Mordir: [Hunches down more, shifting uncomfortably] Oh come on! Can I do anything that'll make you let me up?

Me: Probably not.

Mordir: I'm not talking to you!

Suragore: [Roars and collides into Brian]

Mordir: [Rolls eyes in annoyance]

Emuna: What did I say about attacking Brian?! Did I not say no attacking Brian?! Are you people deaf!!?!!

Me: But you're not going to help him...

Emuna: I am to- *is suddenly really mad at Brian*

Me:

Emuna: You're on your own! *stomps away from Brian*

Brian: What on Chevl'Se- *falls to the ground, the orb around Mordir disintegrating*

Me: To be clear...what is Suragore?

Gavin: Well, you keep nice track of everybody's characters....

Me:

Jay: "Not a chance, Tynx. Mess with some one on my team, and-"

Me: "Great."

Shawn: "I'm fine." *is worried*

Jay: *shoulder is hurting again, more than before*

Pirzak: *wary*

Raczr: "You first, sir."

Me: "Coward?"

Raczr: "I prefer not to make the first move, rather being right along with my... ally."

Me: "Bring him in, Bethy.

Me: I don't mind if Terminus comes back.

Skylar: (@Raczr) *whispers* You distract her, and I'll try and stab her by her heart.

Raczr: *feints a blow at Chayn's nose* "You are attached to Shawn."

Skylar: *runs beside Chayn and attempts to stab her in the heart*

Alexis: *watches Tynx, wanting to help* *concernedly keeps an eye on Emuna*

Fallen: *shadow covers Fallen's hand, and she catches Tynx's blade with it* I'm not going to let him go if he's going to attack me more! *shadow around Jay's neck tightens even further*

Me: Let me know if I missed someone's attack on her. I'm not really used to having to reply to multiple attacks at once.

Jay: *struggles* "No! Shadow has no power over me!" *the darkness stops tightening*

Me: "Wow... I almost typed 'Shawn' instead of 'shadow' there..."

Shawn: *makes a face*

Me: I'm not sure how much that would change things, since Fallen's the one making it solid...but whatever.

Fallen: *shrugs and punches Jay in the neck*

Me: Okeydoke. *sprinkles black glitter in the air*

Emuna: *crosses arms* This goes entirely against your better being, right?

Me: Nope, my better being likes annoying you.

Emuna: *scowls*

*Terminus appears*

Terminus: Why am I back here?

Me: There's a rebellion going on, thought you might like having an excuse to beat up people...and...I need to develop you for book three.

Terminus: A rebellion? Excuse to beat up Emuna?

Me: *sigh* Yeaaaaah, I guess...but you aren't gonna...

Terminus: why no- *suddenly doesn't want to beat up Emuna* Fine.

Me: Writer powers. are. epic.

Jay: *dodges so that the blow glances his unhurt shoulder and twists Fallen's arm behind her back*

Pirzak: "You can aid us by taking care of Jay, Terminus."

Shawn: "Why? Why do you have people beat up Jay?"

Jay: "Excellent question."

Me: *sighs and dislikes feeling guilty for her characters*

Fallen: *stomps on Jay's instep*

Terminus: Aid you? *looks at Jay* That guy? Please, he doesn't look like he's in good enough physical state to hurt a songbird...

Me: *shakes head*

Terminus: Don't you think you're having more problems with the characters with powers? Take the stronges ones out first...

Emuna: You're seriously going to let him help them?!

Me: Yup!

Emuna:

Jay: "Grumpy, Fally?" *winces and kicks the inside of Fallen's knee, jumping away*

Me: *smacks forehead hard*

Jay: "Excuse me, what?" *glares daggers at Terminus* "I wouldn't hurt a song bird."

Pirzak: "Then he should be easy to take care of so that Fallen can direct her full attention on Tynx."

Me: *sighs* "You have issues, you know?"

Pirzak: "No, you-"

Me: *whacks Pirzak with a dictionary*

Terminus: *glares back* Great a hero with a bad disposition and a heart.

Me: Bad disposition...ha! You should be the one to talk! You want to kill your own dau-

Terminus: *whacks me with a book*

Me: *disintegrates book before it hits me* Don't try that again, k? I'll have someone beat you up.

Terminus: Whatever. I'm not attacking him and wasting my energy.

Brian: How shocking...he's useless in the book and in character introductions.

Terminus: Watch your tongue!

Brian: That isn't physically possible.

Terminus: Then I'll cut it out and make it physically possible.

Me: Woh!!! Dial down the violence! Character introductions is not a book!

Terminus: *scowls*

Brian: *glares at Terminus*

Fallen: No, Half-Wit. Merely bored of your empty chatter. At least Tynx had a brain and could carry on a civil conversation. *sends a wide beam of white-hot light at Jay*

Me: A Suragore is a large, venomous, winged snake, with a sort of hood that can close.

Suragore: [Hisses at Brian, flaring its wings]

Mordir: [Stands slowly and walks over to Brian] Now, where were we?

Me:

Tynx: No! Jay, stop! [Pulls against the shadow desperately] Fallen, let him go!

Chayn: [Rears her head back, swipes at Skylar with a claw] What if I am?

Zurik: Hello, Terminus.

Cassie: He's weird.

Zurik: What! Why you little-

Me: Easy there, big guy.

Tynx: [Is rather panicked] Oh for pete's sake, both of you knock it off! Jay, you're hurt already, I don't want you getting worse. Then Shawn will be mad.

Aelynn: So much fighting...

Seymour: It's what happens when villains are allowed to run rampant. [Glares at me]

Me: What? Was I supposed to know it'd get this big?

Zurik: Pirzak, are you busy?

Brian: *glares at Suragore* (@Mordir) I think we were at the part where I crush you...

Me: Until you let your guard down and got attacked by a snake...now you'll probably be the one getting crushed...

Brian: Thanks for being so confident in me, Bethy, really boosts my self esteem.

Me: We can do with out the sarcasm.

Terminus: Hello, Zurik. (@Cassie) Weird? Oh, yes, and I suppose every other strange being concocted from the minds of our mentally crazed authors is not weird.

Me: I suppose, you aren't going to stop talking anytime soon are you?

Terminus: What else is there to do if not talk?!

Zanya - What just happened? . . . . Well, Thysal's free, at any rate. Oops.

Thysal - (Gasps, but pulls herself together. Swoops down and slams into Fallen) Back off!

Niarah - (Makes a move towards them, but is stopped by Ashrai)

Ashrai - Stay out of this, or I will have to kill you.

Niarah - Savage. (Lowers her weapon)

Me - Whoa, I didn't see that coming.

Ember - (touches Guilo's hand with his nose) Pleasure to meet you.

Silver - (Glares at Merashath) One can only do so much when grounded. (slides into the water)

Ryan - (Climbs off) Ok, then. I'll go see what I can do.

Thysal - Jay, get outta here! Ember!

Ember - What?

Thysal - Save Jay, and try an save the fox.

Ember - (takes off, flying low over the ground. Lands by Thysal and Fallen) Hop on, Fox and Human.

Thysal - (Stands between Ember and Fallen, but doesn't attack further) Enough is enough, everyone. (glares at Jay)

Fallen: Why is everyone blaming me? The only one I attacked was Tynx. Everyone else came after me, but people seem to think I should just sit down and surrender! *waits to see what will happen next, ready to move or fight*

Devon: Hello, Terminus!

Skylar: *leaps nimbly out of the reach of Chayn's claws*

Me: Gulp. Davien still has that score against Terminus...

*A tall man with dull blond hair walks into the thread*

Me: At least Davien's injuries are completely healed now.

Davien: *walks toward Terminus* Don't be so fast to join the Rebellion, sir. You have to deal with me, first.

Terminus: *chuckles* (@Davien) Deal with you? Haha, almost made it sound hard...

Me: *whacks Terminus with a book* At least try to be nice!

Terminus: Why?!

Me: Because that's the whole reason you're in this thread, stupid!!!! *hiccup* I mean... *girly giggle* Because methinks it be besty.

Terminus: And they say I'm violent... Oh, hi, Devon.

Emuna: *shakes head* You're losing your mind, Bethy.

Me: Wha--- I haven't had my mind for years, it was long gone when I started writing fantasy.

Emuna: The way you say that joyfully shocks me...

Davien: Emuna, my lady, I am prepared to defend you. It is my duty. *notices he is about the same height as Terminus* I am ready, Terminus. *draws sword and raises an eyebrow*

Me: You have to understand, Beth, I'm about 5'8", and my father is 6', so Terminus's height is not all that impressive to me.

Me: Terminus' height leaves me at the moment...I think I said 6'1" err...something...

Terminus: Height isn't the only thing used to intimidate... *remains calm and doesn't do anything*

Me: Yes, Beth, that's what you said.

Davien: *waits, his light colored eyes locked on Terminus*

Terminus: *crosses arms* I can tell you right now, boy, if you decide to wait and I decide to wait, then we're both going to be waiting for quite some time.

Emuna: Davien...really, you don't have to fight him, I-I mean, he's not worth fighting...

Brian: Hold up there, Emuna...I kind of want to see Terminus get beat up.

Emuna: Assuming he gets beat up...

Brian: I can always help him.

Emuna: You have your hands full with a snake and a...whatever Mordir is.

Mordir: [Really? From my angle, it looks like I'm going to crush you. [Picks up his sword]

Me: You're not really going t-

Mordir: [Glares]

Me: I'll be quiet.

Seymour: Bethany seems to have more control over her characters than you do yours.

Me: Call me an indulgent parent.

Mordir: Um, I'd rather not.

Aris: Yeah, that's kind of weird.

Me: Alright, alright!

Mordir: [Slashes deep at Brian chest]

Me: [Squeaks]

Aelynn: [squeals and looks away]

Tounon: He did not!

Mordir: [Ignores them]

Cassie: [Looks at Terminus] I was calling Zurik weird. You're... um, well, you might be weird. Or scary.

Tynx: [Looks at Ember] Get Jay out of here! I can't go anywhere, I'm stuck. Just get Jay and go!

Chayn: [Cocks her head in thought] This perhaps would be easier on the ground. [Takes Raczr, Skylar, and Pirzak in her claws and flies down off the rafters, dropping them a foot off the ground before landing nearby] There we go. I was beginning to feel the beams crack under me a little.

Rowen: Not eating so much would probably help.

Chayn: [Snorts indignantly]

Mordir: [Looks at Emuna only briefly] I'm human.

Me: So are any of the people my charries were talking to still near them? Also: WHAT'S GOING ON HERE? I've kinda been gone all week.

Guilo: *watches Ember fly away in awe*

Skootter: *dives into Aelynn's arms*

Emuna: Okay...a snake and a human and...the power's sake, Brian...I hope you know what you got yourself into...

Me: Ohhh...no longer mad at him are you?

Emuna: *glares*

Me: Okay, okay.

Brian: *barely dodges slice, gets cut slightly on the chest* *bites tongue to keep from screaming* Crush me? The way you're going about things it seems more like you're going to slice me to pieces...

Terminus: Which I wouldn't object to...

Brian: *scowls at Terminus*

Fantor, a dragon in human form: *Looks around silently and changes form.*
Fantor: So what's going on here? *Golden eyes darken, tail swishes, wings extend.*

Ark: Mostly a lot of fighting. In fact...is anything going on that isn't fighting?

Davien: Are you afraid to fight, or something? Do you not remember me?

Me: He is serious about this.

Me - Welcome, Elmirza and Fantor. To make a long story short, the villains are rebelling, and the heros are either beating or taking a beating.

Ashrai - Lets go with the latter.

Niarah - (whacks him) Lets not.

Sylvia - Well, I'm still on the ground by Guilo, and my dragon abandoned me. Everything's good . . .

Silver - (Submerged by the alligators, with only her face visible, crocodile-like) When in Rome . . .

Ryan - (Runs over by Chayn) I'm here if you want help!

Ember - Alright Tynx, if you think you've got this . . . (Nudges Jay) C'mon.

Thysal - Fallen, don't move. Yet. Hang on, Trina! We have a score to settle! (Takes off and charges towards Merashath)

Niarah - I'm sure stubborness is a genetic trait in ice dragons . . .

Kuura'zan - Not when you break their spirits.

Sumira - That isn't possible, Slayer.

Kuura'zan - Mention that to the quivering wreck once known as King Borealis. The dragon lord is my slave now.

Thysal - When I'm done with Merashath, you're next!

Me - Why are my villains always sounding 2D and cliche?

Niarah - (Shoots me a pointed look)

Me - Don't say it . . .

Me: Well my people are in basic training (or training the others [or just hanging out]) so they don't really want to get involved in a rebellion. *activates a malicious villain zapper around charries* So the peaceful villains can still hang out, just not the presently violent ones.

Victor: Actually it's crocodiles.

Levi: Be patient with them Victor.

Amos: *sits on Levi's head to think to himself* 'Scuse me Leviathan.

Levi: Not a problem Amos.

Trevelian: *gazes over the horizon*

Guilo: *follows Ember with his eyes before grabbing his helmet and taking flight after him* Ember! Wait up!

Aren: And there goes "just hanging out" *half smiles*

Lyna: *dives into the river after Silver, webbing appears between her fingers and she uses her tail to paddle like the crocodiles*

Ophelia: I didn't realize we were noticed way back on page 170 something.

Kri: *looks around* Well we should be!

Ophelia: The answer to Raven is no, I'm a human, I don't change like-

Kri: Me! I'm magnificent!

Fantor: *Snorts and half growls* I change form too!

Me: Shh let's try not to fight each other.

Fantor: How about all the others here?! *Eyes glint sharply*

Me: It seems to be . . .Normal. So . . . .

Ophelia: I'm one of the Heroes then. There seems to be alot of people to fight.

Kri: I'm a hero too. I won't let anything hurt you!

Fantor: I want to be a villain!

Me: But you aren't one! Not in my story!

Kri: But he's angry and stuborn, he'll do good at this!

Fantor: *Glares and turns abruptly, neck frill raising*

Me: No no! Not now!

Ophelia: Kri, apologize!

Kri; *rolls eyes and dips head* Sorry.

Fantor @ me: I want my rider here.

Me: No, and besides, he won't want to be a villan.

Fantor: Fine. *Stalks off.*

Me: And this is only three characters.

Audrey: There's me!

Jared: I'd come here, maybe. *Moves away to find Fantor*

Francesca: This is happiness! What the Hippo is all this!?

Saphieka (dragon): I don't want to get dirty. If I fight I'll get dirty.

Alana (dragon): Hmm. . . .

Me: They all just seem to show up don't they! Everyone execept Ophelia and Kri out! I'll call you if you're needed.

Fantor: *walks up with Jared* I'm not going!

Me: Jared!

Jared: Come on Fantor.

Fantor: Oh all right!

Me: Now! Go! I promise to call any of you if someone comments on you ok?

Alana: Seems resonable

Me: Thank you Alana! Everyone besides Ophelia and Kri, go with her

Saphieka: Thank goodness! I really would rather go flying than fight this . . .rabble

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Devon: (@Terminus) *grins and goes back to waiting for Rinifer's next move*

Skylar: (@Chayn) Gah! I could have climbed down, you know. *rubs his shoulder where Chayn grabbed him*

Alexis: (@Ophelia) I see. *smiles*

Me: We hit 200 pages, guys!

Terminus: Nope. Fear has no place in me. *still doesn't do anything*

Me: Actually this is great development because if Terminus isn't eager to fight than he has a heart and if he has a heart that comes out with fighting Ooo DEVELOPMENT! *development bar goes ding!"

Emuna: *scowls*

"Exactly. Good job."

Two hundred pages... wow.

Davien: You cannot beat me this way, Terminus. I am staying here.

Me: Development? Good. Davien has gone through some character development recently, too.

Me: Fantor, if I may be so bold, Trevelian makes an excellent rider.

Tanner: I'm pretty good too...

Me: Get some more training in buddy.

Tanner: Guilo has been here less than I have!

Me: He can fly Tan.

Tanner: This is about *glares at Amos* isn't it.

Me: save it for the book dude.

Lyna: *clambers onto Silver's neck* Can you fly underwater?

Malcolm: *stretches his neck and watches the shimmering water*

Me: C'mon you geckos I think you're plenty developed for these tales.

Geckos: *port away back to Lor-Amar*

Me: No...he's being developed...like...right now...in this post.

Emuna: Are you going to have him to something anytime soon?

Me: Nope, I'm terrible at starting fights.

Terminus: Mm-hmm...

Davien: *claps Beth on the back* Show some backbone, Miss Bethany Faith! I'm not going to duel a man who does not even have a sword.

Me: You started the fight between Devon and Davien pretty well.

Me: I have a backbone...and Terminus has a sword.

Terminus: I do no-

Me: *crosses arms* Yes, you do.

Terminus: *sigh* Cheater...

Me: Haha, I didn't start that fight. I just ordered Devon to... And technically I wasn't even ordering him, Terminus was.

Davien: You do have a physical backbone. I'll grant you that. *waits some more*

Me: Can Terminus use his powers to make a sword, like Brian can?

Davien: I don't care if I die trying; Terminus, you are going to pay for what you did.

Me: *scowls* I have backbone...

Gavin: No you don't.

Me: Don't join in!

Terminus: All I did was slap the girl...really, I could've taken her head off or punched her.

Emuna: *eyes widen* N-no...you couldn't have!

Me: Yup! Terminus' powers are about the same strength as Brian's...just a little bit stronger.

Davien: *staggers a step backwards, hand over his eyes. He shudders. Then he clenches his teeth hard and points his sword at Terminus, the rage almost radiating from him*

Me: Terminus, you just stirred up the past. In a mean way, too. *self satisfied smile*

Terminus: You dare to point your sword at me? *dark blue sword of light appears in his hand, stands in guard position* Very well, this should be fun.

Me: You're over confident for having been killed a few chapters ago...

Terminus: Whatever.

Me: And now you're speaking in modern English!

Me: "Let me know if this wouldn't happen from the light beam..."

Jay: *tries to dodge the beam of light but moves too slow, getting hit by most of it* *is thrown to the floor, stunned*

Shawn: *is getting increasingly agitated*

Pirzak: *backs up a few inches* "I would rather have gotten down myself."

Raczr: *is ready as soon as he hits the ground*

Me: Does his sword have any advantages over a regular one?

Davien: *runs forward, hits his blade against Terminus's and goes to push it aside*