Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
This was a fun story! Good job!
Thank you Abi, your to kind, enjoy the rest as everyday it unfolds and let me know if you like it or not or if I should change anything.
Mendo means offers sacrifices to God to Cuban, and is Miranas twin brother.
Tajo means day in Cuban and is Mendo's twin.
"why did you do it? well they made me do it dad, mom. they? " Mirana could her her parents voices inside her head like haunting ghost.
was it wrong? on a scale of one to ten, yes, but she didn't have a choice her annoying twin brothers blackmailed her, little mersnots!
If only there was a elf to tie there hair in knots why they were sleeping oh yes that would be brilliant!
"Hi you!" Mendo making his way to Mirana on the beach when he sliped.
"Faster Mendo!"Tajo his twin ran right into him knocking them both onto the sandy ground.
"why are you running?"it was better not to ask but it could't hurt right?
"Were just so happy to see you we should go now!"Mendo rose up helping his twin.
"but I thought you blackmailed me to come up here and we have only been here five whole minutes. are you sure you want to just go?"Something was not right but what was it? was it the tone in both there voices? were they lying?
"oh that is all in the past right twin brother?" Tajo's baby shark pointed teeth grinned up at her.
"Right Twin brother, so can we go now?"Mendo asked?
"Did you just agree on something?" she was confused, something must be wrong.
" Oh I am going to get you!" A older woman yelled.
"What did you do, Mendo? Tajo answer me!" She demanded.
"um we should really go now!" Mendo smiled up at his older sister.