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Author:  Arias Mimetes [ October 31st, 2010, 9:08 pm ]
Post subject:  The Dra'can

First off, what do you think of the name of the race? It was a random thing that popped into my head as this idea was forming.
I wrote this really late last night, so I probably forgot some things. Feel free to ask questions! :D It's a partial scene; one of the Dra'can is speaking.
(ignore the fact that this is probably poorly written :P I just had to write it down before I forgot it)

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“We aren’t vampires. You’d better accept that right now. We don’t eat blood, we simply need it to survive. Just like you humans. We have this condition… blood somehow disappears from our veins, and when injured we bleed profusely. If we manage to keep from getting hurt, which is harder for us than you humans because our skin is thinner, we can go about a month without having to add more blood to our systems. The thing is, we do have to get that blood somewhere. That’s where you humans come in. We’ll find someone to be a donor of sorts. After a month we’re pretty weak, and need every drop we can get from a person. And the blood has to be fresh… no scavenging after battles. The human mustn’t die before their blood is ours.
Humans cannot become one of us. They die after their blood is gone, of course. And it’s impossible for a human to mate with a Dra’can. We have enough troubles reproducing of our own kind. Half-breeds do not exist. It’s not a disease you humans can catch. It can’t be spread. It’s just the way we are.

I found a very kind man once. I would have taken him for my mate if it were possible. He willingly gave up his blood, once a week. It seems that if we add the blood more often, we need less of it. He barely stayed alive, but he kept me alive as well. Alas, I was wounded very badly one day, and he gave his life to save me.

That’s why you’re here, my friend. I don’t enjoy killing innocent people, but it must be done. There’s no other way for my kind to live.

And really, when you think about it, we’re no different from you.” She smiled coldly. “You humans do whatever it takes to live. No regard for others. This is simply a physical manifestation of that, when you think about it. The will to live drives all of us. I must say, though… this is a need for us. You humans and your selfish desires almost make me not care that you must die for us.”

Author:  Kiev Shawn [ October 31st, 2010, 9:12 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Hmm... The name vaguely reminds me of Dracula if I think about it, but not a whole lot. I'm not sure if you want that or not.

They are creepy! I'll probably have some questions when it's not late at night. ;)

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ October 31st, 2010, 9:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Ah... okay, thanks. I figured there was something like that, but I didn't bother trying to actually think of a name yet.

Yeah, they are a bit creepy XD But I'm really not seeing them as an evil race at the moment, though there are plenty of them who aren't all that nice.

Author:  Lady Vilisse Mimetes [ November 1st, 2010, 12:33 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

How long can they live? (i.e. are they immortal if they can keep enough blood or can they die from old age?)
Why only human blood? Why not animal blood?
Do they eat anything other than blood?
Do people know about them or are they secretive?
What's their role in the world? Do they just go around trying to keep enough blood or do they actually have skills or abilities?

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ November 1st, 2010, 9:58 am ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Vilissë wrote:
How long can they live? (i.e. are they immortal if they can keep enough blood or can they die from old age?)


I would say not much longer than most humans, although it's a little easier to kill them.

Vilissë wrote:
Why only human blood? Why not animal blood?


The thought never occurred to me :P And it reminds me too much of the "vegetarian" vampires from Twilight.

Vilissë wrote:
Do they eat anything other than blood?


Yes, they still eat anything a human would.

Vilissë wrote:
Do people know about them or are they secretive?


People have heard of them, but they Dra'can can blend in with the humans if they need to, and a lot of them do.

Vilissë wrote:
What's their role in the world? Do they just go around trying to keep enough blood or do they actually have skills or abilities?


I haven't worked out where they live or what other races are near them, but I'm thinking that some of them protect the people that live near them or venture into their land. The ones that live with the humans have jobs like they would, and some of them are hired as assassins. Maybe...
Good question, I'll have to think about that one a bit more.

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ November 1st, 2010, 12:15 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Vegetarian Vampires? Okay, that sounds weird.

Your Dra'cans are creepy. Although I like the way the female Dra'can justifies their need for human blood and contrasts it to humans. Very interesting concept.

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ November 1st, 2010, 1:19 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Airianna Valenshia wrote:
Vegetarian Vampires? Okay, that sounds weird.

Yeah, they eat animal blood instead of killing humans.

Airianna Valenshia wrote:
Your Dra'cans are creepy. Although I like the way the female Dra'can justifies their need for human blood and contrasts it to humans. Very interesting concept.


Thank you ^^

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ November 1st, 2010, 3:41 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Huh, okay... You can tell I didn't get into Twilight...

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ November 1st, 2010, 3:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

I watched the first two movies because I was curious as to what everybody was so excited about, but most of my knowledge is due to having friends that read the books.

Author:  Airianna Valenshia [ November 1st, 2010, 3:50 pm ]
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Ah. Well thank you for clearing up my confusion. I'd never heard that aspect of Twilight before.

Author:  Lord Kieren Mimetes [ November 12th, 2010, 3:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Creepy. I guess there aren't many out there or humans wouldn't last long. How do they kill the humans, I mean if there more easily hurt wouldn't the "donor" kill them? In the description she kinda disproves her point that humans are the same, that they'll do anything to stay alive with her example of someone she loved. That's kinda horrible that she would just kill him like that.

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ November 12th, 2010, 10:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Griffin wrote:
Creepy. I guess there aren't many out there or humans wouldn't last long.


No, there aren't a lot of them, and they don't go around killing humans for the fun of it.

Griffin wrote:
How do they kill the humans, I mean if there more easily hurt wouldn't the "donor" kill them?


Good point... hmm. *thinks*


This is becoming a difficult matter XD

Author:  Aemi [ March 9th, 2011, 3:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Whoa. Reading your, or rather, her, description of them gave me creeps and chills. They sound like something small children would fear in the dark.
How do they get the blood? Do they bite?

Author:  Arias Mimetes [ March 12th, 2011, 10:23 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: The Dra'can

Yes, unless/until I can come up with something a bit more interesting. Without being overly creepy.

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