Login | Register







Post new topic This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies.  [ 25 posts ] 
Author Message
 Post subject: The Jianuo
PostPosted: August 30th, 2011, 3:18 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
The Jianuo are basically small foxes, roughly a little smaller than a grown housecat. They look very similar marking-wise, but coloration is different. Fur color can be blue, brown, red, anything. But white is always present with the other color. Eye color is usually varying shades of brown (sometimes with a little bit of red).

The Jianuo can understand Human speech, as well as speak it. They more or less have their own language, but it's only spoken, not written (for now, anyway).

The Jianuo are omnivores, but, due to their small size, can only handle hunting smaller prey. However, if hunting in large groups (at least ten), they can take down something larger (deer, boar, etc.), but it takes nearly twice that to haul it it back to the rest of the pack.

They make their home where there is a cave that has wide tunnels. At night, the Jianuo head into the tunnels and sleep there, but during the day, everyone is outside.

If a fox is born with amber eyes, it is an indication that they will obtain a special set of techniques. As the amber-eyed pup grows, it will learn how to stiffen its fur into points as sharp as needles, the ability to fire bright glowing orbs of light (during which its eyes glow the same color), and the ability to shapeshift, but its amber eyes do not change color during a shapeshift. Those who have such abilities call themselves Asceil, or the Secret Gaurdians.

The Jianuo with these abilities almost always become a guardian, of sorts, to others, whether it be Human, Dwarf, or someone else. In order to keep everything organized, they created the Asceil Order. These members are assigned to various people, to ensure that they are kept safe, usually because they are meant for something larger. But only under extreme circumstance do the guardians show themselves. They remain hidden, and when they are no longer needed, they go back to everyday life with the Jianuo.

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: August 30th, 2011, 4:04 pm 
Captain
Captain
User avatar

Joined: September 23rd, 2010, 3:42 pm
Posts: 9085
I really like the Jianuo. They have a lot of unique and interesting traits. :D

_________________
~ Jonathan


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: August 30th, 2011, 7:33 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
Thanks. :) I adjusted their size a bit. They're a work in progress, but I figured that the one I have as a character (Tynx) should have his own culture and people.

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 4th, 2011, 9:47 pm 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: August 30th, 2011, 10:38 pm
Posts: 862
Location: On the wing
Very nice. I also love the name. :D Do they have a pack leader? And since they are intelligent, then are there also evil Jianuo? :twisted:

And if names are the problem then I shall give you random stuff to work with.

Jabkino
Ounaij (opposite spelling of Jianuo. Thought it could be useful)
Wheygra
Reodijin
Qolahar

I love coming up with random stuff~! :)... :D... :dieshappy:... :rofl:

_________________
Author of the forthcoming book, Peacekeeper's Essence- ‎"But the path of the righteous is like the light of dawn, That shines brighter and brighter until the full day." Proverbs 4:18

Be the leaf ~Ow~O

Follow me on my blog and visit my world, Rantis!
Oh, and check out my latest topic: Character Themesongs

Me: "Are you trying to implant a watermelon in my belly?"
Mom: "No, an apple tree."


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 5th, 2011, 12:52 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
This is very fascinating, and very unique. How exactly do you plan on using these in your story?

I think foxes are an underused creature in fantasy. :D They are so cool!

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 5th, 2011, 3:27 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
Seabird- They do. Pack leaders are decided much like a king is. If the leader dies, his son takes his place. If he had no son, then a close male relative becomes the leader. If he has no close male relative, the Jianuo decide who to put in his place. The deceased leader's family is removed from the line of 'royalty', so to speak, but they are treated with the utmost respect, and given comfortable rooms in the home cave.

Ooh, Ounaij sounds cool. I've gotten a name already, though. May I use this one for sometihng else?

Airianna- I really don't know. I have so many stories in my head, I don't know what'll get written and what won't. :) I just figured it'd be cool to give these guys some development. Tynx is my only Jianuo. and before I worked out the Jianuo, he was the only one. So right now, I don't have definite plans to use them. But who knows. :)

They are. :) I've always liked foxes. Rarely ever seen one, but they're still cool.

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 5th, 2011, 6:02 pm 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: August 30th, 2011, 10:38 pm
Posts: 862
Location: On the wing
Go right ahead~! That's why I'm here! To help others brainstorm wacky and new names! ;)

_________________
Author of the forthcoming book, Peacekeeper's Essence- ‎"But the path of the righteous is like the light of dawn, That shines brighter and brighter until the full day." Proverbs 4:18

Be the leaf ~Ow~O

Follow me on my blog and visit my world, Rantis!
Oh, and check out my latest topic: Character Themesongs

Me: "Are you trying to implant a watermelon in my belly?"
Mom: "No, an apple tree."


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 5th, 2011, 10:09 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
*chuckles * I am always impressed by all you guys who don't create for something specific. I create for specifics. The idea of developing something I may never use.... you guys amaze me.

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 6th, 2011, 3:06 am 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: September 27th, 2010, 11:08 pm
Posts: 416
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
This is very fascinating, and very unique. How exactly do you plan on using these in your story?

I think foxes are an underused creature in fantasy. :D They are so cool!
I totally agree. Not enough foxes in fantasy. Foxes are awesome, and your Jianuo sound very interesting... I totally want one lol. Dennis McKiernan, however uses them occasionally in his Mithgar novels. Pysks often ride them, called Foxriders, and one of his stories is based on one Fox rider in particular. Voyage of the Fox Rider. I had thought of using some kind of Fox Riders myself in my story, but didn't want to rip off one of my favorite authors lol. So no foxes for me. I can't wait to hear more about your Jianuo though. They seem pretty cool. :D


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 12th, 2011, 9:13 am 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
I like your wolf, 6strings. :D

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 12th, 2011, 3:45 pm 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: September 27th, 2010, 11:08 pm
Posts: 416
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I like your wolf, 6strings. :D
Thanks Airianna :) I've been going over all my previous chapters the last week or so and once I'm done I'll be working on the story again. :D I'm planning on more writing of Runner in the coming chapters. So if everything goes according to plan, he'll be a busy wolf.


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 15th, 2011, 4:33 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
*rubs hands together *

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 22nd, 2011, 12:36 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: July 24th, 2011, 11:21 pm
Posts: 3255
Location: The wide open prairies under a cloudless blue sky
That's a sweet idea, Aris! :D I like your Jianuo. Foxes are underused in fantasy, that's for sure!

_________________
~AzlynRose~

Devote yourselves to prayer so that your conversations may be full of grace
and seasoned with salt, with the purpose of glorifying Christ Jesus in everything.


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 28th, 2011, 4:47 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
I edited the post. :) Now the Jianuo with the special abilities and such have a anme! Well, they've had one, I just haven't brought myself to edit it in yet. And the spelling might be a bit off, I can't find the paper on which the name was written. :P But I'm pretty positive it's close.

6stringedsignseeker- I've never heard of him. *Puts on mental list to look up later* :)

Azlyn- Thanks. :)

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 28th, 2011, 4:53 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
He's adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 29th, 2011, 1:36 am 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: September 27th, 2010, 11:08 pm
Posts: 416
I want one :)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 29th, 2011, 4:31 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
I looked, but didn't find one at the local pet store. :'(

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 30th, 2011, 12:47 am 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: September 27th, 2010, 11:08 pm
Posts: 416
Airianna Valenshia wrote:
I looked, but didn't find one at the local pet store. :'(
figures... more pet stores need to start selling something other than dogs, cats, and goldfish.


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 30th, 2011, 10:03 am 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
See, my point exactly! :D

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 30th, 2011, 10:41 am 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: July 24th, 2011, 11:21 pm
Posts: 3255
Location: The wide open prairies under a cloudless blue sky
That's very cute, Aris! :D

_________________
~AzlynRose~

Devote yourselves to prayer so that your conversations may be full of grace
and seasoned with salt, with the purpose of glorifying Christ Jesus in everything.


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: September 30th, 2011, 4:01 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
Haha, thanks. :) I'll see about getting you tickets to Allare to adopt one. ;)

Azlyn- Thanks. :)

I'm working on the education process the Asceil (Jianuo with special abilities) go through in order to become a Secret Gaurdian. And maybe their age in comparison to human years.

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: October 1st, 2011, 1:57 pm 
Captain
Captain
User avatar

Joined: October 3rd, 2010, 2:17 pm
Posts: 8188
Location: Kansas City, MO
Can I have one too, please? These are delightful! Foxes are amazing, and making them a smaller size adds a special appeal. The name is excellent, too.

I'm a bit confused as to how the "guardianship" part works, though. Are they assigned to a human because the Jianuo need protection, or because the Jianuo is destined to serve the human? Do they live with the human the entire time, or only when called upon?

_________________
Website | Twitter | Instagram
My Patrons get free books and merch!
Latest Release: Aurelius (Red Rain #3.5)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: October 1st, 2011, 2:13 pm 
Honor Roll Member
Honor Roll Member
User avatar

Joined: March 2nd, 2010, 3:32 pm
Posts: 2723
Location: Usually in HW chat
Thanks, Phili. :)

A Jianuo who is assigned to a human is usually his/her gaurdian because that person needs protection (often because the person is to become a part of some special event). The council in the Asceil Order more or less has th ability to discover things like that. Often though, the Asceil assigned to protect is assigned to a leader (an Elven king, for example). The Jianuo themselves don't need protecting (they're trained for that before they are assigned to someone). The Order assigns any Jianuo who is readily available, and their skill in being a gaurdian.

The Jianuo are only a person's guardian for as long as they are needed. If a Jianuo's charge is young, they remain that person's guardian until he or she is able to defend themselves. Or, if the person is a political leader (or some kind of leader), the Jianuo are usually assigned because that leader could be in danger. Once danger is passed, the Jianuo gradually leave gaurdianship.

Only in extreme cases is a Jianuo called to be a permanent gaurdian. I thought I had a system for that, but I can't seem to remember what it was. :P Once I do (or once I figure out a new one) I'll post it. :)

_________________
Lord You are the thunder to my whisper
-Only You (Young Oceans)

That's what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again.
-Saving Mr. Banks


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: October 2nd, 2011, 6:07 pm 
Foundational Member
Foundational Member
User avatar

Joined: September 8th, 2010, 10:11 am
Posts: 13933
Location: Where ever my computer happens to be.
Yay! *awaits tickets in the mail *

_________________
Airianna Valenshia

The Rainbow in the Storm- My Blog

Be careful of your thoughts; guard your mind, for your thoughts become words. Be guarded when you speak, for your words turn into action. Watch what you do, for your actions will become habits. Be wary of your habits, for they become your character. Pray over your character; strive to mold it to the image of Christ, because your character will shape your destiny.

Ideas can germinate from the smallest seeds. Collect those seeds, and let them grow in the back of your mind. You may be surprised by what finally blooms.

When God takes something from your grasp, he's not punishing you. Instead, He’s opening your hands to receive something better. The will of God will never take you where the Grace of God will not protect you.

Works in progress:

The Diegosian Mark, 115,600 words (Preparing for Publication)
The Diegosian Rider, 121,400 words (Finished)
The Diegosian Warrior, 15,000 (In Progress)


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
 Post subject: Re: The Jianuo
PostPosted: October 31st, 2011, 8:36 pm 
Writer
Writer
User avatar

Joined: August 30th, 2011, 10:38 pm
Posts: 862
Location: On the wing
*Steals tickets*

Mine. :twisted:

_________________
Author of the forthcoming book, Peacekeeper's Essence- ‎"But the path of the righteous is like the light of dawn, That shines brighter and brighter until the full day." Proverbs 4:18

Be the leaf ~Ow~O

Follow me on my blog and visit my world, Rantis!
Oh, and check out my latest topic: Character Themesongs

Me: "Are you trying to implant a watermelon in my belly?"
Mom: "No, an apple tree."


Top
 Offline Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies.  [ 25 posts ] 


Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
cron