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 Post subject: The serpents
PostPosted: October 28th, 2011, 3:51 pm 
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The serpents: Are a race of very tall (ranging from 7 to 10 feet. :shock: ) They are transparent and appear to be a running water in the shape of a tall human. D:
Quite evil :evil: , keep to themselves.
Just started to develop them, please help me to develop them.
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 Post subject: Re: The serpents
PostPosted: October 29th, 2011, 3:58 am 
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Ok, so some questions. Why are they evil, what do they do to make the evil and did they turn evil, or have they just always been so?

Where do they live?

What sort of food do they eat?

So do they look exactly like humans but with transparent skin?

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PostPosted: October 29th, 2011, 2:23 pm 
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Lady Elanor wrote:
Why are they evil, what do they do to make the evil and did they turn evil, or have they just always been so?
They have always been evil. they thirst for war and blood shed.
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Where do they live?
They live by the ocean, (When I'm done my map you will know exactly where they live.)
Danko Sandai wrote:
So do they look exactly like humans but with transparent skin?
They look kinda like humans but with long limbs, long body long neck, ect. They walk very graceful and they are quite beautiful/handsome. There whole body inside and out is transparent, and if you think of clear water flowing down slowly.
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What sort of food do they eat?

They eat pretty much anything that's edible.

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Aah ok! Thanks for the answers!

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Good questions. :)

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:) I hope they helped a little!

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Lady Elanor wrote:
I hope they helped a little!

That you did. Thanks:)

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So do they have to stay near or in water?

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So do they have to stay near or in water?

Mainly by water. But there really good swimmers. ;)

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Could you also give a reason as to why they are evil? And also, do they live near fresh water, salt water, or can it be in both? ;)

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Green Mist wrote:
do they live near fresh water, salt water, or can it be in both?

They can live in any type of water.
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Could you also give a reason as to why they are evil?

They wish to destroy all the other races in my world. But they are scared to move inland to fight, thus they haven't waged war, yet!!!

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Oh, now I understand. Is there a reason as to why they wish to destroy the other tribes?

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They hate everything that doesn't have to do with water. And they also want to rule all the water races.

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What other water races? Do these serpents wear any kind of clothes? Can you see right through them or can you see their organs (like a glass frog. look it up if you don't know what it is)?

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Seabird wrote:
What other water races?

Soon you will see some of the other water races on here. ;)
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Do these serpents wear any kind of clothes? Can you see right through them or can you see their organs (like a glass frog. look it up if you don't know what it is)?

They don't wear cloths because you can only see there outline, really.

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That is very interesting Danko! And how to they plan on ruling the water races? Do they want to start a war? Do they use weaponry to try to take over?

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They plan on taking over by enslaving the other water races by force.
They have special weapons that are made out of a special metal that is really strong. There main weapon is called "Dalino" they are very long and twisted/gnarled, but it has a sharp edge.

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Ohhh alright! I have no further questions. ;) Hope I could help you develop them more!

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Thanks. :twisted: :twisted:

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You are very much welcome. :D

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