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 Post subject: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: October 10th, 2013, 7:46 am 
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[WARNING: these are some frightening ideas, so the more delicate had best steer for... less disturbing waters.]

These are different ideas of assaults using cobha. Most of them came to me in one string, and nearly all the rest, I think, came to me later when I was typing them in.

Critique, I pray you, as always!


A man looses an arrow on someone from above, and the victim is pinned to the ground by a hand on his throat. This would be strange if the man is seen to be shot by the archer, but when they come to his body the only wound is his throat crushed by fingers.

Archers firing arrows into an enemy army, and after they strike they rise as birds, returning to the archers to be fired again as arrows: so there is a continuous volley of arrows in one direction, and a continuous flock of birds flying back through the arrows the other direction.

Many birds skimming low and swiftly over the heads of an enemy army; whenever they see a vulnerable place they dip and strike down the enemy as an arrow, then rise as a bird again and continue with the rest.

A man with a bird of prey on his glove. The bird rises, and plunges, and becomes an arrow as it strikes its target, then rises into the clouds again as a bird.

Similar to the first idea, a man fires an arrow into an army: the first man is thrown aside by a hand, the arm of another is struck by a head, another is beheaded by a kick in the throat, another is stabbed through the face by a hand, another is shouldered aside, another kicked aside, and a man deep in the army is pierced by an arrow.

A man shoots an arrow at an enemy, another man tries to step in the way of the arrow, but is thrown aside by a hand, and the arrow reaches its goal.

An army with their shields above their heads to guard against a rain of arrows, find their shields ripped away by powerful hands, and they fall, pierced by the arrows.

A man has a gun raised, but his victim (a man without hands?) embraces his arm and kicks him in the chest. Or he jumps, and there is no gun. But when the kick lands, the man he kicks staggers, with a sword through his chest. The man who kicks him is gone, but when the dead man falls he reappears with his foot on the dead man’s chest. The sword wound could either remain, or the dead man is unwounded, or he has died from a heart attack.

A man grasps hands with another man, and the one becomes a sword in the other man’s hand.

A volley of arrows becomes a flock of birds over the enemy army, then falls like a meteor shower, each perfectly aimed instead of falling randomly.

An entire volley of arrows is shot by the archers at the back of an army, every arrow directed at the same point in the sky. When they converge they become a single bird, which flies forward over the army, and rest of the archers fire into it as it passes over them, so that it grows larger, until it is gigantic (if the army is spread wide it would fly to and fro rather than forward). The gigantic bird flies high over the enemy army, until it stoops on a champion or captain, and after tearing him, it explodes outward in arrows destroying all enemies in a wide circle around it. I believe these arrows do not become many separate birds, but are gathered by the archers after the battle.

A man hurls a stone and it strikes as an arrow. A man hurls a shoe, and it strikes as a knife.

A flock of birds or bats fly into a small, stoneware vase. A man points the mouth of the vase and says a sign, and an arrow flies out silently, and whistles through the air to the target, returning into the vase as a small bird or bat.

A man opens his mouth and an arrow or a javelin flies out.

A man thrusts a sword towards a man at a distance, and the man falls with a replica of the sword driven through him, and the man who thrust the sword still has it in his hand.

A man who goes always with his eyelids closed. When an enemy approaches him, he lifts an eyelid, and out of an empty eye hole a sword blade darts out like a tongue, piercing the enemy, then the blade withdraws behind the closed eye again. Perhaps the blade turns flat, and the eyelids pinch on it, wiping the blood from it as it is drawn in, and the blood runs down from the eye like tears.

A man stretches out his hands in front of him, a javelin flies from within each sleeve, and the sleeves drop, empty. A smaller javelin flies from under his hood, and his hood flies back: his head is vanished. Then the largest javelin shoots out through his clothes at his chest, and his empty clothes are jerked forward, and fall along the ground.

A man stamps with his foot, and his clothes fall empty on or around a spear, driven into the ground through the sole of his shoe.

A man points a wand, or thrusts an open hand, and his enemy feels a pressure on his chest, and a blade breaks out behind him, and then withdraws. There is no wound in front, only in his back. A man lays a finger on his enemy’s face, or plants his hand on his chest, and an arrow shoots out behind his head or back, or a blade breaks out behind his head or back. Perhaps he falls on his face or side, and the blade withdraws slowly into him. Or a flame bursts out, and in front he seems untouched, but he is burned out inside, and his back, or the back of his head, is gone.

A man rolls his coat together and whips his foe once, and when the coat is taken away there is a knife thrust into his foe.

A man is shot at by an arrow, but he raises his hand, and clutches the arrow, but in his hand it is a bird of prey fiercely struggling. He crushes its throat, and lets it fall, and it hits the ground as a broken arrow.

A man makes thick smoke in some way (by throwing an arrow into a fire?), and arrows fly from within the smoke. Smoke pours from a broken pipe, and soldiers with advanced equipment: camouflage and guns, are killed by arrows flying from the smoke. The sky above an army becomes overcast, and arrows begin dropping from the clouds.

A man opens his mouth and smoke pours out. A man shoots an arrow at him, and it vanishes into the smoke. A ditch of combustibles is lighted and an arrow is cast into the flame: a curtain of smoke is raised from the ditch, and arrows shot into it vanish in it.

An archer draws a single arrow from his quiver, and when he looses it, it divides into many arrows which strike multiple targets with accuracy.

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These two ideas I forgot about when typing up the post:

A band of men enter a fog. There is silence, but when the fog lifts they all lie dead, pierced by arrows.

A man becomes a cloud of arrows shooting outwards, shredding his clothes from the inside.


These are some more ideas that came to me afterwards:

A flight of arrows is shot into the water, and becomes a shoal of fish swimming fast. When porpoises or seals come to eat them they transform into a cloud of arrows underwater, piercing the attacker, and becoming fish again. They rise from the water as a flock of birds, and fly over a ship, becoming arrows and raining down.

A man tries to escape his foes by swimming or diving. Arrows are shot into the water next to the bank, becoming small fish. The fish hunt the man, charge him, and pierce him as arrows. When his body floats, pierced by arrows, the arrows become carrion birds and fly back to the army.

A man wearing a brown cloak with a peaked hood, whose voice is the sounds of a lion, is chasing a man in a metal corridor. The fleeing man closes blast doors in front of the pursuer. The lion man looses an arrow, which pierces the blast doors, and protrudes on the other side.

A man looses an empty bow at his foe, and the victim flies into the wall as an arrow.

At a touch, or thrust towards, of a hand or wand, a man is destroyed by being made into a flock of birds.

At a touch, or thrust towards, of a hand or wand, a blade shoots out of a man’s back and through the chair or post his back is against.

Two sword blades come out exactly opposite each other from within a person’s body. Two knife blades come out opposite each other from within a person’s limb, head, hand, or foot.



What do you think of these ideas? What are your favorite ideas? Do you have any similar ideas? Have you seen similar ideas anywhere? Have you seen similar ideas in other authors stories?

Does anything confuse you? Do you have any questions? Do you have any suggestions?

Critique, I pray you!


I made a Pinterest board for pictures that would be inspiration for shape shifters, so here is a link to it:
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I have a parallel thread to this in the sub-forum for my Otherworld, here:
http://www.holyworlds.org/fantasy/viewtopic.php?f=108&t=8244

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 Post subject: Re: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: October 10th, 2013, 3:07 pm 
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Wow...sir, your imagination needs help. :rofl: kidding! Well, I really liked the one where the two guys held hands and the one turned into a sword. That was a really cool visual in my brain. I liked the bird and arrow stuff, too... :cool: it was all pretty cool, actually. A little graphic, disturbing, and gross, but really cool.

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 Post subject: Re: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: October 11th, 2013, 1:28 pm 
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Thank you Lady Abigail!

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
the one where the two guys held hands and the one turned into a sword. That was a really cool visual in my brain.
That is interesting. What did the men look like? Where were they, do you think? What were they wearing?

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
A little graphic, disturbing, and gross, but really cool.
Which thought do you think was the most disturbing? If you do not mind, that is.

I think for me it was (you do not have to read it) it was the image of someone lying on their side with a sword blade coming out of their back, with their front unwounded, and the blade slowly drawing back inside him.
I imagine it on a dusty, unpaved city street, with the sun blazing down.

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Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes wrote:
Thank you Lady Abigail!

Uh...for what? Saying your imagination needs help? :rofl:
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Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
the one where the two guys held hands and the one turned into a sword. That was a really cool visual in my brain.
That is interesting. What did the men look like? Where were they, do you think? What were they wearing?

Um, well,...*ponders deeply* I don't think I can tell you unless I go story mode, so...bear with me... ;)
Two men walked slowly across the grim, corpse-strewn battlefield. The sun was rising, the sky just turning a chalky blue. The first man, standing a few inches above his companion, had straight sandy brown hair that brushed his shoulders. A few days' growth of stubble was on his jaw. His features were a bit rough, though handsome. He was dressed in a hip-length brown tunic, belted at the waist, and light brown pants. An empty sword-sheath hung from his belt. With a barrel chest and strong biceps, he looked every inch a warrior. His turbulent honey-colored eyes gleamed as he scanned the field. "There's not one left of the enemy." he murmured. His voice was rich, though tired.
His companion looked up at him. He was slight, with wispy, pale brown hair and a wan complexion. His mysterious dark eyes flicked nervously from his friend and apparent master's face to the surrounding area, then back again. He was dressed in a simple white knee-length tunic, and tan pants. He carried no weapon, nor a container for one. "Are you sure?" he replied. His voice was reedy, but held a hypnotic quality.
A shadow fell over the field, and the taller man tensed in alarm. He extended his right hand towards his companion.
The dark-eyed man grasped it without hesitance and in a flash of silver he was gone.
In his place, a rune-etched sword was gripped in the warrior's strong hands.

:roll: That was long and drawn out, but you asked, so...XD What did you see?

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Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
A little graphic, disturbing, and gross, but really cool.
Which thought do you think was the most disturbing? If you do not mind, that is.


For me, I think it was the one with the creepy guy with swords for eyes... :pale: *shudders* that's just... :P I'm imagining the man standing in an elaborately decorated, very plush hall; all palefaced like he's never been outside, with a black hood. A man enters, and all of a sudden these swords come out of the creepy guy's eyeless face and stab him, then they retract, blood running down his face like tears. ...EW!!!

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Hitler and flamingos will always remind me of Abi.
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I think "IDK ask Gael she'd know" is the story of everyone's life... :D
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You kill people, Gael. D: How can I not die over that?
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 Post subject: Re: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: October 27th, 2013, 1:15 am 
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Hello again! Sorry for the delay.
Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
I don't think I can tell you unless I go story mode
Story mode is a good idea. I like your story...

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The first man, standing a few inches above his companion, had straight sandy brown hair that brushed his shoulders...An empty sword-sheath hung from his belt...His turbulent honey-colored eyes...
His companion looked up at him. He was slight, with wispy, pale brown hair and a wan...His voice was reedy, but held a hypnotic quality.
These pieces stood out to me, especially that the shape shifter's voice was reedy, that was perfect.

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He carried no weapon, nor a container for one.
It is my favorite idea that you point this out, though instead of container you could have said holder or sheath, or said, "he had no weapon, or any place to carry one."

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
That was long and drawn out
Really? Well, if there was any that you skipped out I would like to see it!

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
What did you see?
I do not think I saw as much as you did, most of what I saw was the movement.

They seemed to be standing at the edge of a yard behind a large workshop, at a steep slope entangled with long grass. There was frost on the grass, and it was a winter sky.

The man who was to wield the sword had a barrel chest, and close cut hair; he looked like Jean Gabin, who played Jean Valjean in the French 1958 film of Les Miserables (which we have in English dubbed).
http://catalogue.drouot.com/images/perso/phare/LOT/97/7450/23.jpg
http://www.lassothemovies.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/02/Les-Miserables-1958.jpg

Or like Russel Crowe, who played Robin Hood in the 2010 film (which I have not seen, but I saw the posters for it).
http://www.scenicreflections.com/files/Robin_Hood_2010_Wallpaper_JxHy.jpg
http://iphone.wallpapersus.com/wallpapers/2012/12/Russell-Crowe-as-Robin-Hood-Robin-Hood-20101-1136x640.jpg

The other had a short, round beard that surrounded his mouth, and dark, waving hair that came past his ear. His face seemed older, and more submissive, more learned, and less dominant, than his handler; and his clothes were more clean.

This is the nearest I found to a picture of what I was imagining:
http://www.gutenberg.org/files/26129/26129-h/images/illus001.jpg

They are both dressed in workmen's clothes, probably those of smiths.
A criminal looking band of men, scantily dressed in dark clothes, run together from some abandoned buildings and gather at the foot of the hill, looking up at the two men.

The handler turns to the other and holds out his hand, and the other immediately clasps it. The handler's arm dips with the weight of a sword that is nearly man high, and he brings it up before him, and begins stepping down through the grass.

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
For me, I think it was the one with the creepy guy with swords for eyes... *shudders*
Ay, I was going to choose that one. The one I chose, with the blade vanishing into the man, was equal to it for me because of the image of it, and I sort of wanted to point it out because it was only less obvious than the swords in the eyes.

One thing that would be less obvious about the swords in the eyes though, would be the idea of a dangerous blind man, like Pew in Treasure Island, and the strange idea of someone who is blind because he never opens his eyes.

I imagined him as wearing various things, he never carries weapons, and usually gropes rather than taking a blind man's stick. In the heat he would wear a weather beaten hood to keep off the sun.

Another strange image I have of him is of him with his back turned, for instance, if he is shielding a boy, and you can see his empty hands at his sides. A molester approaches him, and you hear a sword pass through the enemy's throat, but you do not see the blind man's hands or body move. When the enemy falls to the ground, the blind man turns around - and his face is now covered in blood.

I do not imagine him talking much. He may even be mute as well as blind, and uses sign language. Perhaps that is why he avoids using a stick: to keep his hands free.

Anyways, thank you for your story!

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PostPosted: October 27th, 2013, 5:24 am 
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Tsahraf ChahsidMimetes wrote:
Hello again! Sorry for the delay.
Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
I don't think I can tell you unless I go story mode
Story mode is a good idea. I like your story...

No, it's okay. O.O really? :blush: thanks!

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The first man, standing a few inches above his companion, had straight sandy brown hair that brushed his shoulders...An empty sword-sheath hung from his belt...His turbulent honey-colored eyes...
His companion looked up at him. He was slight, with wispy, pale brown hair and a wan...His voice was reedy, but held a hypnotic quality.
Quote:
These pieces stood out to me, especially that the shape shifter's voice was reedy, that was perfect.

Really? Uh...Thank you! X)

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He carried no weapon, nor a container for one.
It is my favorite idea that you point this out, though instead of container you could have said holder or sheath, or said, "he had no weapon, or any place to carry one."

Oh, okay. *giggles* that's what happens when I write things past midnight...

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Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
That was long and drawn out
Really? Well, if there was any that you skipped out I would like to see it!

:shock: no, there's no more. I didn't steal the idea to make a story around it, I saw the idea, know that I'm terrible at summarizing, so posted what I saw as a story. That is all. :)

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
What did you see?
Quote:
I do not think I saw as much as you did, most of what I saw was the movement.

...There was frost on the grass, and it was a winter sky. ...
The other had a short, round beard that surrounded his mouth, and dark, waving hair that came past his ear. His face seemed older, and more submissive, more learned, and less dominant, than his handler; and his clothes were more clean...
...The handler's arm dips with the weight of a sword that is nearly man high, and he brings it up before him, and begins stepping down through the grass.

Wow, first, I really liked the frost on the grass...I could hear it crackling and snapping as the criminals came up. I also like how the shifter looked less dominant...it's like, just something in his expression shows that he is not the leader...it's cool. I also like how the handler's hands dropped a bit with the weight of the sword. I'm used to a foil, so that little note never would have occurred to me. :D

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
For me, I think it was the one with the creepy guy with swords for eyes... *shudders*
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Ay, I was going to choose that one. The one I chose, with the blade vanishing into the man, was equal to it for me because of the image of it, and I sort of wanted to point it out because it was only less obvious than the swords in the eyes.

One thing that would be less obvious about the swords in the eyes though, would be the idea of a dangerous blind man, like Pew in Treasure Island, and the strange idea of someone who is blind because he never opens his eyes.

I imagined him as wearing various things, he never carries weapons, and usually gropes rather than taking a blind man's stick. In the heat he would wear a weather beaten hood to keep off the sun.

Another strange image I have of him is of him with his back turned, for instance, if he is shielding a boy, and you can see his empty hands at his sides. A molester approaches him, and you hear a sword pass through the enemy's throat, but you do not see the blind man's hands or body move. When the enemy falls to the ground, the blind man turns around - and his face is now covered in blood.

I do not imagine him talking much. He may even be mute as well as blind, and uses sign language. Perhaps that is why he avoids using a stick: to keep his hands free.

Anyways, thank you for your story!

Did you just say "Ay"? :rofl:
Pew in Treasure Island...*shudders*
Ah, that's possible. I didn't imagine him being able to speak, just because it adds to his creepiness.
It was fun to discuss this with you! (And you're welcome, but I liked yours better!)

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Hitler and flamingos will always remind me of Abi.
Kya Lightwing wrote:
I think "IDK ask Gael she'd know" is the story of everyone's life... :D
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You kill people, Gael. D: How can I not die over that?
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Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
that's what happens when I write things past midnight...
*shakes head *

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
so posted what I saw as a story. That is all.
That is alright, I just wanted to make sure you did not trim out any of the description to make it less "drawn out."

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
I'm used to a foil
Interesting! I shall make a note of that.

Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
Did you just say "Ay"?
Ay! Actually I started saying it a lot all of a sudden just a few months ago. It was strange because I do not think there was anything that could have caused it.
Lately it has morphed towards the Japanese "Hai!" since we watched Seven Samurai.


Lady Abigail Mimetes wrote:
It was fun to discuss this with you!
Thank you for discussing it!
I have a few more ideas to add to the list soon, if you are interested.

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These two ideas I forgot about when typing up the post:

A band of men enter a fog. There is silence, but when the fog lifts they all lie dead, pierced by arrows.

A man becomes a cloud of arrows shooting outwards, shredding his clothes from the inside.


These are some more ideas that came to me afterwards:

A flight of arrows is shot into the water, and becomes a shoal of fish swimming fast. When porpoises or seals come to eat them they transform into a cloud of arrows underwater, piercing the attacker, and becoming fish again. They rise from the water as a flock of birds, and fly over a ship, becoming arrows and raining down.

A man tries to escape his foes by swimming or diving. Arrows are shot into the water next to the bank, becoming small fish. The fish hunt the man, charge him, and pierce him as arrows. When his body floats, pierced by arrows, the arrows become carrion birds and fly back to the army.

A man wearing a brown cloak with a peaked hood, whose voice is the sounds of a lion, is chasing a man in a metal corridor. The fleeing man closes blast doors in front of the pursuer. The lion man looses an arrow, which pierces the blast doors, and protrudes on the other side.

A man looses an empty bow at his foe, and the victim flies into the wall as an arrow.

At a touch, or thrust towards, of a hand or wand, a man is destroyed by being made into a flock of birds.

At a touch, or thrust towards, of a hand or wand, a blade shoots out of a man’s back and through the chair or post his back is against.c

Two sword blades come out exactly opposite each other from within a person’s body. Two knife blades come out opposite each other from within a person’s limb, head, hand, or foot.


I made a Pinterest board for pictures that would be inspiration for shape shifters, so here is a link to it:
http://www.pinterest.com/tsahraf/the-shapeshifters/
Tell me what you think of the board here, or you can comment on the pictures on the board itself.

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PostPosted: October 30th, 2013, 12:45 pm 
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Hmm, very interesting. When the shapeshifters shift into the weapon, do they still have a will? Can they control their movement or are they completely controlled by their wielder?

I had a similar idea to the one that you and lady Abigail were discussing. When I have more time I could tell you about it...right now I am supposed to be doing school. :P

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 Post subject: Re: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: October 31st, 2013, 4:35 pm 
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Abiah Idhrenniel wrote:
When the shapeshifters shift into the weapon, do they still have a will?
That is a very good question!

let me think...

I do not believe they can change direction in their weapon forms, but shape shift into man or animal forms to do so. A perfect example is the flight of arrows shot into the sky, which transformed into a flock of birds in order to each pick out a target, and then transformed into arrows again once they were directed at their targets.

Another perfect example would be the man who kicked the enemy in the chest, and transformed into a sword thrust through the enemy, and then again into a man standing on him once he fell.

And this inspires me for continuations of this idea, for example:

A man swings his arm, as if to strike his foe with the side of his arm, but he vanishes, and a sword swings against his foe; he reappears as the enemy falls.

A man strikes an enemy with his fist, but he becomes a sword at the moment before his fist touches, and the pommel strikes the enemy in the forehead; he reappears with his fist extended as the enemy falls.

A man wraps his arm around his enemy's throat, transforms into a sword, and the enemy falls with his throat cut, and the man standing behind him.

A man's enemy strikes him with a sword, but the man becomes a sword which flies ringing through the air, and becomes a man again, landing as if from a leap.

It occurred to me that this shape shifter could stay underwater for days by transforming into a sword and sinking to the bottom. Though, if the sword rusted, he would be sick when he shifted back. In the same way, the fitter he would be the cleaner and more sharp as a sword.

It would also feel strange feeling a warm hand become a cold sword hilt, or a hard sword hilt become a sinewy hand.

"...a man fires an arrow into an army: the first man is thrown aside by a hand, the arm of another is struck by a head, another is beheaded by a kick in the throat, another is stabbed through the face by a hand, another is shouldered aside, another kicked aside, and a man deep in the army is pierced by an arrow."
This would be different, I think, and maybe one or two other ideas that are similar. These seem to be flying as an arrow and striking out as a human at the same time. I do not imagine their human forms being invisible, rather it is as if you do not have time to see them. But I see the hand or foot that strikes most of all, so it must have nothing to do with the speed, but perhaps with the intent.

The first idea, of the man be pinned to the ground, I imagine the human form, and the arrow form, as practically invisible. I do not know where the arrow goes in that case.

In their cloud form they seem to have control of their movement. They would have to have some control over their nature as clouds anyway, or they would do what all clouds do: dissipate into nothing, or precipitate into rain. Though they would look like a water cloud, they would behave like a cloud of microscopic gnats.

Abiah Idhrenniel wrote:
or are they completely controlled by their wielder?
I can imagine if someone shot the arrow in a direction it did not want to go, it would be difficult to change direction, but unless the archer suddenly pointed a different way before he shot he would probably never shoot the arrow in the first place.
When he released it, hands would slowly bring the string and bow to a neutral position, and an arrow would fall to the ground. If the archer could even find the arrow in the first place...

I can imagine if someone swung the sword in a way the shape shifter did not want, the sword would suddenly become a man stepping back - or laying his hands on the wielder's throat.

The shape shifter could also lay his hand on the empty sheath and become a sword sliding into it.

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right now I am supposed to be doing school.
I would not want you to rush your school work, but I look forward to hearing that idea!

Sorry if this is getting confusing; these are a lot of ideas, and more coming always!

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 Post subject: Re: Cobhaic assaults: Shapeshifter and Arrow kind, mainly.
PostPosted: December 1st, 2013, 10:23 pm 
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Interesting.
So, question, the people with the ability to manipulate this cobha, would they be a sort of special forces? Or do they act independantly?

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