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Seabird Mimetes [ November 15th, 2011, 9:35 pm ]

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Attention all Warrior fans!

I've com to realize that this forum needs a Warrior rpg (role playing game, same thing as a collab) I am ready to start up the main plot and tie things together but I need people who are willing to dedicate to an advanced fanfic! I'll wait until after NaNo for those who are busy with the moment. Just let me know if you want to participate~! There is one issue though... The concept of Starclan is quite a bit against what we see as the truth, God's truth. I vouch that Starclan be removed from this entirely. Seeing as I have planned out the setting so far, the clan of dead cats doesn't seem important anyway. We need to get the Creator in there somehow!

I need a basic bio of your cat (or cats. 3 cats per person maximum)
name-
appearance- (photo optional if not recommended)
clan(rouge, loner, or kittypet acceptable)-
rank (if any)-
brief history-
personality-

In my opinion, I wanted to do a continuation of Bloodclan. Erin Hunter kinda left them for dead after the death of Scourge and the small bit of it left in the manga with Ravenpaw. I wanted to expand on their world. Surely some of you have wanted to do this some time or another! Let's revive Bloodclan from the grave! So here is my cat's bio...

Name:Vine
Appearance: young tortoiseshell she-cat with pale green eyes.
Clan: Newbloods (a new Bloodclan)
rank: leader
personality: She is a cruel tyrant who would steal food from a starving clan or worse. Keeps her cool and holds her head pridefully through her turf.
brief history: Vine is the daughter of the great Scourge himself. After her father died in the battle with the forest cats, she attempted to gain control, though she was quite young. It wasn't so much of a taking over, it was more of a fending for herself until she could grow and become stronger. A loyal warrior from the glory days of Bloodclan completed her training. Eventually she managed to attain a small group of followers from the fragmentary and dead Bloodclan, which she eventually renamed the Newbloods. Several odd things happened as Vine cleared out a place for her group of rouges to settle and make a permanent camp. One, the clans in the forest moved out as their forest was torn down. Two, when a dog was attacking the group, the Band's leader saved her mentor's life, giving the she-cat a new and crazy feeling. She didn't know what to do with it and so our story begins...

Referring to the above.... I don't know where to go from here. Add your characters and get this thing going~!

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Author:	Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ November 19th, 2011, 8:57 am ]
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summons Jenny or Kironi Unfortunately I lack the time to do this eru

Author:	Kironi [ November 19th, 2011, 1:38 pm ]
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I'll join! Is this in the new territory or old? name- Dappleleaf appearance- Dappled black and white she-cat with green eyes clan-ThunderClan rank - Warrior brief history - Her parents are two loners, Jenny and Ravenpaw. Her mother brought her and her littermates to ThunderClan to be raised after hearing Ravenpaw talk about his time there. Her littermates are Featherwing [tom], Emberfoot [she-cat], and Splashtail [tom] personality- Very friendly and funny. Will break the warrior code if absolutely neccesary. Very loyal, is somewhat shy at first but warms up to other cats very quickly. Is quick to react to danger.

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ November 19th, 2011, 1:48 pm ]
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I was thinking of having the clans move out so that it only involves Bloodclan and whatnot but this will work too. This is the old territory (personally, I'm a fan of the first series). So... The time frame is after Scourge is defeated but before the clans move to the lake. Glad to have you aboard!

Author:	Kironi [ November 19th, 2011, 1:55 pm ]
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I like the first series the best. It's just one major plot line, unlike the fourth series. Anyway, is BloodClan still all evil and stuff, or are they just trying to survive with the other Clans or something?

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ November 19th, 2011, 2:22 pm ]
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The Newbloods, the last bit of Bloodclan, are indeed evil at heart. Vine is their leader. However... there is one person whom she has respect and care for. This is her mentor. Like I said earlier, she saved his life. She is used to killing but when she does save her mentor's life (name not to be determined at the moment. He is an OC that is free for taking) she questions herself why she did. She wants answers. This leads to a vulnerability to good or bad influences because she is willing to listen to someone if they have an explanation.

Author:	Kironi [ November 19th, 2011, 2:36 pm ]
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hmmmm.....Interestinggg..... Can we have more than one cat?

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ November 19th, 2011, 2:43 pm ]
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Seabird wrote: I need a basic bio of your cat (or cats. 3 cats per person maximum) Up to three cats for now.

Author:	Danko Sandai [ November 22nd, 2011, 7:20 pm ]
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Name:Raindeath Appearance: Young large, Ash grey, Tom cat. with a mangled ear and scares across his face. Clan: Newbloods. Rank: Deputy Personality: Is cruel and heartless except when it comes to; rouge, young cats. Brief history: Rainpaw (RainDeath )was a rouge cat for most of his life, He was kicked out of ThunderClan at an early age. After leaving ThunderClan, Rainpaw fell in to the river, A RiverClan warrior pulled him out, after pulling him out the RiverClan Deputy attempted to kill RainPaw, After a horrific battle Rainpaw pulled out the winner. After seeing there deputy killed the warriors of RiverClan chased Rainpaw away. After chasing him out of there territory, a group of five warriors left to go and kill him, Once they found Rainpaw they waited until midnight and ambushed him. He was waiting for them and when he killed one warrior, the other warriors where about to kill him, when a different rouge cat jumped in and the two of them killed the rest of the warriors. The other rouge cat named Shadowtail, died from his injuries. The battle left him with many cuts and bruises, and a torn ear. After slaying the warriors, he changed his name to Raindeath. He remained a rouge for the next few years until he found Newbloods. At night he sneaked in and was stealing some food when Vine walked in!!! Vine was furious, And they battled until Vine knocked over Raindeath and was about to rip out Raindeaths throat when She thought. "I could use a good warrior like him." and spared his life. Raindeath happy to be alive did not challenge but became the best warrior in Newbloods (Except for Vine and her deputy.) After a battle Vine deputy was killed, Vine elected Raindeath to become her new deputy.

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ November 22nd, 2011, 7:25 pm ]
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Wow... Raindeath was sure tough to kill those warriors. I honestly think that's a bit overexaggerated... But other than that, I think he is a great addition to the story. (Don't forget, you can make 3 characters maximum and introduce them at any time, as long as it is a rational and reasonable time.)

Author:	Danko Sandai [ November 22nd, 2011, 7:30 pm ]
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Oops I forgot to add something about that part thanks.

Author:	Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ December 3rd, 2011, 10:58 am ]
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wishes he could do this

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ December 3rd, 2011, 6:44 pm ]
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shoos away Eru No spamming the thread please! (But yes, I wish you could too)

Author:	Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ December 10th, 2011, 10:52 am ]
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OK, I can't promise how much I'll be able to do, but I'll stop spamming at least Name: Ripplepelt Appearance: Young grey tom. Strange white stripes across his back legs and tail. Clan: Skyclan Rank: Warrior Personality: Loyal and extremely devoted to his clan. He is careful to please other cats but is loyal to the clan above all else. Brief history: Ripplepelt was formerly known as Crinkle. He was a kittypet in Twolegplace near the Skyclan gorge. He was apprenticed to Sharpclaw and became a full warrior later. When Skyclan returned to the forest he went with them. Expected to become deputy when Sharpclaw retires. His mate is Tinyflower. (OK, a little bit of a side note. Kironi and I came up with an alternate Warriors which essentially wipes out the second, third, and fourth series and keeps only the first series and the super editions. From this, we've had SkyClan return to the forest (or the gorge north of Highstones, which we made up.) and a new clan called StormClan be introduced where Twolegplace used to be in the forest (or SkyClan's old territory). I don't know if we'll use any of that here, but I can follow whichever story route y'all prefer ) eru

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ December 15th, 2011, 10:49 am ]
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I had a reply ready and then it got deleted... Daw... Anyway, Eru, what happened to your precious name?!?!? I'll add you to the PM list. I do like this idea of Skyclan coming back. Although Stormclan... They are living in the Twolegplace? Am I correct? Riverclan was always my favorite clan so I'll make a character for that. Name: Shadowpaw Appearance: A black tom with other black markings (like a panther) and silver eyes. Clan: Riverclan Rank: Apprentice Personality: Clever and sneaky. He's a great hunter and has potential for battle strategy. Shadowpaw would be willing to break the warrior code for a family member. Brief History: Shadowpaw is the son of Heavystep and Dawnflower. He was a bit mischevious when he first became an apprentice so his apprenticeship was delayed another moon. He has been an apprentice for about a moon now and has yet to go to a Gathering. His siblings are Yellowpaw(A light ginger she-cat) and Bearpaw(A dark tabby tom with broad shoulders).

Author:	Andrew Amnon Mimetes [ December 15th, 2011, 1:20 pm ]
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@Seabird: StormClan is Kironi's clan, so we can talk to her about that I'm fine with either way though, personally Andrew

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Seabird Mimetes [ December 17th, 2011, 12:01 am ]

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Re: Attention all Warrior fans!

So, I realized something. I've developed other characters but I don't plan to role play them... I now declare a new type of character, MCs!!

This stands for Minor Character. It's a character you want in the story but you don't plan to use him/her to narrate it. For example...

The angry she-cat batted Iris in the head. "Fool!" Iris, with blue eyes flickering with fear in the moonlight, recoiled back.
Vine continued her verbal onslaught. "You are no longer a mear pet, doing whatever you wish! Do not sympathize with them!"
She swished her tail in annoyance. Iris should be grateful that her Clan had mercy on her when her twoleg threw her out, not sneaking out to meet with a Stormclan cat!
Vine's pelt quivered. How cold she had grown against love, her heart encased in ice.

See here, we see that Vine is narrating in third person as I am used to doing. She is also interacting with a cat named Iris, who is in the story, but never narrates it. In other words, we won't be able to listen in to her inner thoughts unless she states them in dialogue.

MCs can be anyone from Firestar to a lone rouge that is only brought up once in the entire story. In other words, any character that is not narrating is a MC. There is no need for a bio if the character already exists. If you choose to create one you don't have to make a bio either. You can make as many as you want Just mention them as you deem suitable like I did above. All we really know just by this bit that she's a Bloodclan cat who snuck out to meet a Stormclan tom. If this is true or not... I cannot say for I do not know.

In other words, you don't have to make an entry for all the cats you create, only for the ones you narrate from. Remember... There is a max of three at this point! Maybe four... Depends when the writing process starts and I can determine the level of complexity to our ability as a whole to keep up with the story coming from so many views.

One more thing.... I got some nifty stuff from my dad not too long ago and went crazy with it. Here is a picture I call "Brace for the Storm". It depicts Vine leading an ambush against Stormclan. The illustrations are mine! Sorry that Stormclan is dropped into this... Let me know if the presence of another clan is an issue. Ownership of Stormclan goes to Kironi.

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Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ January 7th, 2012, 1:15 pm ]
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So... Ahem Do... Any of you want to begin to write? It's been almost a month since anyone replied...

Author:	Abiah Idhrenniel [ January 21st, 2012, 5:27 pm ]
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Raises hand eagerly Can I join even though I probably won't be able to do a lot?

Author:	Seabird Mimetes [ January 21st, 2012, 5:31 pm ]
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Sure. The others haven't responded for months though... T.T Don't know if this is worth your time. You might as well just look for a site just for Warriors role-play. I don't think the others have the time... shrugs I've pmed them and none have responded. You can try...

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