The Imperial March. =) Minimal editing. -- The men gathered with the full force of a sweeping wave. The darkness may be coming, but they would do something about it. Shields were strapped on, and swords were tested. Men grabbed spears and little boys handed their fathers their daggers. In many places, wives and daughters said goodbye to husbands and brothers. The darkness was everywhere; it could not be ignored any more. Even their goodbyes were tinged with hurry; for even as some of the men lingered the army advanced. Men ran to the walls, ready to defend their homeland to the death. But the Dark Army was not so easily stopped. The catapults sprang in to action, throwing massive boulders of fire in to the city. Several houses caught on fire, and in the glinting firelight the men could see their families fleeing. They could only hope that there was enough time. Arrows flew through the air, twanging with a murderous hiss. Siege ladders rose slowly, despite the best efforts of those inside the walls. With a strangle cry, one of the men noticed the families behind them. Shrieking and screaming, little children were running from the faceless darkness, which was now inside the city. Pouring over a ruined section of the wall, the Darkness invaded like ants. Many men killed themselves in despair. All was surely lost. At a whispered word from the General, another rank of Dark Men began marching towards the city. They could not be stopped. All was surely lost. But then, the sun slowly began to rise. With exultation in their hearts, the defenders watched. As the Dark turned to stone. -- eruheran |
|
| Author: | Varon [ January 6th, 2011, 9:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Wow. That's amazing. I'll have to get mine written. Does the song have to be an instrumental? |
|
| Author: | KathrineROID [ January 6th, 2011, 4:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Nice, Eru! Varon wrote: Wow. That's amazing. I'll have to get mine written. Does the song have to be an instrumental? No, but my original thoughts were about how a tune could affect writing, not words. |
|
| Author: | Varon [ January 6th, 2011, 5:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Music-Inspired |
Ok, I'll remember that. |
|
| Page 1 of 1 | All times are UTC - 6 hours [ DST ] |
| Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group http://www.phpbb.com/ |
|