Here is the long-awaited creation of Murel.
Comments are appreciated.
In the beginning there was nothing save Criel. He spoke and with His Word made the Lão to worship Him and to be His hands and feet. Criel spoke and with His Word raised out from Himself dust and used His hands to mold the dust into the earth, and the earth into Murel. Criel discharged his power and painted the skies above, the seas below, and the rock between. Criel poured out his creativity and crafted the plants and animals of the forests, the plains, and the seas. Criel took the flame within him and squeezed into existence Verida, Nurela, and the other heavenly bodies. Criel spoke and with His Word created the pheonix and the gryphons to be His messengers in Murel.
Lastly, Criel and His Word took great care to mold a man and woman from the dust of Murel. After Criel created the man and woman He placed them in Floreí, a forest paradise that contained the best of all Criel had created. Then Criel breathed on all He had made and gave Murel life.
Criel spoke to the newly made man and woman, " You shall be called Adiram and Erodém because you were created for Me and for each other. You are my dearest creation, for I have created you in My image and I can not commune with any other of my creations as I can with you."
Criel then took aside Adiram and led him into the middle of Floreí to a hill with a cave. On the crest of the hill was a fresh water spring. Criel then spoke to Adiram "Here I charge you with dominion over all that I have created with the exception of the inside of this hill. The spring on this hill is for you and your wife’s use. The water is the sweetest in all of Murel and will give you eternal life. But remember, you may go anywhere throughout Murel, but if either you or Erodém enter this mountain you will die."
Then Criel looked at all He had made and was pleased with it.
Like Jonathan said, it's a well done allegory of the Creation story. I liked it! 
