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 Post subject: History of Zeldia: First Draft
PostPosted: November 22nd, 2011, 10:06 am 
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Remember, this is a draft. I will be posting a more detailed version later :)

Zeldia was a flat planet with no color, no living things, nothing. But at some moment in time, the strangest of things happened. A rainbow passed over the planet and brought everything it has now. The rivers, the forest, the sky, the clouds, the ground, the creatures, were all brought by the color. Then, the Zeldia that now exists was formed. Many animals were created as well as the Zeldians. They spoke a language called Zeldon and were very peaceful. But soon after, the humans began to notice that many of them had extremely different personalities, and although they did not fight with anyone, they decided to separate due to their differences. And thus, the tribes of Zeldia were created. They divided into 3 tribes: The Zeewoks, the Zeeans and the Zeeacs. Each of the tribes got one-third of the planet as their region. They were all peaceful with each other, but they were just simply segregated. The Zeewoks were the artistic tribe. They focused on drawing, acting, dancing, singing and everything that has to do with the arts. The Zeeans focused on strength and battle strategy. They know that there will always be peace between the tribes, the just think that they can never be too careful. They spend their time training, making plans, and exercising just in case it is ever necessary. And last but not least, the Zeeacs. They are the magical tribe. The only kinds that can wield magic, and actually, they depend on magic for their basic necessities like cleaning, making food, transportation, and they spend their time training their magic skills. All of the tribes are very close to nature and the animals. They are allowed to visit the other tribes but for a limited time unless given a special permit, for example, if it is a Zentai meeting. Zentais are like the mayor’s of Zeldia. There are three, one for each tribe. They are chosen like this:

To be a Zentai, you need to have a variety of skills based on your tribe. For example, if you are from the Zeewok tribe, you need to be great at each kind of art. If you are a Zeean, you need to be extremely strong and able to make great battle strategies. And if you are a Zeeac you would need to be able to wield magic greatly. Only males can be Zentais in the Zeean tribe, but in the Zeewok and the Zeeac tribes, both males and females can be Zentais. The elections are every 2 years in Zeldia. Up to now, there have only been 3 different Zentais because many times, Zentais are reelected. These are the Zentais in order:

Zeewoks: Ciegor-male- (38 years as a Zentai)
Maliana-female- (46 years as a Zentai)
Eranon-male- [current Zentai] (16+ years)

Zeeans: Arron-male- (42 years as a Zentai)
Sebion-male- (48 years Zentai)
Rogu-male- [current Zentai] (10+ years)

Zeeacs: Blintor-male- (34 years as a Zentai)
Unonum-male- (57 years as a Zentai)
Lisiar-female- [current Zentai] (9+ years)

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 Post subject: Re: History of Zeldia: First Draft
PostPosted: November 24th, 2011, 8:16 pm 
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Very interesting! Basing the world's creation on color is unique. Will you be posting more of the history - i.e., what happens after? :D

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Depends...if I can THINK of what comes after! :rofl:

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PostPosted: November 27th, 2011, 11:31 am 
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*laughs* How about you work on that? :rofl:

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PostPosted: November 27th, 2011, 12:08 pm 
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:rofl: I will, but right now, I have Lady Elanor poking me about a drabble...

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That Lady Elanor's a good one. ;)

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Haha, yeah. Oh, and this is way off topic but I am going to buy Red Rain!!! :dieshappy:

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As a prompt for the history, how does it affect the afterlife and sin and that? Is there a fall of Man or something like that or has that not occurred yet?

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Hehe :) I love rainbows. :dieshappy:

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I think this is really cool. It's really unique and different.

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Thank you so much! That's what I was going for. ;)

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You're welcome.

It's good to go for original.

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Yep, that is the best quality. ;)

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