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PostPosted: January 21st, 2011, 10:26 pm 
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Eartea is populated by strange beings. The Kins of Huri, the various untainted tribes of mankind, the now-extinct perfect humanoid race of Wushtat, and the demon possessed who pose as gods.

But all these are, in some sense, human.

There is another race. They are created in the image of God, yes; they have free will. And they have souls; they are not animals, but sentient.

Yet they do not have dominion over the earth and creatures.

The dragons were created to serve mankind. Our fall became their fall. But our Savior is their Savior.

When Mankind fell, the Almighty commanded that they, who were less tainted by evil than men, would be freed from the authority (but not the dominion) of the Wushtat so that they could be fully devoted to serving mankind, who were now helpless and vulnerable to an evil that corrupted all their works.

The dragons became slaves. Those that resisted mankind's dominion became twisted by their rebellion and were more evil than the men they fought. They were the Man-Eaters, most hated of all monsters.

Some were banished by men for teaching the Word of the Almighty and fled to the healing protection of the Wushtat. They became the Abandoned Tribe-forever separated from the object of their earthly existence. Their tribe is the greatest enemy of the false gods, but they hold little sway with humans. They live a life of mourning, separated as by death from those who seem like both their children, their fathers, and their brothers.

All dragons remain the enemies of the false gods. Because of their incredible size and distinct separation from both animals and humans, the Huri call them Giants or Titans.

In terms of mass, the body of a dragon is about the weight of an elephant. Naturally the wings must be simply gigantic.

There are two kinds of dragon.

The Lupinshkat are actually mammalian. They are hairy, and their bodies tend to be more bulky and short. The wings are not quite large enough for flying but allow for great leaps and some gliding, as well as providing a distinct advantage in battle. Some have said that they bear a small resemblance to wolves, and their head does tend to be more wolf-shaped than reptile shaped.

The reptilian form of dragon is refered to as Drashkat. Although this is properly a term for both kinds, it has been used traditionally only for the reptilian kind.

This kind is more like the dinosaurs and dragons you are familiar with. Elongated bodies, large tails, and fire-lungs. In fact, the Drashkat do not "breath fire". Instead, they actually spit a highly flammable acid. As they spit two chemicals from different organs in their throat mix. While the chemical travels through the air it reacts and forms the acid. In warm climates it generally ignites upon contact, in cool weather the acid can still burn through limb and body. The Drashkat can produce another substance which negates the acid, and is the only way to put out a fire which is burning the acid.

The Dragons cannot produce the human consonants. They speak the vowel-only First Tongue, which most humans are no longer familiar with.

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 Post subject: Re: Drashkat-The Dragons
PostPosted: January 24th, 2011, 1:04 pm 
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I don't think I've seen dragons done this way before. The comment on their speech is rather interesting. It would be a reasonable language for less versatile tongue.

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PostPosted: January 24th, 2011, 4:04 pm 
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Neil of Erk wrote:
The Lupinshkat are actually mammalian. They are hairy, and their bodies tend to be more bulky and short. The wings are not quite large enough for flying but allow for great leaps and some gliding, as well as providing a distinct advantage in battle. Some have said that they bear a small resemblance to wolves, and their head does tend to be more wolf-shaped than reptile shaped.

These are cool. I've thought about mammalian snakes, but never mammalian dragons.

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Riniel Jasmina wrote:
I don't think I've seen dragons done this way before. The comment on their speech is rather interesting. It would be a reasonable language for less versatile tongue.


It's not that their tongues are less versatile, but their mouths are shaped differently. Some dragons have adopted an alternative language to First Tongue, and it has many more consonants that human languages. Dragons have more ridges, flats, peaks, and places of articulation in general that humans. But they can't form the SAME consonants as us.

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These are cool. I've thought about mammalian snakes, but never mammalian dragons.


I've had them in my head for a while...I don't know where they came from. I seem them as a cross between wargs and dragons.

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For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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I like the idea of mammilian dragons. And of course you HAD to make the fire-breathing scientific! :D
So the rebels are evil, but still fight the false gods? Why?

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Griffin wrote:
I like the idea of mammilian dragons. And of course you HAD to make the fire-breathing scientific! :D
So the rebels are evil, but still fight the false gods? Why?


The rebel dragons set themselves up as false gods or superior forces to humanity. Because of this, they are automatic enemies of the demonic conspiracy. In truth, however, they become tools of the demons, which they use to further their own false pantheon, making the dragons into "the enemies of the gods" and driving mankind to fight them, creating a divide between creatures meant to be allies, and turning servant against master and master against servant.

Yes, fire-breathing had to be scientific. That's the way I roll, you know.

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Redemption is to be purchased, to have a price paid. So I was redeemed from my master sin, and from justice, which demanded my death. For He paid the price of sin by becoming sin, and met the demands of justice by dying for us.

For all men have a master. But a man cannot have two masters. For he will love one and hate the other. You cannot serve God and sin. So I die to the old, as He died, and I am resurrected to the new, as He was resurrected.

Note: Ebed is Hebrew for bondsman, Eleutheros is Greek for unrestrained (not a slave).


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